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zyr1987


I'm Zyr1987 (Rhymes with sir) and I'm currently the only person to write stories about Fleur de Lis to any great extent. I also ship extensively and have been taking to combining the two in my stories

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Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy are preparing a practice course for the Best Young Fliers Competition, when a small problem causes the stressed out cyan pegasus to lash out at her friend. Fluttershy decides she's had enough and gives Rainbow Dash a verbal beatdown, as well as "the stare."

Both pegasi feel guilty about what happened and are convinced that they've ruined their friendship. Will they be able to make it up to each other?

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Sounds like a sort of what if fic. :trixieshiftright:

Might have been intresting if "Putting Your Hoof Down" had featured Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy snapped at her too. :rainbowhuh:

1447833 It is sort of a what if fic, though now it's my personal head-canon

And honestly, I kind of wish Rainbow was in "putting your hoof down" for Futtershy to yell at. It would have been amazing to watch.

1447962 And we could have used an explanation as to where the heck Twilight was during that episode as well. :eeyup:

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In her library studying ancient, obscure, magical history of course. Or reading the latest Daring Doo with Rainbow Dash.//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rainbow_Dash_lolface.png

1468422 Hm maybe THAT'S what Hasbro's explanation is, in any case it's not a very good one. :trixieshiftright:

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It's better than them trying to "fix" errors by making mis-colored toys into new characters at least. I kind of wish they would grow up about that sort of thing. Is "Sorry bronies, we got the color wrong, a new shipment of Princess Celestia, properly colored, is on the way." too much maturity and responsibility to ask for anymore?

1468579 Yeah Hasbro screwed up on the toys, I don't know why they thought that little girls would buy such cheap Chinese made plastics, I know I could do a better job if I had the right materials. :facehoof:

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I would much prefer Teeny Baby style toys, you remember the little animals made of really good quality materials? They had dragons alligators, bears, ponies, lions, platypi, giraffes, etc. and they were all really well made and durable.

1469986 Yes well Hasbro decided that cheeply made toys created from Chinese plastic would sell better, a big mistake that they are only now starting to correct. :ajbemused:

1447962 If this is your own head-canon, does RD still get mad at FS with her cheering in Sonic Rainboom?
Also, thank Celestia there's somepony else who noticed how much of a jerk RD was in Dragonshy! I thought I was the only one, what with all the FlutterDash overshadowing this episode.
Would've loved to see 'Putting Your Hoof Down' in this version. Maybe you could make some sequels...? Hint, hint. :pinkiehappy:

1501686 Headcanon isn't always perfect, right? Right?

Yeah, Dash's jerkishness always bugged me in that episode, especially when comparing their relationship there to an episode like Hurricane Fluttershy. I may be a Flutterdash shipper myself, but I also take all canon into account, and a seeing contradiction in canon such as that one deserves some explanation in my mind

As for sequels, we'll have to see. I'm knee deep in another project at the moment, though it would be fun to write Fluttershy taking her assertiveness training too far with her old friend, then start to realize just how far gone she is.

1501773 You'd think being her oldest friend, she'd show restraint, but it took another season for her to do just that in 'Hurricane Fluttershy'. That episode always did bug me, too, and still does.
As for Putting Your Hoof Down, considering the MANY Brony animators and fan voice actresses, I think the fans will eventually creat a 'Deleted scene' with Fluttershy and RD.

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