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Mr V 55127

Joined January 2012
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    Mr V's Stories (5)

    • Twilight Mornings
      [ 2nd person ] [ HiE ] - A very short piece about a lazy morning with Twilight Sparkle.

      509 words · 4,774 views · 217 likes · 3 dislikes
    • No Matter What They Say
      [ 2nd person ] [ HiE ] - A human's life in Ponyville is hard. Love? Well, that's even harder.
      8,080 words · 5,023 views · 233 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Something Secret
      Spike is too young. So they'll keep their love a secret.
      3,919 words · 6,226 views · 244 likes · 8 dislikes
    • Cheater
      [ 2nd person ] - Dash adds an unexpected complication in your relationship with Pinkie Pie.
      4,600 words · 2,218 views · 75 likes · 5 dislikes
    • Buttershy Kisses
      1,620 words · 1,649 views · 82 likes · 9 dislikes

    [ 2nd person ] [ HiE ]

    It's not easy being a human in Ponyville, but there's one pink pony who makes it all worthwhile.

    A story of prejudice, suspicion, and gossip,

    and a simple love that grows in spite of it all.

    First Published
    2nd Jan 2012
    Last Modified
    2nd Jan 2012

    Comments ( 36 )

    #1 · 76w, 2d ago · · ·
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    i love your fics Mr.V

    #2 · 76w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Thank you, kind sir. You have brought a friend back to me I have not seen since my grandmother's death. A genuine smile.

    #3 · 76w, 2d ago · · ·
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    love it

    #4 · 76w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Great story dude.

    #5 · 76w, 1d ago · · ·
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    me gusta

    #6 · 76w, 1d ago · · ·
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    That was incredibly well done, especially for human-shipping. Thoroughly impressed here.

    #7 · 76w, 7h ago · · ·
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    >>102069

    And I love that you love my fics.

    >>102089

    It means a lot to me to hear that.

    And to everyone else, past, present, and future, thanks for the comments.

    Each one is like opening a Christmas gift or something.

    #8 · 76w, 2h ago · · ·
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    I.... Cried, from all the happy-sad.

    Thank you. For making this. Pinkie Pie really deserved something wonderful like this. I'm glad you gave it to her.

    #9 · 72w, 1d ago · · ·
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    ....note to self: never read this while listening to Buckcherrys: without you :pinkiesad2:

    #10 · 71w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Wow. Just... Wow.

    Beautifully written is all I'll say... Excuse me while I go wash out whatever must have gotten in my eyes.

    #11 · 71w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Usually not a fan of the "human in equestria" stuff. but I actually enjoyed this alot would like to see more of it :moustache:

    #12 · 68w, 3d ago · · ·
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    just one word

    brilliant

    :pinkiehappy:

    #13 · 68w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Only one thing to say.:derpytongue2: I want a sequel to this masterpiece. I didn't really get where the rumors circulated from but I enjoyed it anyway.

    DF
    #14 · 67w, 4d ago · · ·
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    This was... amazing. I don't have words for this. This story is simply amazing. The technical skill is excellent, the feeling put forth is amazing, the pacing, the sheer lack of the common pitfalls of this kind of story, it's all just amazing. This is a shining example of a emotional piece. My emotions were going everywhere: happy, sad, angry, relieved, dread, the whole gamut.

    Thank you.

    I wasn't going to read your other fics because the summaries didn't sound interesting to me, but now I have to read them.

    #15 · 66w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I can't explain how baddly I want a sequal.

    #17 · 64w, 14h ago · · ·
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    great job man keep up the good work :yay:

    #18 · 64w, 8h ago · · ·
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    It's a nice story, just... too much real world taint in this one. :facehoof:

    #19 · 62w, 12h ago · · ·
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    this brillinat!

    but... I truly desire a sequel. This end is just too sad. happy for the moment, but sad at whole. :pinkiesad2:

    #20 · 60w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I'm under a form of confusion, it's a nice story but what did I do wrong... I don't understand...     :pinkiesad2:

    Unless that's the emotion you were trying to get us to feel?

    #21 · 60w, 1h ago · · ·
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    its just so sad! :pinkiesad2::raritycry: but happy as well great story just wish it wasent so sad:pinkiesad2:

    #22 · 59w, 5d ago · · ·
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    A wonderful piece.

    Beautiful.

    #23 · 51w, 4d ago · · ·
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    :applecry::fluttercry::pinkiesad2::raritycry:

    It's..............so beautiful!

    #24 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Lik dis if u cry evertim!!!

    But no, seriously, I liked this.

    Also try to say "flour from the floor" five times fast.

    #25 · 38w, 1d ago · · ·
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    That was beautiful! When i start writing fanfics, i really hope that mine will come out just as powerful, emotional, and enjoyable as this fic has been. :twilightsmile:.  

    #26 · 29w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>961585 DARN YOU AND YOUR CHALLENGE!!

    This story was beautiful, sets it up for a sequel which I want to see happen, and the writing was impecible! Keep up the good work! :rainbowkiss:

    #27 · 29w, 3d ago · · ·
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    This story made me a little depressed, but in the same time it managed to make me smile. I truly love this story, and your other stories as well. :twilightsmile:

    I really hope this has a sequel to it, this story is different from the others I've read and that's what I adore about it. :pinkiehappy:

    #28 · 28w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #29 · 16w, 15h ago · · ·
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    Sighs, a human acused of pedophillia, I would expect more of the residents of ponyville. Very well paced btw, showing how their love grows, before it's dashed. In your mind, how do you picture their future?

    #30 · 16w, 6h ago · · ·
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    >>2183551

    I sure hope this question was directed at me, otherwise I'm going to feel pretty dumb.

    Anyway

    In your mind, how do you picture their future?

    Complicated?

    They seem like they can keep it together though.

    Guess the future's a long, rough road - but wide open, yeah?

    #31 · 16w, 3h ago · · ·
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    >>2186313

    Thank you sir. I normally am very fond of open ended stories, but this one felt just a little too Nihilistic to me.

    #32 · 11w, 3d ago · · ·
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    The open ending really tears at my heart and frustrates me but I enjoyed it all. Amazing story all the way through, including the ending of course. Thanks for the chance to read this gem.

    #33 · 9w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I love it so. Cant stop crying.:fluttercry:

    #34 · 4w, 5d ago · · ·
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    So, was the ending THE ending or was it a flashback?

    It tears at my heart. :fluttercry:

    #35 · 4w, 2d ago · · ·
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    great story! made me a little sad...but it was worth it:pinkiehappy::pinkiesad2:

    #36 · 4w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Wonderful story, hit me right in the feels :fluttercry:

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