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    I heard a song from one of my favorite musicians, and I couldn't help but think of what Octavia and Vinyl would actually do if stranded on an island-

    This is one of the funnest times I've ever had writing, and one of the few times I have no regrets on something I did

    I enjoyed it, and I hope you do to.

    Made in the spur of inspiration

    First Published
    17th Oct 2012
    Last Modified
    6th Dec 2012

    Comments ( 51 )

    #1 · 35w, 4h ago · · ·
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    I love this so much, wrote it in a span of 2 1/2 hours

    #2 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #3 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Cool story! I'm a huge Coconeru fan too.  :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

    #4 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #5 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    nice:raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry:

    #6 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Perfection. Nice silliness, and I can totally see "I like pudding" running through Vinyl's mind in a time like that. Take all the mustaches! TAKE THEM!

    :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

    #7 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I saw Coconeru answering someone and  telling him/her to go ahead writing a fic around that song

    Then come here and see a fic around that song

    And now efter reading it:

    You, sir, just did my day

    :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    #8 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1456611

    I never really asked him- I just hit the ground running after I heard it, but I do know of two other guys saying they were going to write something, I think I was the first though

    >>1456522

    I can't hold all these mustaches!

    #10 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    It's really strange 'cause I was thinking about writing about Tavi and Vinyl stuck on an island too... Ah, well, my fic would be an epic multi-chapter.

    This was worth reading and sendme into giggles and chuckles :twilightsmile:

    Props to you~

    #11 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1457000

    Mine was just a silly short story-

    I have no doubt yours would be better :pinkiesmile:

    #12 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Pffft, that was...entertaining.

    #13 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1457071

    No, it won't, and you know it :raritywink:

    Yours was awesome, though! Now, I think you had a particular story to re-write... -_-

    #14 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    They will survive there for many generations?

    ...

    That means Vinyl knows a spell to .... Oh My...

    ...

    And that would mean the two of them would ... Oh My~!

    ...

    :pinkiecrazy:

    #16 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1457197

    Pardon?

    >>1457147

    Wanna know what else is entertaining?

    ...

    A duck juggling torches.

    #17 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1456216

    This. Upvoted!

    #18 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1457439 So then, who would get hit with the Rule 63 spell for that one? *LOL*

    #19 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #20 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    It would be nice to see this stretched out to a full-on shipping fic where they don't get immediately rescued (obviously they'd have to be on a somewhat bigger island), and spend months or longer on the island, their friendship growing into romance as time passes.

    #21 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1457504

    that's a good idea, you should totally write that

    #22 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1457516

    I'd love to, but I'm bad at writing emotion. I tried it once, it felt extremely shallow, and I've sworn off it (at least until I become a better writer). A Vinyl x Octavia shipfic is something I wouldn't sully with my poor authoring skills. They are my favorite pairing, after all. Perhaps at a later date...

    #23 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I liked it and I loved the part where you made Vinyl kind of a moron like in Epic Wub Time.

    #24 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1456676

    Yes, yes I'm working on mine. It maybe awhile though since my computer is on the fritz.

    #25 · 34w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1457449

    The Genius Named Starswirl

    Yes, that one fic you've probably forgotten about...

    #26 · 34w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1460126

    :fluttershysad:

    Well when you finish, drop me a line- I want to see what other people were thinking when they heard that song. :twilightsmile:

    >>1460442

    Oh  I haven't forgotten about that- I  have some pre-writing done on that, the only thing stopping me from making more chapters is that now I'm looking for a different end to it-

    I wanted to make it a journal about his life ever since he became a Canter lot researcher, with pages for every year of his life with a minimum of 1k words per year, I wanted him to live up to his  90's and he is  35 in the story at the moment.

    I have NOT forgotten about it, in fact I still love the story dearly, but what's currently on it isn't to great and I might have to clean the slate when I think of a better way to go about it.

    #27 · 34w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1461943

    All right, keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:

    #28 · 34w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1461943

    Will do, but I have three fics to work on already plus my regular job; so it maybe awhile.

    #29 · 34w, 5d ago · · ·
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    This just made my day.

    #31 · 34w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Yep, totally wrote my own fic :twilightsmile:

    #32 · 34w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Updated some stuff, it needed some strengthening

    #33 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Octavia looked at her friend, her mouth agape in surprise. 'I...I can't believe this is happening... I'm on a remote island with no hope of getting off... With Vinyl?!'

    Sorry, out of context :3

    And the fertile land quote was the best part. Good job.:ajsmug:

    #34 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1516815

    Is that supposed to be a dirty joke? :derpytongue2:

    #35 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1517071

    Yes. But I guess I'll go die for being a shipper.

    </3

    #36 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1517327

    A ton of bronies are shippers.

    If you like shipping, I have a Twi/Soar trilogy in progress, it's on the third story.:pinkiesmile:

    'I recommend just reading Blue Skies, purple was a terrible story.'

    #37 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1517452

    I'll check it out, always good to read.

    #38 · 32w, 1d ago · · ·
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    She raised an eyebrow as if it were a stupid question, "Don't you watch any movies? People get stranded on islands all the time, but this time we don't have a volleyball to paint..." Vinyl started to let her mind wander about all of the movies shes watched.

    WILSON

    also, he wasn't painted, that is a blood stain.

    dtlux1

    PS: >>1517452 MR> AUTHOR? Could I put a link to this fanfic in a fanfic I am wrighting about the mane 6 going missing and Luna sends the background ponies to find them. I want a scene where Octavia and Vinyl are talking about the time they were stranded on an island. PLEASE?

    #39 · 32w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1569466

    Sure no problem- and if you need any advice (I'm not a critic) on writing or if you feel stuck I can help you out.:pinkiesmile:

    #40 · 29w, 5d ago · · ·
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    :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:/:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: 6 of 5 mustaches. You have all my LOLZ! 'Nuff said.

    #42 · 29w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Perchance, could it have been THIS song?

    #43 · 29w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1672389

    Yep- Coco read my story and liked it

    #44 · 27w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1457439 It was edited today, I guess I have to reread it to see what you did.

    dtlux1

    PS: I have my first chapter of my new fic in editing stage after a month of wrighting. A link to your story will be in the second chapter. You said I could put it in, read through your old comments by me. I all ready have the part with the link writen, I need to finish the chapter before you get more story views.

    #45 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1569596 My first chapter is up as a blog because it is not edited, here it is, hope you like it.

    dtlux1

    #46 · 20w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Confound you, you stole my idea which I got from Coconeru which I was thinking of writing! Good read :pinkiehappy:

    #47 · 20w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>2007539

    :l

    There were about 14 others on this, I was the first but the others made theirs longer/into stories

    (I think like two people only got 1k words in tho)

    #48 · 18w, 3d ago · · ·
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    "O-oh my, i-it worked!" Octavia exclaimed
    OH REALLY? I THOUGHT SAND WAS FLAMMABLE! *sits in a corner* bucking retard

    #49 · 18w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #50 · 14w, 5d ago · · ·
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    a deserted island in the middle of the ocean with a single tree on it... seems like the perfect place to start playing some minecraft!~ that was my thought as i read the paragraph describing the island XD short but good really

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