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    MallaJong1's Stories (8)

    • Spike's Scootaloo
      Spike asks Scootaloo out on a date.

      9,246 words · 9,350 views · 1,061 likes · 32 dislikes
    • Banana
      Friends discuss how bananas can be quite dangerous to the average pony.
      2,620 words · 1,846 views · 244 likes · 6 dislikes
    • Spike's Rainbow Dash: The Final Chapters
      Spike and Rainbow Dash continue their love battle.
      14,471 words · 5,933 views · 594 likes · 27 dislikes
    • Spike's Vinyl Scratch
      Spike assists Vinyl Scratch the Deejay.
      6,459 words · 5,918 views · 483 likes · 21 dislikes
    • Spike's Pinkie Pie
      5,040 words · 7,745 views · 617 likes · 31 dislikes
    • Spike's Dating Simulator
      7,587 words · 9,603 views · 645 likes · 42 dislikes
    • Spike's Spike
      4,866 words · 1,616 views · 109 likes · 6 dislikes
    • To Be Strong
      1,396 words · 2,251 views · 169 likes · 21 dislikes

    Spike has developed a crush on Pinkie Pie. He's been able to keep it hidden pretty well. But when the truth of his affections slips out, Pinkie Pie's reaction befuddles everypony. She offers to go out with him! Why? Because it could be fun! Can Spike survive Pinkie Pie's spontaneity? Or will he collapse under the madness? Who knows?!

    (Party Of One Alternate Route)

    (Contains Adult Humor)

    First Published
    23rd Oct 2012
    Last Modified
    29th Oct 2012

    Comments ( 316 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    It's Pinkie Pie's turn, everypony! Yet another ship I believe should be better explored. In the next installment: The real surprise is revealed at Pinkie Pie's surprise party. Spike's Pinkie Pie will contain mature humor. Hope you enjoyed this. :)

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    The humor is augmented.

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Fun!

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    i love it... ship twilight next...:ajbemused:

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Here we goo woohoooo

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Awesome as always! I've come to expect epicness from any story you upload

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I think you're supposed to tag as mature if you have sexual references and adult humour.

    But nonetheless, pretty good. The addition of sexualism was unexpected, and I am curious to see how far you take it and how it performs.

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Brilliant.  This is gonna get amazing.  :pinkiehappy:

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #10 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    :yay:So much YES!!! To think I just stumbled upon your Spike's Rainbow Dash (love it) yesterday and now this! I am going to enjoy this.:pinkiehappy:

    _

    Oh god I cant quit smiling!

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1493536

    Humor undergoing augmentation is a good thing, yes? Hahaha. Thanks for the comment, my friend!

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::rainbowderp: AWESOME

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    All I can say is that this is an instant fav and I need more.

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I was gonna do the whole "Well that escalated quickly" meme but then I remembered that Pinkie Pie :pinkiehappy:

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Oh, Narrator.

    Don't worry, we still love you.

    Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaanyway:

    IT HAS ARRIVED, YES! IT HAS A GREAT START, YES! I NEED MOAR, YES!

    All that aside:

    Oh, the shock on her face!, Twilight Sparkle, the original planner, thought. Priceless!

    Give him an incentive, and he’ll talk!, Pinkie Pie figured.

    I have the same comment for both of those sentences. That is, I don't think you can put a comma after an exclamation mark. :twilightblush:

    Every little thing she did was exquisite its own way.
    .

    Think you may be missing a word here.  Every little thing she did was exquisite in its own way, perhaps? :raritywink:

    :twilightsmile:

    #16 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Damn it! You beat me too it! Oh well, I'll give this a read later. Good job on the feature, amigo.

    #17 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Okay are you going to reupload Spike's Daring Do as well, now that you got started on this story?  Just to simply have it there?

    #18 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    This is gonna be funny i just know it.

    #19 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    oh my god...

    #20 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Woot!

    #21 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I'll laugh so hard when coincidentally Twilight finds the magazine and pics. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    #22 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I I favorited this before I even read it, beacause I knew it would be good., and it was AWESOME!:rainbowdetermined2:

    #23 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1493907

    Thanks for the edits, my friend. When it comes to the commas, however, I've found that one is able to place one after a declarative punctuation mark if one is referring to a thought. This method I rarely used, due to the fact that most use italics to create thoughts.

    In all my stories I've used the same method to display thoughts. :)

    Thanks for the comment! The Narrator was touched. I was told so. Hahahha!

    #24 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Ahaa you can never have enough Spike

    :moustache: <--- Pimp

    MallaJong your fiction never fails to make me laugh :rainbowlaugh:

    #25 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1494047

    If you find my pieces comedic, then I am satisfied! Thank you for the comment, my friend! I am so happy you enjoyed this one! Yeah!

    #26 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    We seriously don't have enough SpikePie fics out there! Hope to see Twilight or Fluttershy shipped next with Spike. :moustache::heart::pinkiehappy:

    #27 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1494069

    Seriously, bring on the SpikePie fictions! Let's get sexy in this house!

    #29 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    OMIGAWSH!!!

    BEFORE I READ... ah wanna say that this idea is sooo KEWL~!!! :3

    :rainbowkiss:

    #30 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    This is pretty great. I had an idea for a similar premise, unfortunately I'm no writer.

    #31 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1494045 Welp, I guess you do learn something new everyday. Wouldn't have known that about commas. :pinkiehappy:

    #32 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1493566

    I thank you, my friend! Your expectations shall not falter! I just try to write stories I want to see come into existence. Hahaha! It really all started with Spike's Rainbow Dash, I guess.

    #33 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 23h ago · · ·
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    Acting like I don't exist, huh? Sometimes I just want to punch your teeth in, Spike. Jerk.

    I was laughing like Scotty throughout the whole chapter!

    Favorite! :rainbowlaugh:

    #34 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 23h ago · · ·
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    I think Spike might be about to have some sort of mental breakdown.....

    Oh well, he'll get over it! :rainbowlaugh:

    Pinkie/Spike is easily my second favourite Spike shipping, nice work MallaJong, that was awesome!

    #35 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 23h ago · · ·
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    #36 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 23h ago · · ·
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    ...strange writing style.

    Was that build-up for a joke?  Where Pinkie breaks the fourth wall...?

    *stares blankly* :facehoof:

    The premise is interesting... I think I'll fav for the updates.

    Hopefully this story doesn't become a bad joke (i.e. that story "Pinkie goes on a Diet").

    This story has potential... to be something amazing.

    #37 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 23h ago · · ·
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    I agree, GET ON THAT ASS BOY!

    #38 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 23h ago · · ·
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    >>1494165

    Hahahahahahaha! I love that laugh! Thanks, BronyCup! Your comment had me laughing once again!

    #39 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 23h ago · · ·
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    Pinkie Pie is best pony.

    So, have a mustache :moustache:

    #40 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 23h ago · · ·
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    Oh god his confessions...

    And Pinkie's Pinkieness.

    That's it, this is faved, liked and tracked. Oh, and the typical :twilightsmile:s I give out to good stories.

    #41 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 23h ago · · ·
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    Spike liked-liked Pinkie Pie but loved Rarity, dang Spike's got swag I'll give him that much, having feelings for two mares wohoo you go Spike! :yay:

    >>1494069 You're right there aren't a lot of SpikePie ships out there, that's why it's so special. :moustache::heart::pinkiehappy:

    (Look someone has made a YouTube Video of this couple which I shall now upload)

    #42 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 23h ago · · ·
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    I nominate Mallajong to being King of Spike Shipping on FIM:Fiction.

    The reason why he should be named King of Spike Shipping is because he uses absolutely no clop in any of his stories while still making them exciting to read! Maybe some adult humor here and there, but... that's forgivable.

    Anyway here is your crown.

    ...Sorry due to cutbacks we had to "downgrade" our crowns to this. Also here is a triple whopper with cheese.

    Enjoy those calories!

    #43 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 23h ago · · ·
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    >>1494204

    That was hilarious! Thanks for the comment, my friend! :)

    #44 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 23h ago · · ·
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    Love it

    #45 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 23h ago · · ·
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    Hold on, are you going to do shipping fics with Spike and each one of the ponies? Because I'd like to see that.

    #46 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 23h ago · · ·
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    >>1494097 I smell potential clop fic. :pinkiehappy:

    >>1494204 Cool!

    #47 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 23h ago · · ·
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    >>1494216

    What an honor! I cannot believe it's come to this! Oh, no, here come the tears! *Sniff* *Sniff* I am just so happy!

    But you couldn't throw a Subway Sandwich my way? Really? I'm a Veggies guy!

    Hahahahahahaha! Thanks for the comment! I laughed hard!

    #48 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 23h ago · · ·
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    >>1493541

    The many levels of wrong that is SpikeLight...

    You are basically shipping mother and son.

    :ajbemused:

    #49 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 23h ago · · ·
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    Hosting a new celebratory bash ever few days

    I think you mean every few days.

    :yay:Yay my first correction ever!

    Getting a confession out of interrogation wow I am so surprised no one has ever done that before(for all I know) even in mangas or anime you are a righting God!

    #50 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 23h ago · · ·
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    >>1494193 That's why they pay me handsomely. :trixieshiftleft:

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