Interesting...

Im gonna keep my eye on this.

>>14914651491465 thanks you

>>14916961491696 yeah no problem, I'm sure This wont end up as the usual generic HiE, there's... something about this fic.

If pulled off correctly this could become a great fic.

Nice....... im gonna see where this is going.

I was expecting the OC's name to be Timemaster.

You pulled this one off well! Keep it up!

Have my watch, and a up-vote!

Whew, my second story is going well.

I WILL IMPROVE ALONG THE WAY!

>>14948101494810 This is pretty good....... do the next chapter as fast, and everyone will be happy . Oh, and have an apple !

>>14957141495714  well tomorrow I may release the next chap. If not, wait till friday

Well... The segments seem a little rushed but other than that it still seems to be pretty good, keep up the good work.

I get favs, but no thumbs-up.......

When listing which races the amphityon did not mind having a son of you said 'unicorn' twice

>>15000231500023 Whoops epic fail on my part. thank you for correction

Nice work....... have an apple .

Okay! I started reading and then THIS

griffen

>>15037321503732 How would you like to be my pre-reader . I won't blame ya if you say no.

Whoohoo! I finally made it to this point!

(Read this if you already read the 4th chapter)

-You see Hercules is not really Hercules, his name is Victor Von ___

Do not post who the person is please

All I will say is that he is a badass comic book character.

Nice..... have all my apples! You deserve them!

>>15065581506558 Huh, never been a pre-reader before.

How does that work, because I would love to accept.

>>15093021509302 I send you a chapter via message, you find wrong things, message me the fixed chapter back, I double- check. Then I submit.

>>15093751509375 sounds good, I'm in.

>>15093831509383 I will send you the chapter soon. The school bus is coming! ( it takes me less than 2 hours for 2 thousand word... Imagine the summer possibilities)!

>>15093891509389 cool.

Well this story certainly seems interesting. It seems to be a well though out plot but it does need a tad bit of editing and you might need to sort out some of the speech because some of it seems to be nonsensical . But yeah, colour me intrigued.

Nice! Please go on and have a stache . you deserve it.

>>15206951520695 No thanks, I already have a tuxedo.

*50 mares jump on me*

Awww yeeeeaaaah.

alright.

I am gonna go on my small family vacation. Be back in a week or two.>>14957141495714

My moustache deserves more

>>15747051574705

Ill make more after chapter 6 of my other story.

Be patient!

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Him?

hang on I found this pic on google images

Image: http://maaretta.files.wordpress.com/2011/01/creep012-powerpuff-girls.jpg

>>15944421594442 NO!

But I did base the personality of Doom on Him though.

He wants mortals to only call him 'Him', for no mortal is allowed to speak his name.

>>15945391594539 cool