Seems good.

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Continue or you'll find a chicken in your bed, not dead yet nor will it be alive, but there will be a chicken in your bed

>>14620771462077 Schrodinger's chicken. BRILLIANT!

also i respectfully request more of this story.

Please make MOAR!!!

me gusta

>>14633621463362 that was what I was going for, thank you

Very good work me gusta

hey man nice chapter really liked it good to see that you are expanding your work

I very much enjoy this please more and hopefully fasterupdates

"Dave averted his eyes from Applejack as a blush swept across his face."

Who's Dave?

>>15461701546170 you, are now my god.

>>15502671550267

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*background music*

>>15502851550285 *falls to my knees and weeps manly tears*

>>15502991550299

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and all was right with the world

>>15503201550320 now i'm not sure, should Haruhi be my god or you?

>>15503281550328

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ehh, split it 50-50

>>15503341550334 as you wish my lord

O Lordy, this is fantastic!

please, do continue

Humanized? Why not anthro?

>>16725151672515

Well I have a perfect reason! It's umm.... I'll get back to you

>>16734441673444

I am guessing that you were not aware of what anthro is. A lot of people don't.

>>16738581673858

I know what anthro is but I just thought i would try humanized

>>16738621673862

Oh. Okay then. Oh well.

Good luck with all of your endeavors.

I'm wondering how he's going to get out of this mess, and how does Applejack really feel about it.

If you aren't ending a sentence in an exclamation mark or question mark, then a sentence should end with a period.  Likewise, if you are using dialogue but not ending the sentence itself at the end of the quotes, you need to use a comma.

So something like this:

“Shucks, Granny Smith is tougher than she looks” Applejack reassured William to a point where he walked on his own

Would instead look like something like this:

"Shucks, Granny Smith is tougher than she looks," Applejack reassured William to a point where he walked on his own.

Having a pre-reader would clear a lot of this up.

>>17315821731582

Thanks, I know i should get one really but I have been a bit swamped with other stuff.

>>14620771462077  A stuffed chicken mayhaps?