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It's an unkempt and evil world that the two alicorn sisters live in. With little to none recollection of early childhood, they are called on by a godly type of magic to find six fragmented crystals by a river. The journey his to find suitors to the five harmonic elements to vanquish the evil that controls the world.
Inspiration and credit to Ziom05 for making me want to tell the story of his art.
So far this is a very good story!!! The way you write gives it that ancient times feel!! I love the emotion and flow you've delivered here. I also kind of love the dragon attack. It's a classic example of if the Gods ask you do something, you do it. If you don't do it, they make you do it!!
I can't wait for more faved and watched!! 
Good chapter! Though it did seem a bit rushed. You seem to be establishing a good main villain. I'm sorry if this review isn't all that good. ( I don't review often ) However I felt the need to tell you that I am a big fan of this fic so far and I hope that you will continue to write it!!!!! And I honestly can't wait till you get to kindness! I love the design for her or him! I can wait to see what personality you give her. ( I'm of the opinion that she is a girl)
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I so going to read this later, will give proper review later. 
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