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After she is sent a story from Best of Craigslist, Luna decides to play a prank on her dear sister, with some disgustingly hilarious results.
Rated teen for language, potty (literally) humor and generally overall tastelessness.
Based on the BoCL posting DO NOT EAT PRINGLES FAT FREE POTATO CHIPS. THEY WILL GREASE YOUR ASS.
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I'm still not sure what I just read, but I loved it
First! Yes. I almost fell out of the chair at work while reading this. Well done!!!
An incredibly vague concept to base your story on, don't you think?
Oh, Celestia, I know the feeling (and I get it without fat free pringles).
Either way, epically hilarious.
Edit: Plenty of typos, though. You may want to go back through and fix those up.
1443601glad you enjoyed it!
1443670lol should I have added a warning to prevent worktime hilarity? Lol
1443675maybe... but I was inspired lol
1443688considerin I wrote this from my droid phone, a few typos don't concern me too much lol (once I have my laptop back, I shall edit out any and all typos)
Thank you everyone for the positive reviews!!!
Wonderful story, Biker, just great, funny, and etc.
1453589
Thank you. I'm glad that you've enjoyed the tale ^_^
LOLOLOLOLOOL
1460866 glad that you enjoyed the story, and thank you for faving it and giving it athumbs up!
A FANFIC THAT MENTIONS ME
ME
MEEEEEEE
*upvoted and favorited*
1473015 Well, since that kid keeps spoiling your fun, how about I make her a guest star in the next cupcakes story?
Thanks for the upvote and fav!
'By now, the pressure within the royal sphincter was getting pretty intense.'
And people said 'Cellar Door' was the most beautiful combination of words in the English Language... How wrong they were...
1488168 I have no clue where I come up with half the shit I do lol but I suspect George Carlin could have influenced some of the alliterations
Well, that was... different.
Also, what do ponies put BBQ sauce on anyway?
1493514
yeah... neve thought about that... maybe on Pinkie's cupcakes?
COMEDY GOLD
no luna not no
YEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS BECAUSE THIS IS REALLY HILARIOUS
1833307 1791237 Goot that you two enjoyed it!
1833315 thank you i really appreciate your kindness
1833341 Your welcome, and I appreciate that you found and read my story
1833350
ermigawd.
1833418 lol, At a loss for words?
1833434
Basically. Any kid's shows in mind when you put her there?
1833443 You refer to the banishment?
Telletubbies, Barney the Purple Dinosaur, and Dora The Explorer
(I thought about throwing Spongebob into the mix, but I remembered A ruling back in 901AB where Celestia had outlawed cruel and unusual punishment, and I was pushing my luck legally with the Telletubbies.
Then again, Celestia WRITES the buckin laws, lol, so if she wanted to.... poor Luna would have to be kissing Patrick all throughout this 2nd banishment!
1833468
Well, Teletubbies alone would snap me into an uncontrollable, unstoppable insanity. Combine that with Barney and Dora, and you're neck-deep in a hellpit. Spongebob would make you irrevocably insane, with no hope of escape.
And now I've confused myself, holy crap.
1833476 well, considering the prank Luna pulled on Celestia.... Yeah, Luna got off lucky not being shipped with the Squarepants crew
1833487
Very
But I would've expected that coming from Tia Celestia
1833493 True....
Hmmm.... possible idea... Ponies racing tuner cars!
(ok, I am VERY random and watching Initial D right now lol)
1833525
Oh my God do it.
I'm reading 3 fics at the same time and being an idiot with my mind, so I SAY DO IT
1833539 Ah... a fan of Japanese anime as well? (from your enthusiastic response to my post here)
1833542
Depends on the anime, but yes, for the most part, anime is awesome.
1833547 My favorite shows are:
Initial D
Cowboy Bebop
Samurai Champloo
Samurai 7
Death Note
Appleseed
Ghost in the Shell
Excel Saga
1833566
Death Note
Naruto
Hetalia; Axis Powers
and I haven't seen many others, so yeah...
1833587 You can watch Initial D right on Youtube... if you need, I could send a link. You prefer subbed or dubbed?
1833622
Nah, I'm finishing up a fic chapter, then another story, and then I have to prep for tomorrow. Carpet cleaners are coming, so I have to move tables
I wouldn't have time.
1833634 Damn... carpet cleaning costs a hell of a lot. Gonna take a chunk out of your Platnium card
1833658
I'm still living with Mom, so it's not all bad.
1833678 EPIC! Make HER pay for the carpet cleaning!
1833709
She ALREADY IS!
1833718
*POOMPH*
Damn... this always happens when watch racing...
Okay that was good. You had my ass laughing the entire time.
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All of my yes and filthy humor guffawing
2121917 Very pleased that you enjoyed this one.
Da hell did I just read...lol I did not knew this...funny as hell
2122057 I am a riffer, and this MUST be riffed. I will link you when I have done it.
2190854 Thank you
I am dying of laughter right now
2588695 Very pleased that you're enjoying this