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Icky Revenge by Pony-Berserker

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Comedy Random Slice of Life

Rainbow feels humiliated by Spike's trick, which made her date him. She seeks revenge.

Meanwhile, it turns out that Spike has a problem.

Can Twilight help him solve it? What cruel joke is Rainbow Dash going to pull on the little dragon?

Author's note: It's a side story to this story: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/57467/Everypony-Hates-Spike (but you don't need to read it prior to "Icky Revenge" but you can see the aforementioned trick there.)

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22nd Oct 2012

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22nd Oct 2012

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zyr1987

#1 · 34w, 2d ago ·

That is evil, and yet...

Swashbucklist

#2 · 34w, 2d ago · 2

This is nothing more than cheap Spike abuse.

Sgt. Alex

#3 · 34w, 2d ago · 2

I really don't see the point of this.

Tyek

#4 · 34w, 2d ago · 1

Awful.

gapaot

#5 · 34w, 2d ago · 1

Idiotism.

Fighting_oreo

#6 · 34w, 2d ago · 1

I like the idea, but it could've been pulled off a lot better.

I won't downvote, but know that I am upset that anypony could treat Spike this way. :twilightangry2: :applecry:

KazFox

#7 · 34w, 2d ago ·

You will do better next time

kiryuthedragon

#8 · 34w, 2d ago · 1

This... I find it mean. no offense to you, the humor factor could be considered good in a more 'harsh' manner, but it just feels like a spite fic.

It seems like this was just meant to make 1 character feel even more depressed than they already are.

Try to keep it a bit more positive, please.

For the effort, I'll give you some points. :pinkiesmile:

asylum1388

#9 · 34w, 2d ago ·

Grammar needs a lot of work.

The Dragon Warlock

#10 · 34w, 2d ago · 1

Image: http://derpy.ponychan.net/chan/files/src/134634541360.png

Spike abuse is not funny at all, EVER. :ajbemused:

Regidar

#11 · 34w, 2d ago ·

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>>14861791486179 Spike abuse is da shit. Whachu talkin' bout?

Dragon Master Spike

#12 · 34w, 2d ago · 1

>>14861791486179 Exactly!

Not cool man, not cool. While I am tempted, I won't down vote this. It seemed you at least tried.

Cast is completely out of character. Really, what's R.D motives? How did Spike "trick her"? No needed back story, no addressing of the issue, nothing's resolved, just a cruel joke.

SuperPinkBrony12

#13 · 34w, 1d ago ·

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>>14861791486179 Except in Friendship is Witchcraft, don't kill me for that. :eeyup:

sonicman501

#14 · 34w, 1d ago ·

Screw rainbow, that's some serious male problems right there! :twilightangry2:

Throw her into the abyss! :flutterrage:

With her wings tied by enchanted chains... :trixieshiftleft: :trixieshiftright:

bahatumay

#15 · 34w, 1d ago ·

There was a lot of telling. There should be more showing.

storiesatrandom

#16 · 34w, 22h ago ·

and this has likes, why? :unsuresweetie: :applejackunsure: :rainbowhuh: :ajbemused:

Pony-Berserker

#17 · 34w, 21h ago ·

>>14930941493094

More! It even has favs! :rainbowwild:

storiesatrandom

#18 · 34w, 20h ago ·

>>14936071493607 that makes, no sense.

Image: http://images.sodahead.com/polls/002551159/4659547400_makes_no_sense__img_m155ca9239d242e07e0b68c571b8e9e61_xlarge.jpeg

Metroid Prime

#19 · 33w, 1d ago ·

>>14860501486050nice dragon avatar

kiryuthedragon

#20 · 33w, 1d ago ·

>>15302721530272

Oh thank you but it's not really a dragon. It's actually Mechagodzilla/Kiryu from the Japanese Godzilla movies, Godzilla x Mechagodzilla and Godzilla Tokyo S.O.S. If you're interested in my avatar, just google "Kiryu" or "Mechagodzilla 3" and you'll get many more of them, perhaps even a link to the movies.

Metroid Prime

#21 · 33w, 1d ago ·

then why is your user name Kiryuthedragon?

kiryuthedragon

#22 · 33w, 1d ago ·

>>15303551530355

Oh it's because Kiryu can translates to "Metal Dragon" on it's own. I actually made this name a very long time ago.

I could have written kiryuthemetaldragon but that was too long or simply Kiryu (since it on itself can be translated to Metal Dragon) but that was fatr too short. So I opted to remove the metal part cause to be honest, if you saw this avatar, the metal part was kinda obvious and would be redundant.

I just like the sound of this.

XwingedwolfieX

#23 · 31w, 4d ago ·

I thought it was okay, just maybe could have used a backstory more about why and how Rainbow was tricked. But I donno maybe Spike shouldn't have cried it seems like Spike abuse.

Pony-Berserker