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Short, sweet, and to the point. The story was nicely handled for only 1000 words. My only gripe is that I think her move is the Buccaneer Blitz instead of the Buccaneer Blaze but that's just me nitpicking. It didn't have any impact on the story so don't worry too much. ![]()
Cute! I got my doctor recommened cuteness for the day with this 'd'aw' story.
'...his brightly shining blue eys.' His eyes are actually green, but whatevs.
Awww, twas a nice story. I'm not overly fond of insta-love stories, but this was still an enjoyable read.![]()
As Brony of Truth said, Soarin's eyes are green not blue. You got Dash's trick right though.![]()
Just was Soarin asked if (that should be 'as')
Thanks for the compliments, everyone. Sorry for the mistakes, I make a lot and then forget to check it ![]()
D'awwww, that was so sweet! You're making me like SoarinDash more. ![]()
It could have been written a little bit better, but it was good for the most part! ![]()
Dashie nodded her head frantically, relishing the idea of a night of flying alone with Soarin.
Seems like Pinkie is telling the story ![]()







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