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Countsmegula's Stories (10)

Princess Celestia and the Laser Pointer
Princess Celestia chases a laser pointer. That's about it.
2,060 words · 3,411 views · 392 likes · 6 dislikes
The Ketchup Prank
After being pranked by Pinkie and Rainbow, Spike plans his revenge, with ketchup.
2,532 words · 1,479 views · 80 likes · 4 dislikes
Spike's Apology
A sort-of short story about Spike during Sweet and Elite.
3,807 words · 3,405 views · 55 likes · 3 dislikes
Double Dragon
Spike has an encounter with a Changeling, and now there are two Spikes!
2,272 words · 795 views · 36 likes · 2 dislikes
Spike's Ensemble
6,455 words · 1,333 views · 27 likes · 1 dislikes
One Ticket Extra
26,369 words · 2,255 views · 117 likes · 18 dislikes
Face your Fears
2,073 words · 435 views · 12 likes · 0 dislikes
Twilight Sparkle's Icecapades
6,187 words · 447 views · 11 likes · 0 dislikes
The Buzzing Pest
2,061 words · 313 views · 23 likes · 7 dislikes
A Dragon to Water
3,890 words · 1,648 views · 28 likes · 10 dislikes

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A Dragon to Water by Countsmegula

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Comedy Slice of Life

(Formatting going underway. Sorry for any changes that may happen.)

After a long trek with his friends in the Everfree Forest looking for some rare flowers, Spike comes across a pond and decides to wash himself, which have been laced with Poison Joke petals. When Spike and his friends head to the Spa to cure him and Pinkie Pie of Poison Joke, Spike becomes aquaphobic. How will he ever cure himself if the only solution to Poison Joke is water?

Comments and Criticism are appreciated.

First Published
22nd Oct 2012

Last Modified
22nd Oct 2012

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DiscoGuy

#1 · 30w, 5d ago ·

Well, well, well, you still aren't dead. This pleases me, and, if I dare presume.... THIS, will be fun. :pinkiehappy:

Pixels

#2 · 30w, 5d ago ·

inb4 featured

jdb1984

#3 · 30w, 4d ago ·

I liked that refrence to "A Series of Unfortunate Events".

fatboi1000

#4 · 30w, 4d ago ·

Do you remember when after Peewee hatched, Spike want to show his 'little bro' what it's like to be a pony?

DeiStar

#5 · 30w, 4d ago ·

So this thing has 180 votes and 4 comments, not to mention that it went from 145 votes to 180 in less than five minutes.

Something's fishy.

La Barata

#6 · 30w, 4d ago ·

>>14853591485359 Shenanigans are being called.

DeiStar

#7 · 30w, 4d ago ·

1,289 views,

180 votes,

9 faves

and 4 comments before me.

Seems legit.

La Barata

#8 · 30w, 4d ago ·

There are already screenshots, there's no point in changing the votes now, dude.

Damage's done

Horatiojones

#9 · 30w, 4d ago ·

The damage, tis done!

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Sweetie_Belle.png

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Scootaloo.png

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png

Sparkler

#10 · 30w, 4d ago ·

The formatting is painful to read - please format consistantly.

You also have some grammar issues: "Twilight does not know the forest very well, and got lost fairly quickly." shifts from present to past tense for no clear reason.

Countsmegula

#11 · 30w, 4d ago ·

>>14854071485407 Thanks for pointing that out, I'll fix it soon.

And yes, I understand that foul play is afoot. It explains how I got featured again. :P

Garbo802

#12 · 30w, 4d ago ·

Wow, that's a lot of dislikes.

That's too bad.

But anyway, it's nice to see a new story.

Countsmegula

#13 · 30w, 4d ago ·

>>14857271485727 My latest blog post explains that I've had a spam attack. The dislikes may be a result of that. I'm still looking into it. :unsuresweetie: