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GazingAtStarlight 200

Joined October 2012
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    GazingAtStarlight's Stories (2)

    • SoarinDash (Contest Entry)
      When Rainbow Dash is out practicing some tricks, the love of her life comes by

      1,003 words · 727 views · 20 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Story of the Princesses
      When things start going wrong for Princess Starshine and Princess Violet, chaos ensues.
      7,076 words · 118 views · 3 likes · 3 dislikes

    Rainbow Dash decided to practice some of her flying tricks late at night. When Soarin, the love of her life, come by, She tries to impress him.

    This was a contest entry for something on deviantART

    First Published
    22nd Oct 2012
    Last Modified
    22nd Oct 2012

    Comments ( 6 )

    #1 · 30w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Short, sweet, and to the point. The story was nicely handled for only 1000 words. My only gripe is that I think her move is the Buccaneer Blitz instead of the Buccaneer Blaze but that's just me nitpicking. It didn't have any impact on the story so don't worry too much. :twilightsheepish:

    #2 · 30w, 17h ago · · ·
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    Cute! I got my doctor recommened cuteness for the day with this 'd'aw' story.

    '...his brightly shining blue eys.' His eyes are actually green, but whatevs.

    #3 · 30w, 17h ago · · ·
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    Awww, twas a nice story. I'm not overly fond of insta-love stories, but this was still an enjoyable read.:twilightsmile:

    As Brony of Truth said, Soarin's eyes are green not blue. You got Dash's trick right though.:twilightsheepish:

    Just was Soarin asked if (that should be 'as')

    #4 · 29w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Thanks for the compliments, everyone. Sorry for the mistakes, I make a lot and then forget to check it :twilightblush:

    #5 · 21w, 2d ago · · ·
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    D'awwww, that was so sweet! You're making me like SoarinDash more. :pinkiehappy:

    It could have been written a little bit better, but it was good for the most part! :raritywink:

    #6 · 2w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Dashie nodded her head frantically, relishing the idea of a night of flying alone with Soarin.

    Seems like Pinkie is telling the story :pinkiehappy:

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