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    MallaJong1's Stories (8)

    • Spike's Scootaloo
      Spike asks Scootaloo out on a date.

      9,246 words · 9,184 views · 1,055 likes · 31 dislikes
    • Banana
      Friends discuss how bananas can be quite dangerous to the average pony.
      2,620 words · 1,771 views · 243 likes · 6 dislikes
    • Spike's Rainbow Dash: The Final Chapters
      Spike and Rainbow Dash continue their love battle.
      14,471 words · 5,826 views · 590 likes · 27 dislikes
    • Spike's Vinyl Scratch
      Spike assists Vinyl Scratch the Deejay.
      6,459 words · 5,795 views · 481 likes · 21 dislikes
    • Spike's Pinkie Pie
      5,040 words · 7,608 views · 613 likes · 30 dislikes
    • Spike's Dating Simulator
      7,587 words · 9,455 views · 639 likes · 42 dislikes
    • Spike's Spike
      4,866 words · 1,562 views · 106 likes · 7 dislikes
    • To Be Strong
      1,396 words · 2,207 views · 167 likes · 21 dislikes

    The official continuation of Spike's Rainbow Dash! Spike and Rainbow Dash have partaken in a love battle, and after a full day of chaotic happenings a war is afoot. How will everything end? Will there be a victory for Team Spike? Or will Team Rainbow Dash take home the gold? What about Team Pinkie Pie? Team Rarity? Team McCloud? How about Team PONYVILLE'S FU*#ED? I'm sure you all have been waiting to find out.

    This is a sequel to the fanfiction Spike's Rainbow Dash: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/46048/Spike's-Rainbow-Dash

    Cover for Spike's Rainbow Dash: The Final Chapters courtesy of Mickeymonster and romansii. Thanks for the fanart!

    First Published
    18th Oct 2012
    Last Modified
    29th Dec 2012

    Comments ( 521 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I hope you enjoyed this short installment. Regular-lengthed installments return next chapter! Your comments motivate me to continue! Spike's Rainbow Dash is back, baby! :)

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    YES! I'll read it now I don't care that its 11pm!

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Just finished reading and man this is a work of art dude I salute you.:twilightsmile:

    On a side note do dragons get morning wood cuss that would have really ruined the moment huh?:rainbowlaugh:

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    You can take it down, but ya can't take it out.

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Inb4 feature?

    YEeeeeees its back on track babes

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    DAT SETTING! Ahhh, that was refreshing and I couldn't help but giggle a bit at these two. :yay:

    I thank you for continuing this grand adventure, my fine sir. I couldn't be any more pleased. :twilightsmile:

    My psyche is enlightened by the amount of description and emotion you place in your writing. :rainbowderp::rainbowlaugh:

    I can't wait for more. :pinkiecrazy:

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1462026 Screw off.

    Um... Yeah, there's only one pseudo-word I can use to describe this. *Ahem* "D'awww"! Dashie's so damn cute!

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    It seems rather odd to start this anew, whilst the previous fic still has the uncompleted tag, and under a different account as well. Any particular reason? Just curious.

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I'm so happy you're continuing this story. I don't care whether Knighty is right about you are not; I just want to read this story.

    I hope you can rebuild at least some of your lost reputation.

    *In B4 featured*

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Way to be a creeper Dash!

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Lol that's sneaky Dashie!:rainbowkiss:

    Yeah back on track woot!:derpytongue2:

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Glad to see this powerful love story is back online, I just hope that in the end no matter who wins everyone ESPECIALLY Pinkie Pie learn a lesson about messing with the love life of others. :eeyup:

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1461957

    Oddly fitting, ain't it?

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    :yay: Yay!

    #16 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1462475

    ahhah, most definitely. :rainbowlaugh:

    #17 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    From the title on the featured page, I thought you were literally going to show the last three chapters of the story, but I'm so happy that the story is back on track on for real.  While I didn't see the final chapter (a replied a day after you made your blog post), I hope this story will be finished for real and I also want those of you who have gotten the final chapter from Malla please keep that info to yourself so the rest of us can enjoy how it will end.  I'm glad you're back Malla.

    #18 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Before I start reading, I'm confused. Why start up a whole new story? Why not just continue the first one?

    Or did I miss something? :rainbowhuh:

    #19 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Another awesome chapter. :raritystarry:

    I just knew Rainbow was awake the whole time. And it just makes things all the more hilariously adorable. :rainbowkiss:

    #20 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Those last lines. Could someone draw that scene out? Spikedash on a cliff.

    And then... A catastrophically Derpy interruption.

    #21 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    YES! YES! ALL MY YES!

    #22 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    And then... Ponyville will become a Battlefield, the durms of war sounds across the horizon, the sides has been choosen and neither of those will stop at nothing until the achive total overwelming victory, doing whatever it takes and no matter the means, let alone the costs or consecuenses... besides, that's why they have reserves anyway...:pinkiecrazy:

    #23 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1462633 His main account was hacked and banned, so he will publish new chapters here.

    >>1461093 Glad you're back bud!  :rainbowkiss:

    #24 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1462936

    Ah, thanks for clearing that up.

    #25 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1462974 Glad to help. :ajsmug:

    #26 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I'm So glad to be able to say this again after all this time.

    GO TEAM SPIKE!!

    #27 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Dang it! I thought they agreed that if they kept things up they would just end up hurting each other! :pinkiegasp:

    oh yea .. love that pic

    vote Spike! :moustache:

    #28 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I loved that final lines! So beautiful... :pinkiesad2: Please, keep going! :twilightsmile:

    #29 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I know Rarity will do whatever it takes to make sure Spike is safe in the upcoming all-out war in Equestria. I don't know how this is going to end, but I am willing to see it to the end, even though I'm sure I may not like it due to obvious reasons.

    I just hope that there are few casualties in the upcoming war. If not, then God help us all.

    #30 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Looking forward to more! Really enjoying this, love the interplay between Dash and Spike, and all the drama with the rest of Equestria, just need more!

    Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

    #31 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · 1 · ·
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    I'll keep it short and spicy:


    THIS


    IS




    FREAKING




    AMAZING

    #32 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I think I will dump the story I'm writing definetly. I can't compete with this.

    #33 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I have been waiting for this so much! :pinkiecrazy:

    #34 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Glad to see that this has returned.

    Short, but adorable chapter. I honesty prefer this to the insanity, betting, and cramming as many named characters as possible that was happening before.

    #35 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #36 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!!!! I HAVE WAITED FOR THIS TO BE CONTINUED WOOOOOO~!!!!!!

    #37 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I love you MallaJong.

    #38 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    YESYESYEYSYEYSYES!

    Finally get to see if Team Ponyville is F*cked wins and if I get to claim my winnings...

    ...via Pinkie Pie smashing through my computer screen?

    Dear Celestia, I hope there's enough in there to cover that.

    #39 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I'm sure the reason why you were banned has been talked about to death, but I'm out of the loop. Anyway, I'm glad you decided to come back and finish this up. Kudos!

    #40 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES

    #41 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    [youtube=http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=OxHgexVmHXE]

    My reaction. And...

    MOOOOAAAAAARRRR :flutterrage:

    #42 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

    I HAVE BEEN WAITING SOOO LONG!!! So glad you're back and so glad to see Rainbow Dash loving spike! It's SO CUTE!:rainbowkiss:

    #43 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    yes just yes I megusta like this storie :yay: if any dislike this story they are :pinkiecrazy: and :applejackconfused:

    #44 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1462257 He was banned.

    And now it's time for my question: why were you banned?

    #45 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1464011

    You I like like this story? :rainbowhuh:

    #46 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Scarlet splashed across the foot of the horizon...

    Considering it may have been Celestia who threw Spike off the cliff earlier, that's ... rather disturbing.

    But ANYway, I'm just as excited as everyone else to see you back in action! Regardless of whether or not you're responsible for the previous incident, I'm psyched to read the most well-written story of one of my favorite ships.

    >>1462257 Two hundred other accounts were created to upvote his stories, so he was banned. We still can't be sure if it was him, or if his account was hacked. But let's keep it to ourselves. Shhh.

    #47 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1464090  why yes yes I do dont care if you if because you dislike it because I like it have a nice day

    #48 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #49 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    :yay: it's back!

    This is one of my favourite stories I've been tracking, and have been from the start. I am incredibly happy it's back :twilightsmile:

    #50 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Is it just me or is this the cutest heartwarming chapter ever!:heart: please tell me I am not the only one... :raritystarry:

    #51 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1464081

    He was framed for making multiple accounts (200 of them) and having them like his stories.  We still don't know why would someone do this to him in the first place though.

    #52 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Good to know that you're back kid. Also, great job. I love this story.

    #53 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I give up...

    *Removes Eyeballs*

    Much better.

    #54 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #57 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Ok, not sure if anyone will read this or not but I need to point something out that many seemed to have misinterpreted;

    The scene where Spike was seemingly thrown off the cliff.

    The magical golden aura was pulling on the thermos of apple cider, and Spike wouldn't let go. So when the thermos went over the cliff, Spike went too. It wasn't Spike who was getting thrown over the cliff, it was the thermos.

    Does that about sum things up? Or should I go back to that chapter and quote that scene word for word?

    Sorry, but this has been annoying me ever since the first comment to say this. :facehoof:

    #58 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Wait so you are going to finish this story on FIM:Fiction?

    If that's the case then...

    #59 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #60 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    don't like this story that way it will be less noticed.

    #62 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I read I laughed and it's back finally the end of the journey it's been a wild ride and I hope you don't mind if I cried the story was sublime I don't even care about all my lost time I hope the end will hit every mark I know it will we'll be here waiting

    #63 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Somehow, I expected Dash to pull something like that. Go SpikeDash!!

    #65 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    ...insanity goes on...

    #66 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I believe that this video summarizes how the rest of the fic will go (for us at least)

    #67 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Oh silly you Team PONYVILLES FUCKED always wins

    #68 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Enjoy the peace while they can. It's so great that your back.:pinkiehappy:

    #69 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #70 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    glad its back:scootangel:

    #71 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Ahem I would like to BROHOOF all Team McCloud members YEAH!!

    #72 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I was really hoping Rainbow Dash would lose the bet, back when she was just being kind of a competitive brat, but now that it's starting to look like she's actually developing feelings for Spike, I'd be much more okay with her winning the bet. I'd still prefer Spike end up with Rarity, but him falling for Rainbow Dash doesn't seem so bad anymore.

    Anyway, glad to see this continue.

    #73 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    My head exploded when I saw this was updated.

    My heart exploded when I read the chapter.

    You, sir, are an amazing writer.  :eeyup:

    #74 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    DAT IMAGE LOOKS LIKE MANNYTHERAICHU'S...................A.K.A on DA Pokemanslover567. Check out his work.

    #75 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 2d ago · · ·
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    :yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:

    ALL OF MY YAY

    >fires the MOAR cannon

    #76 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 2d ago · · ·
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    YAYAYAYAYAAYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! :twilightsmile::moustache::rainbowkiss::pinkiehappy::heart:

    Riz
    #77 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1461093

    Finally.. :twilightsmile:

    #78 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 2d ago · · ·
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    AARRGGHH! I need MOORREEE!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

    #79 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1461961

    BWAHAHAHAHA

    That's so true!

    #80 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I will hold you to your claim about crying...

    #81 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 2d ago · · ·
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    When I realized this was a short chapter, I raged a bit :pinkiesad2: But now I'm fine:ajsmug:

    #82 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Oh myyyyy.... hellooooooo. And then I raped them all.

    #83 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #84 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Bout time this story came back :pinkiecrazy:

    #85 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Wow... a new update... unreal... my gosh...

    THIS IS ALL A MIRACLE!

    Haha, elation aside, once again I loved this chapter. I really liked how you slowed things down a bit and focused on Spike sharing a moment of respite and tranquility with Rainbow Dash. Of course, they'll have to return to face the chaos and insanity of the bet sooner or later, but it was a refreshing change of pace.

    And man, that sunrise you described sounds pretty friggin' awesome.

    So beautiful...

    And that ending

    You're so sneaky. :3

    Man, it's good to see another update from you, Malla. I'm not sure of what may happen next, but one thing I do know is...

    Things are gonna get oatmeal.

    I look forward to more

    AL
    #86 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 2d ago · · ·
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    owwwwwwwww yeah !!!!!! :DDDDDDDDDDD :pinkiehappy:

    #88 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Mallajong update? AUTO-READ!!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

    #89 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Well, it seems like your fans sure didn't take any time finding you again! Nice to see you again Mallajong!

    #90 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Replying to every comment will take work! But it must be done, for I am truly grateful to receive them! Here we go!

    >>1461936

    It's back! Get your read on! Hahaha!

    >>1461957

    This comment is definitely fitting/ironic. The long-awaited clash is afoot! Thanks for the comment!

    >>1461961

    Thank you, dude. I try to evoke as much emotion in my writing as I can. :) And I'd imagine Spike could get erections. I'm guessing they'd be of monstrous size. Hahaha!

    >>1462004

    The fire within will always burn with might! Yeah, baby!

    >>1462005

    >>1462074

    Thank you very much, my friend! I am glad you enjoyed this installment. I felt I had to come back with a heart-wrenching scene. It seems I've succeeded. Yes!

    >>1462079

    Rainbow Dash sure is a cutie! Hahaha!

    >>1462257

    It seems you've gotten your answer! Yes, I shall be continuing Spike's Rainbow Dash through my new account.

    >>1462336

    The story has been continued! Thank you for your support, ultimate fellow spike fan!

    >>1462347

    >>1462416

    >>1462439

    I truly enjoy writing romantic stories. I would also love to give this particular story a message. Thanks for the comment!

    >>1462475

    Definitely fitting. Haha.

    >>1462508

    Yays all around, my friend. Yays all around. :)

    >>1462613

    Yes, the story is back. And do not worry about any spoilers. I decided to not give away any details, because I felt one day I would return to finish Spike;s Rainbow Dash! Thank you for the support!

    >>1462666

    Thank you very much! Here's another cute picture of a sleeping Rainbow Dash!

    >>1462719

    I'd love to see this scene illustrated! Complete with the Derpy Interrruption and everything! :)

    >>1462760

    All of your "yes" has been received. Await chapter transaction.

    >>1462764

    >>1462936

    Thanks! I am glad I am back, too! Hahaha!

    I'M BACK!

    >>1463035

    The bugle  is blown for Team Spike! What will we hear from Team Rainbow Dash? :)

    >>1463036

    Situations have become complicated. Sentiments have become confused, and the element of romance has come to take over! What will happen next? Yes, the fanart for Spike's Rainbow Dash is very nice! Here is the original sketch by Mickeymonster. :)

    >>1463052

    Thank you, my friend. i want hearts to palpitate! To squeeze!

    >>1463163

    Rarity is coming! How will it all end? Stay tuned in...DAH, DAH, DAH....Spike's Rainbow Dash

    >>1463253

    I am elated that you are satisfied with the story! More Spike and Rainbow Dash interaction coming soon! :)

    >>1463300

    THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!

    >>1463315

    Do not dump anything, fellow author Keep writing! Keep developing your writing skills! Shake the world with your fingers! Live life to the fullest!

    Keep it up, dude! You can do it!

    >>1463316

    I have as well, dude. I have as well. :)

    >>1463463

    I am glad you enjoyed the chapter installment. The war is coming, so you'll have to deal with many characters coming back, but Spike and Rainbow Dash will be there, I promise! :) I understand that this tale is still a shipfic! :)

    >>1463489

    Thank you! I am back, and hopefully here to stay until the end! :)

    >>1463506

    >>1463778

    I love you, too, random reader. :) BROHUG!

    >>1463809

    Hmm. Want me to ask Pinkie Pie to "pay" you a visit via computer screen? Haha.

    >>1463839

    It really has. Haha. Thanks for the comment! I am back, baby!

    >>1463908

    Dude, I seriously love this comment! It just makes me smile everytime! :)

    >>1463947

    I'd love to see the video! Haha! I assume it is a nice reaction, though! Thanks for the comment!

    >>1463994

    I absolutely love this gif! One of the best comments I've received yet! Thanks!

    WHOOOOOO!

    >>1464011

    >>1464081

    The ban was a mess. Haha. But it's been cleaned up. I'd like to avoid referring to it any longer, though. :)

    >>1464125

    Thank you so much, my friend. Your support has always been appreciated, swashbucketlist. Have a great time with the story! :)

    >>1464191

    >>1464245

    Since the beginning?! Nice! I am happy that you are enjoying the story, my friend! Have a fun time!

    >>1464251

    I truly enjoyed writing this installment! Cute moments are very pleasing! :)

    >>1464578

    I am glad you like it, dude! I am very glad! Thanks for the comment! :)

    >>1464675

    Too much for thine eyes? Hahaha. Thanks for the comment!

    >>1464789

    I love this gif! So nostalgic! POKEMON THE MOVIE ALL THE WAY! Hahaha. Thank you for the comment! I am back!

    >>1465338

    I CAME RAINBOWS AS WELL! YES!

    How do you think this story will end? Tell me, fine sir! Tell me!

    >>1465494

    Awesomee meme! YES!!!

    >>1465714

    Yes, against all odds! The story shall continue! YES! You know, your first comment on the first chapter truly inspired me to execute this story the way I have! And I shall continue to do so!

    >>1465766

    I glad you are pleased! And Applejack, too! Thanks for the comment!

    >>1465884

    You can like it. It can garner as much notice as it possibly can. It shouldn't be taken down again, I'm sure. :)

    >>1465992

    I had a bunch of fun with this installment! :) Thank you for the comment!

    >>1466059

    Do not worry. I know thee ending to this tale, and just thinking about makes me want to cry. You will be satisfied. I am confident in that. :) Thanks for the comment :)

    >>1466476

    SPIKEDASH all the way!

    >>1466488

    Twilight Sparkle knows how to get down! Yeah! Go Twilight! Go Sparkle! Go Twilight! Go Sparkle!

    >>1466588

    Insane in the membrane! Insane in the brain!

    >>1466632

    Definitely. Great song. I've got a feeling! WOOOHOOO! Thanks for the comment!

    >>1466731

    It is quite the formidable adversary within the war, I'll admit! Haha! Thanks for the comment!

    >>1466759

    Thank you for the comment! This gif seriously makes me want to see this movie now! Citizen Kane, right?

    >>1466922

    I am not much of a fan for Celestia, but this picture makes me smile so much! She is absolutely adorable! Thank you for the comment, my friend!

    >>1466928

    I am as well. :)

    >>1467047

    Calling all Team McCloud members! Calling TEAM MCCLOUD!

    >>1467063

    My thoughts exactly. Changing the dynamic of both the characters and plot is the way of the game! I am glad you are enjoying this story! Have a fun time reading! Thanks for the comment :)

    >>1467096

    Thank you for this comment Very clever, and quite poetic as well. :)

    >>1467410

    Sure, maybe I will. Thanks.

    >>1468062

    Wow. That "MOAR" cannon is pretty efficient with its accuracy! Awesome stuff, my friend! Thanks for the comment!

    >>1468348

    >>1468392

    Hey, Malaysian pal! It is finally here! :)

    >>1468433

    Hopefully it will come soon! :)

    >>1469602

    I am true to my word. Tears will be shed. :)

    >>1470835

    As long you were able to enjoy it, then I am fine as well. :)

    >>1470891

    This was an interesting comment. Hahaha. It made me go "Uh, okay?".

    >>1470958

    Thanks, LightMask! This is an awesome gif! I am seriously imagining Rainbow Dash speaking to me! Haha! By the way, you're awesome!

    >>1472058

    Seriously, it is about time, isn't it? Haha.

    >>1472360

    >>1473119

    Ah, "dis gun be good" black guy. Nice to see him again! Thanks for the comment! :)

    >>1473443

    Thank you, my friend. I truly do love writing! :)

    >>1475783

    Nice to see you, too. RookeeAlding. Your support has always been appreciated. :) Thanks for the comment. :)

    #91 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1476396 You have the dedication to reply to every comment. I respect you, sir. :rainbowdetermined2:

    #92 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1472220

    Yet again, NoponyMan, I am wow'ed by your comment! This comment is absolutely hilarious, clever and all around beautiful! Hahaha.

    I have never seen that Dragon Ball Z clip before! It was hilariously fitting! Oh, yeah! Haha!

    This is how I feel when I receive a comment from you. :) Quite a good representation, actually.

    I love dancing, so it shouldn't be hard to believe at all.

    And then, of course, you provide scenes from manga. Well...

    The Spongebob meme was also a great touch! Did you set that up yourself? Nice!

    I am back, my friend. Hopefully I am here to stay until the very end. I am glad to know that you'll be accompanying me throughout this journey. And now the time has come.

    We must face forward with all our strength and fortitude.

    We must live.

    BROHOOF.

    #93 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1463809 No way I never thought I'd be the only one to think Ponyvillie won't survive, but I guess it's obvious when you have the rulers of this land on opposite sides and both are willing to do whatever it takes to win, and don't get me started on how much trouble Pinkie Pie has caused. :pinkiegasp:

    #94 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1476478

    Live or die, heaven or hell, let's rock!

    #95 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1476396

    How can anyone accuse you of being a bad guy?

    You reply to every single comment.

    The swag, IT'S OVER 30²(10)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*

    [*do teh maths :twilightsheepish:]

    #96 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1476734 Indeed. After all of this, there will be fire on the streets and rubble everywhere. Fights will break out at random. They will gain sufficiently advanced technology that they will use against each other. Foals will learn nothing in school except how to maim somepony when the teacher isn't looking. The gates of Tartarus will unleash the foulest of beasts upon the humble village. Carnage, chaos, distrust, disharmony everywhere. Rarity will have a bad mane day. Pinkie will eat her vegetables. The Cake twins will become supreme overlords. It will be as though the apocalypse had struck early. Nopony will be safe.

    Rainbow Dash will sleep through it all.

    Just an average day in Ponyville.

    #97 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 22h ago · · ·
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    >>1477826 Well part of it will be her fault, she never backs down from a challenge no matter how stupid or dangerous it is. :facehoof:

    #98 · Chapter 1 · 30w, 13h ago · · ·
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    Having not read the previous chapter's before it's featurrette, I must say that I certainly enjoyed the previous chapter's of this story and this one too. I only hope you hurry, because you may be my new favorite author. :ajsmug:

    #99 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 6d ago · · ·
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    just a simple yes! will do as well, people!

    but i'll be just like you: YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES!!!! It's back!!!! AWESOME!:pinkiehappy:

    #100 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1463315 Do not dump a story you are working on just because you do not think that it will compare to someone else's story. Besides, you do not know how much people will like your story unless you write it. Another thing, even if no one liked your story, who cares? You write because you want to write, not to be popular. Sorry if I sound a little harsh, but you cannot give up on something that you want to do so easily!

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