Fluttershy has always been a shy and quiet mare; everypony know that! But her friends become worried when it all gets worse. After she has stopped talking to them, never leaving her house and not eating, her friends see no other option but to take her to a mental hospital, where she can be cared for and helped. But can Fluttershy and her friends handle this? Fluttershy only has one question; Why did Equestria shrink?
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My gosh that was a great beginning and it was sad.
Good job!
There are a lot of grammar mistakes, but there are a type that I almost recognize... I could be wrong, but, I'm guessing English isn't your first language?
So, I'll just correct you on one thing. In a pony fanfic, it's not "people" it's "ponies," and not "man" but "stallion."
This looks very interesting, plot-wise, and I think I'll be keeping an eye on it.
Oh my god, this was so sad
This is a good start. I'll be following this.
This is a heart-wrenching start. Do please continue.
Strange dreams?
Fluttershy in mental hospital?
...
I can feel this is gonna be good!
Hmmm, this can go some ways, yet from the tags on this story, I'm very concerned at what would happen..Anyhow I'll keep watch at this cuz it has me quite pensive on the "conditions" that Flutters seem to be in.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Fluttershy_lolface.png
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English is indeed not my native language, but I'm trying my best!
please dont be one of those people who starts a great story but never writes again
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Don't you worry, I'm already working on Chapter 2 as I type this.
Okay, there are two things, one good, the other bad:
The good one was the chapter for itself.
The bad one was that my scrollbar hit the bottom.
Overall result:
I demand
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1470215 I always love myself some constructive criticism.
Fluttershy is really making me sad here. I hope she learns why Equestria shrunk.
This is rrreeeaaallly good
*Reads the chapter*dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Sweetie_happy.png "Very Very Good"
*Reaches the part with Nurse Grunt* dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png "Get OUTTA HERE!"
*Strange arms come through the screen, grabs me, and throws me into the Multi-verse*dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Discord.png " You seem to be the chosen one after all..."
TO BE CONTINUED.....MAYBE....
you should become writer man! and have the ability to instantly write and never stop writing!
I don't like Nurse Grunt! He makes Fluttershy scared!
I love this story! when i saw that day 2 came out, i nearly did a backflip. Just thinking to myself "why did equestria shrink?" is driving me crazy! Plus just having fluttershy being fluttershy through all of this is so touching
keep the story going!
This fic is extremely underrated! Nice work! Keep it up
Damnitt. You've hooked me. Update soon please!!!
Darnet EARTH! WHY DID'JA STRETCH?! And oh, loved the way this story is going so much.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Fluttershy_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/yay_red.png
This story is REALLY good! I'm hooked and can't wait to read more!
Hello, dear readers of Why Did Equestria Shrink!
If you're reading this, you're probably practically yelling the following sentence at your screen: "Yo, mister writer, where is day 4? I want it!"
Well, do not be afraid. I haven't given up on this story, at all. I wouldn't even think about it, I love what I'm doing with this story. However, day 4 has been taking so long because I'm going through some problems at the moment. Also, school is killing me. But do not be afraid, you can expect a new chapter of WDES soon! (probably during the next week or so.)
Regards,
- Mr. F.
P.S.: Don't forget to have a look at my FB account, linked somewhere on my page on FIMfiction! I post regular updates on there.
Oh no... either Fluttershy is in serious trouble, or she's going crazy. I get the feeling it's the former...
Ou, soooo much suspense!
Every time I´m reading a new chapter of this there are just more questions than in the beginning! And wanting a new chapter more desperately.
Also the story remembers me somehow at littlerobotbird´s 'Metanoia'. At the end of every chapter, you are even more confused but still (or maybe because of that) you crave to read the next chapter more and more.
Anyway, excellent work as always!
Also:
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Oh yeah I HATE it when people do that.
If you're gonna start a story, make plans to actually continue it.
This story has been in my read later list for quite a while now. I just got around to reading it and I can't wait for a new chapter!
Is this a horror story? Because it's starting to look like a horror story. I'm seriously scared for Fluttershy here.
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I have to admit, Day 5 is the darkest chapter I've written so far. When I was finishing it up, I started wondering if I should slap the 'dark' tag on this story and change it from 'everyone' to 'teen'.
2012957 For a second, I forgot it was rated 'everyone'.
Can't help but wonder... Why DID Equestria shrink!? :D Good story so far! Thumbs up for you good sir!
Yes, this is becoming an all in one story for me.............
This story is nothing short of amazing. The only thing i hate about it is how underrated it is
I would up vote this more than once if i could
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Thank you! ^^
And for this being my first serious story, I'm actually quite happy with how it's doing so far. Sure, some more readers would be amazing but with how it is now, I feel satisfied and content about this story.
Okay, at first I was thinking that Spera was a familiar of some sort, but with that note, I don't know. I'm getting scared though.
Please write the next chapter soon. I'm at the edge of my seat here.
I know it´s hackneyed, but...
The plot thickens.
Perfect as always. Your depicting of Fluttershy going insane step by step is just marvelous.
I still hope her nightmare at Day 5 with her killing herself isn´t going to become real...
But it´s your story!
Please write the next chapter! I need to know what's going to happen! Please let me know what's happening!
Well I must say, this chapter was worth the rather long wait. I love the way you write these stories. It's right one the line between "Sadfic" and "Physiological Horror".
God, this story is good. The way you juggle emotion, horror, mystery and suspense is amazing, and I love your writing style. 58 views is a joke, this chapter (and story) definetly deserves WAY more! Anyways, keep up the great work!
What a twist!
What? So all this time "Fluttershy" was Twilight?! I am so confused right now...
But I saw that the story is "to be continued" so that's exciting.
'To be continued' does that mean there's going to be a sequel since it has a 'completed' tag?
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Yes, there will be a sequel.
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You. You will go write the sequel to this story now.
Go. And have a Spikestache for your efforts!
And I wish I would've found this sooner...
lol that ending
fuck she just entered silent ponyville it seems
Okay...Congratulations!
I am even more confused now than I was after reading Metanoia.
Anyway, great chapter as always. Can´t wait for the sequel, where (I at least hope so) finally some questions will be answered.
Desolo or whoever he is terrifies me. He shows fluttershy negative memories and tries to convince her that the hospital workers are enemies and her friends want to abandon her. He was even spotted in the real world by not only fluttershy but now nurse redheart?
Holy s**t, twilight is the one in the hospital not fluttershy! Twilight thought she was fluttershy!
i just figured out something about these dreams and flutters personality and fears
1. the pegasi not being able to fly.
fluttershy is not fond of flying
2 a pony with no one but himself everything he could want except company
flutters has her animals but no one to really share her life with so she is alone her friends aren't there for her every day.
see the connection?