After hours at the Sugarcube Corner, a heavy storm thundering outside, Pinkie finds a pony knocking on the door.
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Rarity is totally prettier with a wet mane.
I like it. Writing drunk is hilariously funny
Pinkie can be shipped with anypony (Pinkie/Rarity and Pinkie/Twilight fit WAY better than Rainbow Dash)
Keep up the work
Hmm. Pinkity? Eh...
I dunno. I mean, this is well written and all, no question about that, but I guess it's just an awkward ship for me. Which is why, um, I'm probably not gonna track it. Sorry!
But, I'll totally drop a like so it can be made known to the people who would like this ship! Best of luck in your writing adventure, my friend!
So Pinkie Pie is at least sympathetic toward Spike. This makes me curious as to how she'll handle telling him after the two ponies fall in love. But if Rarity gives herself to Pinkie Pie without considering his feelings first, then this'll just be another shipfic where no one gives a horseapple about him.
Pinkie Pie is such a good friend! She always knows just what to do to cheer her friends up. Lovely story.
Like I said before, this was a nice little story! Even if you may have written the first part while drunk, it actually is pretty nicely done, coherent, and very in-character. Overall, it turned out pretty good! Glad to be of help!
This is quite heartwarming. Pinkie Pie and Rarity showing up as a pair in the actual episode made this all the more interesting. Great job!
Ya know, there's not enough Rarity/Pinkie fics. I like this one.
Oh, this is lovely. (I don't do that well when I'm sober.)
Not bad at all, will be watching, this has a nice buildup possibility
Awww. I always did like Raripie ships. Adorable ^-^
Hmm... Middle of the featured box, 37:0 like to dislike ratio, no giant feedback.
I'll read later.
I certainly hope this is featured. A much stronger start than most of what I've read in the past few months.
And I know it was kind of the point, but I love just how little dialogue there was up until the very end; it really helped Pinkie to come across as a caring, faithful, emotionally intelligent friend. And the narration wasn't at all lacking, either. Fine work, author.
If you're fine with any ship as long as it's well-written, just go ahead and check this out now. There really isn't too much to say yet; it's just good.
wouldn't be surprised to see this featured tomorrow, very very good fic.
So... maybe tidiness was the tofu and cheese? Hmm...
Perfect mental image of Pinkie Pie: ACHIEVED
The title was misleading. I thought this was gonna be a Pinkie X Luna shipfic. (which I don't think anyone has done yet....)
Anyway, Rarity is my favorite pony, so for having a well written first chapter, you also get a fave. keep it up!
this one was cuuute :D
Anyway, cute story bro. Not really a fan of Raripie ships... or anything that has to do with Rarity, but I can overlook that for this story
I DIDN'T SEE THIS COMING AT ALL. I was expecting some sort of epic adventure but then suddenly WARM AND FUZZY FEELINGS EVERYWHERE.
...I did enjoy it though. I need to learn how to read the tags on these things.
Awesome story. And there's gonna be more, you say? Excellent! Well done with how you're handling Pinkie Pie, in this, it's very good.
"Write drunk; edit sober." - Ernest Hemingway.
You're doin it right.
So I went to bed last night after a hard day at work, but before I went to bed, I saw that this story was actually doing much better than expected. This morning... I'm greeted with two things...
The hell!? Did I accidentally log into some other person's account!? I've never had a quarter of that number EVER. It's as if... if...
... *begins hyperventilating*...
... Note to self, make sure to get blackout drunk much more often before writing. Seems to help...
>>14297701429770 Considering how prolific that one picture of Rarity wet in the rain in "Sisterhooves Social" is, and how many times they've recolored it to fit almost every single other pony out there... I tend to agree Once again, thanks for all of your help!!
>>14298591429859 Not only is drunken writing funny writing, but apparently it is best writing. Sure, I had to edit out a few lines ("Rarity looked as upset at Republicans were when President Obama won the election" didn't quite work...), but overall, it's all there. As for the Pinkie/X ships, I tend to see RariPie to be the hardest one out there (ApplePie, while the best name, is up there as well). And I have a few friends who would give you nasty looks over saying RainbowPie doesn't work
>>14299041429904 Hey, I know how you feel. No worries! Thanks for the upvote anyway, though your lack of a track means no pony icon for you!
>>14299181429918 Anyone that has followed my blog, or at least knows my feelings on shippings, knows that any ship that involves Rarity HAS to incorporate Spike in some way. Now, whether that is an internal struggle because she feels something for him, or just a mention on how to deal with him and his crush (depending on her level of mutual feelings towards him) depends on the story entirely.
>>14299841429984 Honestly, given the situation, I could see any of her friends doing this KINDA. They would definitely go about it differently sure (Twilight would ask what the hell happened, Applejack and Rainbow would go out to beat the hell out of the guy, and Fluttershy would be too nervous to say anything too awkward), but it was Pinkie that she ran into, and so let's roll with it!
>>14300441430044 Thanks! And I am so so so so glad that you took the time to help me out with it! Major favor you did me
>>14302231430223 That thought process might've crossed my mind when I wrote this story......... Anyway, always loved the idea of the dynamic of those two together (not in a relationship, just interacting), and I'm glad it turned out how I wanted it to!
>>14305971430597 As I said before, I feel that RariPie is "hard mode" of shipping. Two complete opposites, with their only similarity being they enjoy social gatherings (albeit very different ones). This is obviously not the best one out there (by far), but I like to think I've done a respectable job so far!
>>14307371430737 It's all in the proper drink that you are drinkin'. You drink what I was drinking, homemade raspberry lemoncello, and things get wild. Go with something stupid like a few cans of Four Loco, and you end up taking a dump on your keyboard.
>>14309281430928 The suspense is killing us all...
>>14311711431171 A viewpoint shared by myself. I think I would rank this as my #2 ship, or at least in my top 5
>>14311771431177 As of this typing, it's now 97:2, with some feedback, so read it already!! Also, since you have a sword, find those two, and hunt them down like the rodents they are!!!!
>>14313211431321 Your wishes have been granted apparently, for as I posted at the beginning of this, it already has! But yeah, serious thanks for the complements. I really try to make sure that my spelling and grammar is well done, even if the story sucks (not implying this one sucks).
>>14314701431470 You were not surprised, and thanks!!!
>>14316691431669 This was actually one of the lines I wrote while blackout drunk. I don't remember writing it, but I'm glad my sloshed self thought of it!
>>14324051432405 I hear you there. I realized that it was going to sound slightly misleading, but thankfully, the character tags made it a little more clear. Obviously, the title comes from the very last lines Pinkie and Rarity share with each other in this chapter. I was debating another title like "Caught in the Rain" or "Despondent White", but those sounded... weird That said, I don't like ships with the alicorns at all (the whole ancient pony shipping with a normal one), but I digress.
>>14324451432445 I'm glad it turned out that way, and not to the point of icky sappiness
>>14325711432571 ... Sorry, but I can't think of an original response to this. Maybe... take your insulin because you now have diabeetus?
>>14326041432604 It's funny. Rarity is my 2nd least favorite of the mane six (Applejack takes that title). However, if you look at my stories, you see that she's shipped in more of my stories than any of the other ponies out there. MADNESS I TELL YOU!!
>>14327551432755 Nah, my huge and epic adventure is the other story I'm writing. Btw, shameless self advertising ftw!
>>14328671432867 That's an interesting quote. If you were to ask anyone today, I would assume that they would say things like "dude... smoke weed" or "take acid" or other drugs like that, rather than drinking, but hey, who am I to argue with a quote!
And once again, thank you all that commented on this sucker! I like to think that this is proof that I read every single one of them, and actually try to think about everything you say!
Nice Story +1 Feature Box Brother Brohoof /)
Why? I don't have-*flop*
>>14329631432963 I understand that feeling...
>>14329631432963 You're welcome! And I was happy to help! Anytime, man!
Congrats on the story doing so well!
Hmm... I had little pony emocons all over my last post, yet they didn't display... hmm...
>>14329741432974 \o/ Ain't gonna lie though, I never understood the /) or (\ for a "brohoof". I've looked, and I gotta tell ya, looks nothing like it
>>14329971432997 ... Well... this is an awkward situation...
>>14331111433111 What? The whole "I'm having a panic attack" sort of situation? Yeah... yeah it's funny. Either way, I just wanna take a second to congratulate you on your story doing better than mine
>>14335331433533 Anytime? Alright then. Christmas morning, I'll have five stories for you to edit!
>>14336101433610 Haha! Yes that feeling. I don't think that I have completely recovered yet. Besides, at least you're doing good, too.
>>14336101433610 XD All right, can do!
>>14329631432963 I will my master...
After I find the 7 who did to my story
You're the new MallaJong: creating ships that have never been done before, and somehow making it work.
I like this very much.
ah buck it. i have been reading to many dark/tragady stories lately. lets have a story shipping my former favorite pony () with my former least favorite pony().
tracking with interest.
>>14341481434148 Too many dark fics? I hear ya, time for some HAPPINESS!!
This story is so adorable! I rarely see Raripie ship fics, and ths is done really well. I love it! It needs to update soon!!!!!
Lols... This is such a sweet story.
I bet reading this would trigger RD's gag reflex so many times.
>>14342751434275 I really do wish stories worked that way for me but he closest a story has got me to feeling something was a deep depression ... ah well
What a beautiful story. You certainly have a way with words and I have never seen a PinkiexRarity fic before so I'm definetely gonna keep track of this!
Raritie? Pinkity? Certainly not a very common ship, and one I have a bit of trouble believing, but the story is interesting. Favorited!
I seem to remember pony emoticons don't show up if you have too many of them. Though I cannot remember for the life of me how many is too many.
EDIT: Okay, the max is twenty.
>>14297701429770 Seems legit.
I have the biggest Chick boner ever.
"A sudden shift from her partner, followed by a gentle rub of Rarity forelegs against her own brought her eyes open again,"
I believe it should be "Rarity's forelegs."
I have to say, I am VERY impressed with how you write Pinkie Pie (and her thoughts). You make her in character, and being peppy and thinking like Pinkie Pie, all while being a serious and well handled character. You took a serious situation and a typically not-so-serious pony and melded them together very well.
Darling, you've captured why I love Pinkie. She always knows just what a pony needs and doesn't need, she is always smiling and willing to help, and this line. "Rarity must have had an exceptionally large soul, with paintings and throw rugs and pretty little knickknacks hung all over the place." That Pinkie logic is wonderful. Please continue drinking heavily if it causes you to write this well. I will be awaiting updates with baited breath.
Hmm... So I've realized that this story has almost as many trackers as some of my other stories have views... sweet merciful God, what has liquor done to me!?
>>14336241433624 Thankfully, I've started to calm down from the near panic-attack I was starting to have. I mean, it's only a few hundred people that are tracking this story now that are now going to judge how my future work is going to turn out and whether it is good or a useless pile of garbage causing them to wield pitchforks and clubs and knives and OH GOD HELP ME!!!
>>14338521433852 By the way, each of them is as long as Fallout: Equestria ended up being...
>>14339901433990 I now have 9, so I'm starting to think that they are the same mopey people that go around spamming dislikes because... umm... insanity?
>>14340601434060 Heh, well, most of his stories (if not all) were all Spike shipping with someone else (or himself in one case). Of course, I don't plan on getting banned from this site either, so there's that
>>14341481434148 Pinkie Pie is your former favorite pony? Blasphemy!!! Pinkie Pie is forever best pony, and any argument against that is instantly invalid.
>>14342751434275 Yay for happy fictions! Dark ones are alright (except gore. I can't do gore), but I get numb to them after a while.
>>14343321434332 As I said before, I feel RariPie is hard mode of shipping. Of course, I think most ships with Rarity are harder than normal (with the exception of Spike of course), but that's just me.
>>14346001434600 Please, if she saw this fiction, she would gag sure, but then she would turn around and blackmail Rarity with it a heartbeat later.
>>14346101434610 For me, it's not quite that. Whenever I see a sad fic, I do actually feel sad (some have actually made me shed tears). When I read a over-the-top happy/romantic fic (if it is well written), I do feel happy. If I read a clop fic, I feel... umm... well... nevermind.
>>14346811434681 I myself have only seen one other RariPie story out there, and frankly, I think it was better done. Still, I'm satisfied with how this one turned out.
>>14349011434901 Heh, and that is why I think this ship is hard mode. It's NOT a pair that would really ever get together except in the strangest of situations. Still... I can believe... right?
>>14356381435638 Good to know! Sweet! Thanks for the info. Sadly, that means I can't spam the emocons all over my comment to each person. I now have to be very selective with who I give them to...
>>14358131435813 ... I... umm... well... glad you liked it then...
>>14359951435995 Yikes! Looks like one was overlooked! Fixed it now! And thanks a lot. I do like the whole "partial 3rd person/pony" perspective that I typically do. It's 3rd person, but the narrator is more inside JUST one character's head, and not the others. I think Game of Thrones did this, but I never read them...
>>14360821436082 Thanks for the complements, though my liver is crying at the prospect of your suggestion...
>>14368711436871 Ugh, you have to remind me, dontcha?
>>14368711436871 Really? O: Whoa! That's crazy!
>>14369691436969 I regret nothing!
>>14369711436971 And they're all in Russian
>>14369781436978 XD No problem, I have a friend who's Mother tongue is Russian, so he can translate them for me!
Hm...I don't know if you'd mind giving out the name of the other RariPie shipfic you've mentioned a couple of times? If you remember it?
Though I can see why you might not want to distract your readers from your own story. If that's the case, sorry.
>>14370591437059 Well... umm... I use Hebrew at times as well!
>>14371311437131 Psh. I'm surprised that nobody really thought of it themselves. It's Donny's Boy's Seeking Beauty. Damn good story.
>>14371471437147 Shoot! Guess I'll go take some college Hebrew classes or something.
Ah hah. That was somewhere within the 250 or so fics within my to read list. I shall now mentally move that higher on the list. Thank you, good sir.
The only reason I list Pinkie as a former favourite is because she's currently wrestling with Luna, Rarity, Lyra, Derpy and Octavia for top place, so I stuck all six as joint second as a compromise.
...well this is an unusual pairing, but cute so far! Looking forward to more. =3
This story is really good! I rarely see Pinkie Pie x Rarity fics, so it makes the story even better!
The characters were handled very nicely!
I felt sorry for Rarity because of what happened to her.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
I'm depressed now... And I don't know about following this. Not much of a big Rarity fan. Out of all the Mane 6, she's my least favorite. Only because of how she behaves.
Hey, recognized your username from somewhere, and figured I'd give this a read. Good job with it.
First Rarity/Pinkie fic I've read. Comforting Pinkie is wonderful. I have the warm and fuzzies now. Yay! Looking forward to more!
>>14368711436871 It sad yet true. If you find one story that gets featured without dislikes for a whole day, I'd die of shock... not really.
The only instance I saw that happen was a MinecraftxMLP crossover.
A well-done ship oneshot. Congratulations.
I guess I just need my feels to develop, but for now I just credit you for you magnificent writing skills, I tip my non-existent top hat to you good sir !
p.s you should drink more often to to improve your writing skills again!
I have to say... I almost didn't give this a chance. Pinkity just seemed like such an odd ship for me. I'm glad to say that I was DEAD wrong. You made it work in quite a nice way that made me feel all fuzzy and warm inside. Guess I'm proven wrong once again. I once thought that TwiPie was a very odd ship, and now it's one of my favorites, right up there with TwiDash and TwiLuna... Maybe TwiJack and TwiMac. Oh god, all of my favorite ships involve Twilight.
*Ahem* Regardless. Tracked and thumbed up. You deserve it for successfully pulling off a hard mode shipping.
As of this typing, this story now has almost 2100 views, which is almost 3x more than my next highest one-shot. Further, this story has 408 trackings, which is more than all of my other stories combined multiplied by two. Finally, this story has 270 likes, which is by far more people liking my story than that like the real me in real life...
>>14371821437182 You do that... and tell me how it goes... in Manderin Chinese
>>14375101437510 Oh you are most certainly welcome good chap
>>14375341437534 My only complaint with that list is that, other than Rarity and POTENTIALLY Luna, all of the ponies on that list are influenced by non-canon work. Don't get me wrong, you aren't wrong at all for saying any of those, just I feel when picking favorites, you shouldn't use fanfics and such.
>>14376351437635 And more you will see... just not this second
>>14376511437651 Thank you so much for all of your points. Yeah... kinda sucks what happened to Rarity, but she's a trooper, and she'll pull through. Further, she has Pinkie to help cheer her up, so that's a good thing as well!
>>14377741437774 Depressed!? Over what? The solemn mood that I painted? If that's it... well... err... I got nothin'
>>14378411437841 You might recognize me from the little humorous exchange we had The Scootaloo Diaries. I was messing with you about the whole "issue" of Cheerilee and Scoot being sisters in another Gen, which culminated into you burning me at the stake. At least, that's how I remember you.
>>14379171437917 Thanks! A few letters off of the actual holiday, but I mix up the spelling as well from time to time. ... ok... that was a bad joke. Sorry!
>>14379801437980 If Pinkie is anything OTHER than warm and fuzzy, then I don't accept her as real Pinkie, or something very strange happened in a long story.
>>14381451438145 Very true. Very very true. But yeah... didn't read that story. Looked... a little out there for me
>>14381611438161 Not entirely a one-shot! Still not complete!
>>14395151439515 Thank you good sir, and as with many of the other comments, my liver is crying as a result!
>>14396961439696 I'm taking a shot in the dark when I say that your favorite pony is Twilight...huh? But yeah, thanks for the try, and I'm glad I didn't disappoint!
Favorited, upvoted, subscribed to email updates.
I want to know what happened, who "he" is, and where this is going! Good fic so far!
Well, the thing is that I often find myself preferring the fandom and its works over the cartoon. Don't get me wrong, I love the show, but I read dozens of fanfics and otherwise get involved with the fandom a lot more. Heck, I haven't even finished watching season 2 yet- I gave up some where around sweet and elite/last round up because at the time applejack and rarity were my least favourite ponies (although my recent appreciation of rarity has taught me that there is no such thing as 'worst pony'), skipping straight to the season final.
As for Luna, my interpretation of her has become so twisted by canon and fanon that I can no longer remember which aspect is which. So yeah, maybe I shouldn't mix canon and fanon characters, but when you have difficulty remembering which is which...
This is amazing part two/chapter two
>>14399291439929 I'll write a report about it! In Mandarin, backwards, upside down, in Yugoslavian.
>>14399291439929No, over the fact that I am now reminded that I am a crappy writer compared to pretty much everyone else on fimfiction (with the exception being the stories that have clearly just been thrown together last minute with no regard for plot or grammar.
>>14399291439929 Wait... your liver ... is crying? you should really get that checked out man... that cant be good
I'm Just going to ask :Who THE FUCKING HELL used Her?
I Just Want To know So I'll KILL HIM AND MAKE HIM INTO A CUPCAKE,A DELICIOUS ONE Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cloudchaser_dealwithit.pngLove and Tolerate The Shit Out Of Him Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cloudchaser_dealwithit.png Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png
Not bad. Not bad at all.
Oh my god! You must have some sort of odd Gypsy mystical powers or something!
But seriously, lol. You'd be right. She's the pony I most identify with and enjoy watching. It's Not to say that every ship I read has to have her. Just... Most do have her. I also rather enjoy Rarishy and Rarijack and a few others. Forgot to add Twixie earlier as well. Regardless... Looking forward to more feels from this story.
Yes, Pinkie is really able to do it even in such a situation, so I'm happy that Rarity has Pinkie to help her!
omg rarity and pinkie pie?!?! that's interesting
When i'm not inspired i just grab one random fimfic to get i get inspired, but you really make me had an IDEA!
thanks for the great work and keep on the boze!
Haha, oh yeah. That. I cancelled TSD because of that, then the horde of angry readers went after you. Right. Still though, congrats on the feature. It's good to see something up there that isn't pointless clop.
I have to say I enjoyed this greatly. Very, very well writen. I don't actually support any ships that haven't been hinted at in canon, so I naturally shy away from ship fics. Especially the cliched Fluttermac ones.
Seriously, the plot of nearly every Fluttermac is 'Big Mac breaks his thingamajig, Fluttershy helps, LURV'. And no one even stops to think that Fluttershy is not in the least bit qualified to heal him, or the fact that Sweet Apple Arces is closer to Ponyville Hospital than it is to Fluttershy's house.
I challenge someone to write a good Nurse Redheart/Big Mac story. You never see Nurse Redheart shipped in anything but a 2-nd person perspective story.
But back on track.
Despite my aversion to ship fics, I have to say that this was worth the read. Favorited.
Get to updating.
One of THE best ship fics I've ever read. Youre astute attention to detail and descriptive flair can't be slightly breathtaking.
Don't you dare stop this
It is a nice, good, and interesting start. Its quiet, expressive, emotive, and serene - I look forward to see how the story progresses.
So cute. n.n
Well, I'm now off of the featured page, so I suspect views and comments will drop off like nothing else. So now I feel safe replying again
Of course, I now have more trackers than I ever expected, and I'm fearful of displeasing them...
>>14400081440008 He is a male that had something to do with Rarity. That's all you're getting out of me right now
>>14400621440062 Got ya. Yeah. I have trouble with that a lot, especially when I'm writing. The worst is that I have a very long story going, and as such, their characters have all changed significantly because of the events in that story. Then I have to go back, and write this? Wasn't pretty at first, but throw in a pretty heavy conflict, and bam: it works!
>>14401011440101 Is that a demand for the next chapter? Assuming it is, you shouldn't worry too much. It's coming along nicely!
>>14401071440107 ... I'm not sure what this was supposed to mean...
>>14401281440128 I find this acceptable.
>>14402191440219 Do me a favor: read the first few paragraphs of this chapter. That, my friend, is what I was writing in Janruary. Granted yes, my editors are much more skilled now than back then, but just... LOOK AT IT!!! Point is, find a good and regular editor, keep writing, and make sure your ideas are fresh. The skill will come with time
>>14403691440369 Look back at all of the comments that are demanding that I write drunk. It scares it so much!
>>14407331440733 *slowly backs away towards the door* ooooookay then... I'm going to... umm... check on the ice cream that I... uhh... left in the oven...
>>14411561441156 Pinkie is my favorite pony, and while she isn't in my favorite ship, TwiPie is my #2 ship. That said, to me, Twilight shippings, other than that, are mostly eh to me, though that doesn't mean if you have a TwiDash I won't like the story. Just isn't my favorite.
>>14415331441533 Auntie Pinkie is always there to help a pony in need!
>>14423101442310 It brings out a very interesting dynamic indeed. Even more opposites than TwiPie or FlutterDash ever could have, but at the same time, their love for social gatherings and making ponies happy is something strong that they share with each other.
>>14423621442362 I'm scared...
>>14424601442460 *looks at the feature box atm, and the particular story up there now* Yeah... still, thanks for the complements, even though that stake burning really did hurt
>>14428781442878 I think the way people ship ponies nowadays, at least for the most part, is starting to get clich'e. Like you said, FlutterMac is always that way, though I have to admit, never read a single FlutterMac dedicated story ever (I blame it on my #1 ship being FlutterDash)
>>14431821443182 Trust me, I have no intention of just dropping this after a single chapter, or making you guys wait months for the update.
>>14434341443434 Thanks! And thank you for the praise!
>>14434761443476 Well... I haven't been called cute in a long time. You aren't so bad yourself!
Well duh I didn't expect you to tell me who "he" is :P I'm just saying I want to know! Get on with it! At your own pace, if that's ok with you...
>>14297701429770 Well YEAH! It's a scientifically proven fact! (And if it's not, all we have to do is ask Twilight to research it and make it so! XD)
Interesting... I guess I'll track for now, see where it goes.
Oh thank you
yeah, pretty stoked.
and oops, i meant CAN be breathtaking
*Looks at all the comments* yup... you've got a long time ahead of ya'!
p.s You should still get your liver checked out
p.p.s Going 8 days without sleeping is not good for my mental state
>>14447701444770I actually don't need editors. My grammar is pretty much perfect. My friends have read my chapters and told me. Its just the actual story writing I suck at.
Its marked incomplete. That suggests more. Is there more to come? I hope there is.
>>14447801444780 Don't boss me
>>14449011444901 Is it now? Well, I expect to have your 200 page report on the matter handed in by next week!
>>14450421445042 Yeah, I assumed that's what you meant, and I'm glad you are excited!
>>14455421445542 8 days? What insane thing are you trying to do!?
>>14455451445545 Hmm... in that case, try what if's. For example, if Princess Celestia and Princess Luna were to fight, and no Elements of Harmony were present, who would win? Take that premise, and make the entire story a buildup to that. Granted you've gotta have side-plots and such like that, but think about a climax to your story, and then from there, work on the rest of it. Hope that helps!
>>14455781445578 Do you mean I said one? Because if I did, I'm shocked as well... because I don't know what's going to happen next either!
>>14455911445591 Yes I am!
>>14470321447032 Yup. More to come!
>>14476851447685 Yes you are!
Congratz on getting featured! You've done something I'll never achieve!
>>14476851447685 Well, see, it's like this... Buck you, dude, I was dropping your class next week anyway, so KISS MY FLANK! *Runs off*
>>14476851447685Actually me and my co-author know where we want to go. We have stuff planned for the future, but we just don't have many ideas on what to do in between. Not just gonna time skip to parts we planned.
I just broke the 8 day combo... Thank god though, because I was hallucinating about spiders and hearing voices telling me to kill my parents, all better now though! (I am never going to do that again )
All the Blood Has Been Hidden For Filming from the 3rd season opening...
Wait for Pinkie after her scenes and ...
>>14476871447687 And considering you help me become this way, I consider you brilliant as well!
>>14479501447950 Never say never, my friend. Just keep at it, and stay classy!
>>14486851448685 Two things. First, last day to withdraw from classes way yesterday, so too bad. Second, I have personally decided that censoring "fuck" with "buck", while appealing at first, makes things awkward... especially when Applejack discusses what she does for a living
>>14490881449088 Well... umm... dialogue and characterization ftw? Not sure what else to tell ya.
>>14498331449833 And you should make sure never ever to do that ever again. Sounds terrifying.
>>14518101451810 ... I can honestly say I have no clue what you were trying to say there, so have a pony emocon I've never used before as an apology