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  • T Luna's Story: Rise of the Lunar Stallions

    Luna falls comatose and is revived by the love-sick kiss of one of Celestia's guards.
    44,461 words · 11,393 views  ·  951  ·  25
  • T FREAKING Pony Fan Fics!

    Ponies write fan fictions about each other.
    4,157 words · 13,137 views  ·  1,213  ·  36
  • T The Affection of Princess Nightmare Moon

    SEQUEL! Nightmare Moon tries her hoof at wooing one of her subjects. Meanwhile Chrysalis returns to feed on Celestia.
    36,040 words · 6,441 views  ·  1,149  ·  35
  • T Judge Celestia: Upon the Throne of Justice

    Celestia allows a radio show to broadcast cases from the Noon Day Court.
    15,310 words · 1,463 views  ·  243  ·  4
  • T Let the Silence Sing

    Celestia decides that Big Mac's barn is an excellent place to take naps. Big Mac decides that Celestia is a welcome guest.
    14,189 words · 9,902 views  ·  1,629  ·  53
  • T Luna's Story 3: Long Live the Night

    Princess Luna must battle a possessed Celestia with her Lunar Stallions.
    37,463 words · 5,510 views  ·  576  ·  16 · gore
  • E How and Why

    An elderly Twilight Sparkle goes back in time to tell herself to stop studying.
    3,284 words · 3,902 views  ·  488  ·  13
  • T Seeing the Pattern

    Using the Pinkie Sense, Pinkamina prevents the deaths of others and cheats fate.
    32,995 words · 19,163 views  ·  1,157  ·  45

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  • 16w, 1d
    New Story, Upon the Throne of Justice

    I thought Judge Luna could use a sequel, since its been almost a year since then. Enjoy! :D

    Judge Celestia: Upon the Throne of Justice

    3 comments · 272 views
  • 17w, 4d
    Could I get an artist's help?

    26 comments · 573 views
  • 18w, 6d
    So I'd like to combine two stories, can you?

    I've gotten in trouble for deleting and reposting a story in the past, and I'd rather not stir up any more trouble with the mods. Does anyone know if I would get in trouble if I delete Let the Silence Sing 2 and post it's chapters in Let the Silence Sing 1. It doesn't much feel like a sequel as much as it does a continuation-- it just feels like it would be less confusing for the readers if it was all in one place.

    Thoughts? Advice?

    I've written to knighty in the past but never recieved a reply, I think the poor guy might be too busy to answer individual problems like this. The site is big and no doubt full of bigger problems. I just don't wanna stir the pot without asking around first.

    26 comments · 603 views
  • 19w, 3d
    MAres are fruggin' awesome

    When your future father in lawe invites you over to help clear and dig a pit to make a decorative pond, you can be laid up for a week. I am not an atheltic stallion-- but damn if it doesn't get you the nicest attention from the mare in my life. I just wish she was shorter so I could tuck her head under my chin when I hug her. Guhhh, mares! You need'a be shorter! Shorter I say!

    You know what rocks though, while you're laid up and sore? Ice cream cake. Frug yeah ice cream cack! Ice cream cake and some Divinity Dragon Commander, holy crap that Dwarven Princess is hot. I would motorboat those puppies for HOURS. <3 <3 <3

    What're you guys up to? I'm doing my show on youtube D&D Stories, writing a novel "Toxica the All knowing" and being a lazy bum. Finally got a job at a grocery store, so I gotta keep at it at youtube to make ends meet, pffft! You know who sucks stallion scrotum? WHoever put loopy stuff in my pain meds, those sonsvbitches.

    God damn I need a soda. No wait pop. These Minnysotanms call them "pops" up here. This is apparently the 1950's in the the the northern states. I am so thirstry! Hynnn...

    I am still so sore, too much digging that silly pond thing-- ah well, nap tiome.

    Bye bye,  love Aeigs!

    36 comments · 500 views
  • 22w, 2d
    Let the Silence Sing Sequel :O

    You guys demanded it, so have at it!

    Let the Silence Sing 2

    Hope you enjoy. :)


    6 comments · 424 views
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All of Equestria is united in celebration for the return of their beloved Princess Nightmare Moon. But when Celestia and everypony else recieve her she's skeletally starved, filthy, and very nearly dead. Meanwhile, while everypony's eye is turned, a lusty Blueblood pursues Twilight Sparkle, intent on adding her bloodline to his own so his family might step closer to godhood. (Alternate Universe, there never was a Princess Luna)

First Published
15th Oct 2012
Last Modified
22nd Dec 2012
#2 · 105w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

I'll be watching.... and waiting for your reason why she is not called "Luna".

#3 · 105w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

You have peaked my interests. Continue.

#4 · 105w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1439064 Alternate universe. There never was a Luna. :derpyderp2:

#5 · 105w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

Interesting, very interesting

#6 · 105w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

Looks good! Hope you'll make more soon!

#7 · 105w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

Guarantee this will be featured.

You have my interest.  Now, proceed.

#8 · 105w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

Sounds already good! Fave!:twilightsmile:

#9 · 105w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1439085 Luna was given the name "Nightmare Moon" by others when she rebelled against Celestia. If Celestia was as vigilant against others bad-mouthing her little sister, then she must have had a different name at one point; if not "Luna" then something else.

Just saying.

#10 · 105w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

Ooh, interesting!  I like this so far!

Celestia’s body was always much warmer than the average pony. Being a goddess of the sun tended to make one hotter than average, Twilight supposed.


That sounds very familiar, Aegis.

-Vivas Noctus!

#11 · 105w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

Commence read...later.

#13 · 105w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·


Has peaked my interest.

Indeed, I shall be tracking this now, as I am much in need of MOAR.

Or shall I say...

Take my moustaches, you are worthy: :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

#15 · 105w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

Well this is interesting idea for a story...

I'll be watching from now on.

#16 · 105w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

ok it was the first chapter it was ok it did not blow me away but i am interested

#17 · 105w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

You have my attention. I'm looking forward to seeing where this one goes. Seems a bit dark, but this should be interesting...

#18 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

Somepony get that mare a damn sammich!

#19 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

Fluttershy, what should I do with this story?

"You will LOVE IT!"  :flutterrage:

#20 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

Huh.  Different.  I like this kind of different.  Yet another story for me to follow there aegis.

#21 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

Now this is a take I haven't seen done before. I can't wait for more!

#22 · 105w, 5d ago · 6 · · Prologue ·


Maybe not. If you take away the bad-dream meaning then 'Nightmare Moon' would be thought of by ponies as 'The Night Mare of the Moon', as in the female horse who rules the night and controls the moon. Considering that the Equestrian word 'Nightmare' for bad dream probably came from Nightmare Moon(canon villian) calling herself that, then if Celestia keeps her sister from becoming a storybook villian then the Equestrian word 'nightmare(bad dream)' would never arise.

Languages are funny like that

#23 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

This first chapter puts me in mind of this song...


Also this is a version of Celestia I really like, ensuring her sister was represented properly in History books. Also interesting to see Nightmare return in such a weakened state, it's a new approach I haven't read before, besides that one horrible trollfic I read :facehoof: Still this is a good first chapter that just makes me want to say two words.

Go On...

#24 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

Luna no exist????.... :twilightoops:

Interesting.... Very interesting...

#25 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

I look forward to seeing more of this.

#26 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·



Dat .gif

#27 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

So the immortal Princess is still vulnerable to things like starvation...... Interesting.

#28 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1440618 There's a big difference between immortal and invulnerable. You can't kill a werewolf without silver, but you can still shoot it in the face with a normal gun and it would hurt real bad. :twilightoops:

#29 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1440675 Very true. People do seem to get 'immortal' and 'invulnerable' mixed up alot don't we. Continue the good work sir. I expect great things from this, as with all stories of yours that I have had the pleasure of reading. You have yet to dissapoint.

#30 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

Tonight, however, she was waiting with baited breath along with everypony else.

It's actually "bated" not "baited". :twilightblush:


I blame DBZ.

#31 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

Wouldn't the Luna be before Nightmare Moon?  Was Luna originally named Nightmare Moon in this universe?

#32 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·


That seems to be the theory, though I would have had it be that "Nightmare Moon" did not exist and Luna did all of her historical actions as herself, while still following what Master Aegis has in store for this tale.

#33 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·


There was a Celestia though with an alicorn sister associated with the moon. We demand further explanation!

>>1439064 >>1439224

I concur. It doesn't make sense for her name to have been Nightmare Moon. Also, if her atrocities were so great, I doubt Celestia would have left the truth of them untouched, lest they scare ponies.

I expect an alternate rationale for Twilight being Celestia's student, since the canon universe seems to imply that Celestia intended for her to wield the elements of harmony. I'm guessing the elements don't exist here. If sending her away was uncontrolled magic, why would Celestia let Twilight be near the returning magic  it, much less than any other pony?

Anyway, I must congratulate on what appears to be yet another story with a unique take on things. :twilightsmile:

#34 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

Here's the only thing I got:

The raised dais began to hum like a tuning fork, every dark crack and rune and marking one it turning a glowing white.

I would guess you meant "on".

This is a very intriguing story. I don't know why I never thought about the whole "thousand years on the moon with no food or water" thing before. They kind of conveniently ignore that in the show.

#35 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·


Real bad, man.

Like that one guy in MIB that could regenerate his head if it somehow got destroyed.

#36 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

This comment shall be full of both useless comments and [hopefully] helpful suggestions. READ 'EM ALL!


The purple unicorn mare put on her reading glasses, poor nearsighted thing
Wouldn't she be far-sighted if she had to use reading glasses?

Oh, and shouldn't Nightmare Moon be "Night-Mare Moon" in this case, if she's not to be seen as a monster?

Adorable or Adorkable? Idk. 'Adorkable' used right is almost always win.

every dark crack and rune and marking one it turning a glowing white.
and sterile white eyes homed in one the rune-covered dais.
on* in both cases

“Nightmare!” Celestia shrieked, aghast and fear in her eyes.
How about just "Sister!"?

while others made a fast and thick litter to bear away the battered Princess on.
What? It makes sense, but I had to think about it.

She looked up at the purple mare with dull green, serpentine eyes.
You can safely remove the comma here. Dull can describe both.

#37 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

I'm liking where this is going.

#38 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Intensive Care ·

This is a very intriguing concept.  I can't wait to see where you go with this.

#39 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Intensive Care ·

I like where this is heading!

#40 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Intensive Care ·


Good story so far...

#41 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Intensive Care ·

:pinkiehappy: more plz

#42 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

Buck yes! I'm putting off reading some Australian shenanigans to read this.

#43 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Intensive Care ·

I really like the Story already! Please more!

#44 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Intensive Care ·

Take my Fav. And my upthumb. And my email-tracking. *nodnod* :twilightsmile:

#45 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Intensive Care ·

Other than creepy Blueblood, I'm really liking this. STAY AWAY from Twilight you creep!

#46 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Intensive Care ·

i want to get past the physical trauma and move onto the mental trauma already. Nightmare was alone on the moon for One Thousand Years. think about how damaging that would have to be.

#47 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Intensive Care ·


True.  It's not like she'd had any time to pack a WhinnyTendo game console . . .

#48 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

No Luna? Thats means our princess of the night is going full-on badflank! I'm liking this!:pinkiehappy:

#49 · 105w, 5d ago · · · Intensive Care ·

>>1440885 People ignore Celestia's actual reasoning for contracting Twilight far, far too often. Here's a quote from Cutie Mark Chronicles:

"You have a very special gift. I don't think I've ever come across a unicorn with your raw abilities. But you need to learn to tame these abilities through focused study."

Tame these abilities through focused study. Clearly Twilight would be a menace to society if she went around uncontrollably turning the population into potted plants. Celestia, being the only living being with experience handling that much power, has to help Twilight to handle her magical energies.

That's all there is to it. The part with the Elements may have been part of the plan from the beginning, or maybe not. Either way, Celestia chose her to train her in magic.

#50 · 105w, 5d ago · 1 · · Prologue ·

>>1439085  Changing someone's name doesn't make an alternate universe.

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