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WingzBolt45
I just started writing fan fics on my little pony since October and I hope the stories I do are good enough for everypony
WingzBolt45
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SPELLCHECKER!!!!
Don't constantly break paragraphs and PLEASE use separate paragraphs for talking.
106305 look I'm new to writing fan fics so it's gonna take me some time to do this so i would appreciate it if you would
not criticize my work
Well if you dont get criticism how do you learn? You started in October so you should at least know to use a spellchecker. Also the paragraphs thing made it nearly unreadable.
Well if you dont get criticism how do you learn? You started in October so you should at least know to use a spellchecker. Also the paragraphs thing made it nearly unreadable.
Definitely try to work on spelling/grammar/spacing. The ratings would jump up, I'm sure. :)
This story is great!! 5 stars
106390
.My very first fanfic got a 4.7 on EqD Now, I'm not bragging; that was because I went over my work with a fine-toothed comb. I felt even what I wrote could use improving here and there, and look what my efforts got me: a near perfect score right out of the gate.
Take pride in what you do. Don't be afraid to go over your work; if you write something, go over it until you feel it can't possibly be improved. As stated, use a spell-checker. Nobody's insulting you by suggesting this; they can be of monumental help. You're willing to write, you just need a good polishing. Train yourself. Never be afraid of criticism. Never be afraid to request help. Offer up your works in progress to others to look over, and take their suggestions in stride. We're not here to bash you or troll you or what have you. We're trying to make you a better writer.
106509 i guess your right sorry
106718 thanks I really should do that.
I'll check it out tonight and edit what
needs editing. thanks for the help everypony.
106736
As I said, you're willing, you just need to make yourself a little more able. We're here to help. You're trying so you can't be faulted for that.
106749 thanks!
because of what you said, just finished editing the story. I hope you all like it.
106749 well i took your advice and fixed it up!
I would really appreciate a comment back if you have
the time i would like to get your opinion does it need to be tweaked a little more or does it look fine the
way it is? I would like to hear your opinion.
Still needs a heck of a lot of tidying; you've got everything double-spaced, which makes it extremely difficult to read; you treat capitals as though they're a choice, not a necessity...
I'll do a Gdocs of this and show you how it should look. I won't actually change anything, except in small ways. I'll try to leave notes, too.
111792 okay thanks! i would really appreciate that
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BUEgdAxgBoMnJUigaE2tXids3K-pLKaDIkT_ycjowMA/edit
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BUEgdAxgBoMnJUigaE2tXids3K-pLKaDIkT_ycjowMA/edit?hl=en_US
111831I like your version of my story thanks for the help! if I need anymore I'll comment to you.
I like the story so far, and don't worry about the improvements you have to make the first few times. You need to practice at perfecting your skills like everyone else, i know what i'm talking about since i also just started writting fics recently and still have a long way to go
, five stars still for the first part and for Trixie plotting her revenge naturally 
ill be watching
