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Some are edited stright from the show (I edited the pic with fluttershy covered in dirt myself, from an episode screenshot I took), while others are vectors from the free-to-all MLP Vectorclub on DeviantArt.
And no, the one who was with Rainbow Dash was a pegasus, remember? The room mate's a unicorn, and you'll see who he dates in a future fic!
So far I've read now, I don't like as much as your Dash story: That one really pulled me in. This one kinds of keeps me on the surface and like I'm actually watching another person/pony. It might have to do with the fact that I'm a girl and the protagonist is clearly male. The Dash story was completely ambiguous, with the exception of the mature part. And despite the mature part, I can really applaud and appreciate that. I might also not like it as much because Fluttershy is not really my favorite pony.
Still, it sure is another really good story. Keep it up! I'm looking forward to your next one X3
Thank you for your views on the story, I know it's hard to come across a 2nd person fic where "you" are female in it, but I'm glad you still think it's a good read either way!
By the way, I know someone called TheGentlemanCreeper (he's on my Watching list on my profile) and he made a female 2nd person fic with Applejack as the love interest. It's called Swing, I'd recommend it! 
, also i see what you did there at the end. 
This is so incredibly good. *sniff*
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Well my heart is nearly exploding...
I can't tell you how much I love this story. This makes me go really happy :D
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Not quite, remember Feeling Pinkie Keen? Pinkie has a bath that I can assume she uses herself (I wouldn't imagine the Cakes helping her do something that private) and she claims to brush her teeth very often. The ponies can reach easily parts of their bodies that normal horses can't (See Rainbow Dash with her hooves behind her head when she relaxes/does stretches in Fall Weather Friends, among many other examples) so it's probably not that hard to rub some soap on your hooves and clean yourself that way.
TL;DR: dexterous hooves and there's examples in the show.
Very nice read! Not too fond of the way it just kinda ended like that, but it was very fun and interesting to read. Almost no mistakes that I can see, and the story is very good, I read it all the way through in one sitting. (Not that it was all that long) Keep up the good work!
Image: http://i.imgur.com/eeW28.pngi can't wait for another story
If I say I have a Fluttershy fettish, it's a fettish that I've had before I read this. I have always thought that Fluttershy was the cutest of the Mane 6. And I wouldn't say I have a cave fettish of a crying fettish per se. However, I do have a "drama fettish". And I think that crying and I think that crying and trapped in the cave (and death) qualify as elements in the drama fettish.
Honestly, I don't know why I have a drama fettish. I think that maybe I just like how it feels to want to comfort someone who has been hurt somehow. Perhaps I just like feeling the emotion in general. Because if you knew me in person, you'd know that I don't often express my emotions...
...Or maybe it's just a simple drama fettish.
I see what you did there! 
I really love this story, not only because it's written in first person, but mostly because it's just so adorable and cute :)
I allso really love how this relatively tough main character becomes a cute, goofy love fool :3
now if you will excuse me, I'm new here, and i have a favourite / like button to find :p
I first found out about Crowley by a friend suggesting the Apple Jack story. I had liked the story and style in that fic, but I find this one to be even better. Second person is such a fun way to read stories and I found the flow and literary elements really shined in this fiction. Fluttershy has always been my favorite pony and it was very interesting to see the darker side of caring for so many animals and being dependent by many. Thanks for the high quality fiction. 
"Perhaps you could set it to Dark for just this chapter"
I always have it on dark 
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Oh god, dat sleeping Fluttershy!
Image: http://i.imgur.com/qr8QN.jpgJoke's on you, I already HAD all three of those fetishes!
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I was listening to some music, and I happened to read Fluttershy's "Thank you" right as the piece hit it's happy climax, and now I feel SO good inside! 
All my love for this story!
Agreed. I always read these in the dark. 
You write good stories my friend. lol
great fic crowley :did you talk to the dead?: als on chapter 5 it says "you guess your roomate is making so breakfast himself" i dont recal him say something 'bout his roommate before so either it was the unicorn or maybe its a mistake or maybe butterscotch was in fluttershys house? anyway, is derpy the unicorns date?
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