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Commissar-Rarity's Stories (14)

Journey
A journey's end.
4,350 words · 1,694 views · 117 likes · 2 dislikes
Kukures
Lyra's strange dreams begin to flood into real life and jeopardize her life.
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The Frightenmares
Behold the Great and Powerful Trixie! Medium AND Exorcist! Hire her before the demand is too great!
4,544 words · 517 views · 39 likes · 0 dislikes
The Destroyer of Worlds
Rarity battles a demon-possessed sewing machine that Sweetie Belle bought.
4,312 words · 353 views · 24 likes · 0 dislikes
Something, Something Giant Hat
1,521 words · 589 views · 34 likes · 1 dislikes
The Trixie Zone
6,887 words · 115 views · 17 likes · 0 dislikes
Darkness in the North
26,201 words · 255 views · 16 likes · 0 dislikes
The Adventures of Jetpack Commando Lyra
1,219 words · 293 views · 16 likes · 1 dislikes
Boast or Bust
4,725 words · 87 views · 10 likes · 0 dislikes
The Cutie Mark's In The Details
1,167 words · 488 views · 14 likes · 1 dislikes

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The Bleakmire Account by Commissar-Rarity

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Upon the disappearance of my dear uncle, I discovered the following documents underneath a floorboard in his house. It tells a strange story indeed, and I find myself turning to you for assistance. I realise you do not know me, but rest assured I have word from Princess Celestia Herself that you are an authority on strange occurrences. I beg for your assistance in this matter.

Additional Tag: [Cosmic Horror]

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First Published
28th Oct 2012

Last Modified
28th Oct 2012

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#1 · 29w, 22h ago ·

Lovecraftian style fic. I wrote it for the Nightmare Night contest but derped and discovered I was a day off and had missed the deadline, so I didn't send it in (it wouldn't have placed at all though).

I I think I did okay. I like the icky descriptions of horrific monsters because I like writing that kind of stuff.

Lolsternater

#2 · 29w, 13h ago ·

Well. I guess you should... run?

DocImpossible

#3 · 3w, 14h ago ·

Honestly, if you were going for lovecraftian horror, you should have drawn it out a bit more. It's all about the gradual aspect. Lovecraft never made a character go from sane to insane without an immense amount of introspection and detail on the subject. But I suppose it still has that sort of feel to it. So not bad I suppose. I'd give it a 3.5/5

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