When Spitfire finds herself grounded on the team injured list just before a show in Manehatten, she prepares for her life to crumble around her. The experience leads her to come across Rainbow Dash, temporarily managing the Manehatten weather teams. The two fliers will discover that sometimes it takes the darkest moments of our lives to find the brightest ones.
The Sequel: Feathers of Blue and Gold is out now!
Review in progress by Inky J
Video Review by Goomba Brony!
Video review by the wonderful ChaoticSeven!
Edited by the wonderful Taxus, Sorren, and Sojourner.
I do my own cover art.
Chapters (43)
You've got me interested. I'll be waiting for more.
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Thank you for the comment! More will be on the way soon, this is my project when I need a break from my other story.
Hm.... I like how this reads. Story seems solid, and I can't see many (If any) grammar problems.
Fav'ed and tracked. Keep it going.
~SkeeterTL
A couple of errors: I saw one instance of Soaring and strait should be straight.
She drifted to the inside of their aerial track, --> comma should be semicolon
where-with-all --> wherewithal
half-to-death --> half to death
his grip loosening as he let her breath. --> breathe
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Thanks very much!
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Has plenty of potential. Will keep an eye on this one and see how it develops.
Good luck!
interesting, interesting...
I'm excited to read more
One Last Thrill - Slash with Myles Kennedy
Will read later - Too tired.
YAY DASHFIRE! OR SPITDASH!
Great story u just got a like and a fav
Not bad, pretty well written, can't wait to read more.
Damn. I keep coming in on good stories and have to wait ages for them to be updated. But this is bound to be good, so i eagerly await the next chapter.
nice, veary nice. I like sing the bo;ts more layed back like this. but i dont think Dash is all that younger then spit.
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I see your One Last Thrill, and I raise you Night Train
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It's only the best ship ever
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Thank you very much!
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Soon
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It's all just guesswork, but I'm kinda running on the general guess of a 3-5 year age difference. By the way, loved Time in Equestria
1493809 personal opinion, twidash is best. but this is third. behind rarispike. you never see spitdash anywhere...
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Twidash is my very close second, but good DashFire (hard as it is to find) I prefer by a hair.
1493826 very good sir... i like rarispike second because it usually has tragedy to make them see the romance. i love those types of fics
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If you enjoy more sad romance stories (pardon the shameless self-promotion) I'd recommend you check out my other story In an Instant if you haven't already.
1493924 i will
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Hope you enjoy it!
1494038 i shall
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Hope you enjoyed it! And funny enough it took me all day to realize the Dune reference in your name
This story is............. AMAZING I LOVE IT Can't wait for the next chapter .... Kudos to you
Definitely a very solid start
From a grammatical standpoint, the only thing that stood out enough to detract a little from it was one instance of "In case" being in one word. Aside from that, it's a very good setup, I'll be tracking to see where you take it.
man, and I thought Rainbow's accident was bad. not a bad start, keep up the good work. (as much as I'm embarrassed to say it, when will the sappy stuff happen?)
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Thanks very much for the comment! And as for the sappy stuff...
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i.imgur.com/ViY7j.gif Tracking
Yes. Just. Yes. This has my like, and if I could spam the upvote button, I would, but I can't, so sorry, no over 9,000 thumbs for you. But I'll be watching this... closely.
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Thanks so much! And Chapter 2 will be up tonight!
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THANK YOU!
Why is Rainbow always in Manehattan?
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Plot device I'll explain in part 3: extreme: the revenge
ohhh i can't wait to see how the convo between RD and SF goes. hopefully this ponyrazzi keeps away from them long enough
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All them manly mustaches! And I am indeed a dude
Because RainbowFire always seemed hot in my head...
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Welcome to the club, we have jackets!
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I'll wear mine proudly!
Darn, well done! But really, the author needs to write faster!
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I go as fast as I can
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Nah, take your time, it's worth ever bit of it! Nice cover art btw!
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Thanks very much! And for the record, I'm just finishing up the next chapter of my other story. After that I plan to write chapter 3 of Fire & Rain. It should be ready this weekend unless I get derailed by writers block
I'm loveing this story so far. Its well writen and not rush as I've seen all to often with fan fics. I need to stop reading these stories befor they're finished. I hate waiting. But don't rush it. Like Lazerace said its worth it.
This is exciting! I can't wait to see what comes next!
Ok, see what you meant. Well the long road is nice too. I'm gonna watch where you take this
Have to say though: I'm not a fan of cliffhanger
It's a very good build up and I wonder what reason you will give them to go out
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Thanks much for the comment, I'm actually about halfway into chapter 3 now. Hopefully I'll get that uploaded sometime today or tomorrow morning.
It is when we are at our lowest that we are subject to the greatest change.
- Aang
I just felt that kinda fitted for Spitfire.
As for the story itself; Another one on my Read Later list... There's so many xD