Cool. Straightforward, humorous and consistent, a really enjoyable read. A few nits to pick, but otherwise a nice foray into slice of life without being overbearing.

Pretty solid story. You definitely captured the "MLP episode" vibe you were going for and pulled it off in a very humourous way. I had a few minor issues, like why was there a trunk full of weapons in ponyville (cupcakes? ), but they're easily ignored given that it's Pinkie Pie .

These little one-shots are pretty good, I hope you keep up with them as well as Red Wings.

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Not cupcakes. Guncakes.

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I imagine that Pinkie Pie has a few bits of dangerous gear lying around. You never know when a badass sword that makes lightning backlight your awesome battle pose or a diamond-tipped spear will come in handy for something. Guaranteed, that sword has sliced many a cake into amazingly perfect pieces, and that spear has been used for roasting marshmallows at least twice.

And, y'know, anvil. In case of anvil emergencies.

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Glad you enjoyed the story! I had a lot of fun writing it. Mind pointing out those little nits that are oh-so-pickable? You can PM me if you like, but I always appreciate feedback.

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That is an awesome PMV. I think I've found my new jam!

Very nice story. More like that! I really liked your characterisation.

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Glad you enjoyed it!

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Y'know, when you put it that way, I can actually imagine Pinkie Pie having a whole arsenal of deadly weaponry just to cut cakes

hey not bad. vinyl as deaf though? hmmm

Oh wow, is this story really /that/ unheard of? I feel special, coming in with only 25 likes to such a cool story

Loved how you went for recreating the scenes and the feel of an actual episode! Some descriptions may honestly look a bit awkward on paper (e-paper, anyway), but nonetheless they make for cool mind images!

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Pinkie_Pie_lolface.png

And of course, awesome Vinyl is awesome. Way to Beethoven her way through music, but with wubs!

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl2.png

All in all, a very enjoyable short story. I'd say "props to you", but I guess you got that already more than a few times so Kudos! And keep rocking, good man.

Best non-standard use of frosting EVER!

I was totally expecting a "I have instruments stashed all over Ponyville, in case of music emergencies."-line.

But you can't have everything.

Great fic! Took me back to my music classes with the whole consonance/dissonance thing. Nothing like beating back evil music with good music! Pinkie was written spot-on and I enjoy the laid-back, somewhat carefree, though non-obnoxious version of Vinyl you had going on.  Well deserving of being on EQD.

I really liked this story, but it feels like it needs... more. I feel like there should be a companion story maybe outlining the music box's intentions and what happened to the ponyvilleans once they were trapped inside.

She should have given the song a title

Excellent! I can totally see this being an episode of the show, with some trimming.

And Vinyl is deaf but instead uses her senses/magic/horn as a tuner to feel music without hearing it.... that would actually be really cool if true.

HEADCANON APPLIED DIRECTLY TO THE FOREHEAD

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You are totally right. Ah well!

From the description, I vaguely expect this.

Very enjoyable and totally rad!

Vinyl as a deaf DJ is an interesting idea. Her not hearing the music but feeling it. That is awsome. This was one of the best Pinkie Pie stories I have ever read as well. They were right to put this on EQD.:rainbowdetermined2

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Basically spot on. I love Tenacious D.

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Thanks! If you like how I write Pinkie Pie, might I suggest 'Overpinking It', another story featuring Pinkie? As shameless of a self-plug as that was, I can't help but suggest it. It's longer, and it's tons more Pinkie Pie!

>>20734122073412 awsome thanks I will check it out.

This reminds me of something... I can't quite grasp what, though...

An image of a gray man, an evil melody with incredible power...