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Mr V 55126

Joined January 2012
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    Mr V's Stories (5)

    • No Matter What They Say
      [ 2nd person ] [ HiE ] - A human's life in Ponyville is hard. Love? Well, that's even harder.

      8,080 words · 4,875 views · 227 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Twilight Mornings
      [ 2nd person ] [ HiE ] - A very short piece about a lazy morning with Twilight Sparkle.
      509 words · 4,610 views · 210 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Something Secret
      Spike is too young. So they'll keep their love a secret.
      3,919 words · 5,965 views · 240 likes · 8 dislikes
    • Cheater
      [ 2nd person ] - Dash adds an unexpected complication in your relationship with Pinkie Pie.
      4,600 words · 2,174 views · 71 likes · 5 dislikes
    • Buttershy Kisses
      1,620 words · 1,518 views · 81 likes · 10 dislikes
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    [ 2nd person ] [ HiE ]

    A short and simple scene.

    A morning shared with Twilight Sparkle.

    First Published
    2nd Jan 2012
    Last Modified
    2nd Jan 2012

    Comments ( 30 )

    #1 · 72w, 11h ago · 1 · ·
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    Awwwwwww.......that's so adirable and cute.:pinkiesad2:

    #2 · 72w, 11h ago · 1 · ·
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    Makes my heart beat a bit faster everytime I read this.:twilightsheepish:

    #3 · 72w, 11h ago · · ·
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    I love this story! It's filled with dawwww for me

    I always had a fantasy were I was with Twilight and you made that come true!

    Thank you!

    #4 · 72w, 10h ago · · ·
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    Simple, yet quite enjoyable. :twilightsmile:

    #5 · 72w, 10h ago · · ·
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    My heart. She has Double Rainboomed.

    #6 · 72w, 10h ago · · ·
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    he... uh I HAD SEX WITH A HORSE?!

    #7 · 72w, 9h ago · · ·
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    >>101961

    I see no problem with this, these horses are adorable. And it didn't say if anything happened anyway.

    #8 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·
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    That was one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. :fluttercry:

    #9 · 69w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Cute and heartwarming. It's fairly short compared to the stuff I usually read, but you're able to convey quite a lot of emotion with those few words regardless, and that takes skill.

    Nicely done.:twilightsmile:

    #10 · 69w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Excellent, well written, and thoughouly beautiful. Loved it.

    #11 · 68w, 23h ago · · ·
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    wait... HAND AND FINGER?!

    wut

    #12 · 64w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Am I the only one who saw this?

    As a side note: HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNG

    *ded*


    >>169510 It's a human, deal with it.

    #13 · 64w, 2d ago · · ·
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    this is beautiful the song made it more so.

    keep up with the good work :D

    also d'awwwwwwww *explodes from cuteness*

    :twilightsmile:

    #14 · 61w, 3d ago · · ·
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    ಥ_ಥ this is what romance is.:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

    #15 · 61w, 2d ago · · ·
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    this made me cry manly tears

    aw who am I kidding I'm a woman.

    still though. tears.

    #16 · 60w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Short, Sweet, And straight to the point. I love it!

    Brilliant short story!!! :rainbowkiss:

    #17 · 60w, 10h ago · · ·
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    That was such a sweet story! Manly tears were shed... It really made my night, let me dedicate you a quote: "Blessed be those who enjoy simple things, because they will always be pleased with the very best" Cheers :twilightsheepish:

    #18 · 58w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Why the hell did this give me a boner?  I mean, good god!  There's nothing even remotely erotic about this!  Do I have a snuggle-fetish or something?  :rainbowhuh:

    #19 · 57w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>411229

    Might just be a Twilight fetish (the kind involving the magic purple pony, not sparkly vampires). It's quite common.

    #20 · 57w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>433338  This is a disturbing revelation...  Imma go kill myself now.  :rainbowderp:

    #21 · 48w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I can't like this enough. Excellent music choice.

    #22 · 31w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Beautiful. Thank you.

    #23 · 27w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Interesting. I rather enjoyed this - I'm late to the game, I know. I love non crappy/cheesy HiE. Glad you kept it succinct, made for a wonderful diversion. Thank you. :heart:

    #24 · 26w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Beautiful. Just beautiful.

    #25 · 25w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Respect :heart:

    #26 · 25w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Reminds me of a dream I had once, but it was with Applejack :ajsmug:, and the music... dear god, it was beautiful!!

    #27 · 19w, 4d ago · · ·
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    ALL THE SNUGGLES.

    #28 · 18w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Good God, this is simply amazing.

    The music and the writing paints the most perfect picture.

    The lack of a backstory and simply going with the first person perspective with little to no defining character traits leaves it so anyone can really put themselves into the role.

    Amazingly done. Short and simple, I love it!

    Thank you so much for this.

    #29 · 15w, 5d ago · · ·
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    It was beautiful, thanks for sharing it

    #30 · 13w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>101961 I hardly see how that came into this

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