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Kentalian 103

Joined September 2012
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    Kentalian's Stories (1)

    • A Strike of Change
      A human by the name of Lucius finds his way into Equestria and is given an adventure to take on.

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    Lucius is a human who lives in a small town in his house that was given to him by his parents, he had a hard life but it was starting to pick up, until one day on his way to work he encounters something different and is brought into Equestria. He takes on a long journey to find his way back and inform everypony that he is not a threat to them, and hopes to get back home.

    First Published
    12th Oct 2012
    Last Modified
    18th Oct 2012

    Comments ( 16 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 16h ago · · ·
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    very good so far! i am quite facinated by this...please go on:duck:

    P.S. FIRST!!

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 15h ago · · ·
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    >>1430655

    Thank you! I really appreciate your feedback. I'm working on chapter 2 right now so it should be up soon! :pinkiehappy:

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 10h ago · · ·
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    Hhmmm, quite well written. Keep writing it please.

    #4 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 10h ago · · ·
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    >>1432077

    Thanks! And yes, I will write more :twilightsmile:

    #5 · Chapter 3 · 31w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Whoa, this story is amazing! They improve on each chapter, and I love the little cliffhangers you leave at the end :pinkiehappy:

    Can't wait for more!

    #6 · Chapter 3 · 31w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1437966

    Thank you, I never expected this much positive feedback :rainbowhuh:

    And yes, hopefully I can keep with a daily update. No promises though.

    #7 · Chapter 3 · 31w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Great Lucius has alot of questions for Twilight and Twilight has a lot of questions for him...pretty much an even trade if you ask me. :twilightblush:

    #8 · Chapter 3 · 31w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1437972 Oh no, oh no, please don't be going in that direction.

    #9 · Chapter 3 · 31w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1440472

    What do you mean by that direction? If you mean 'Clop' then no, this will not lead to that, I assure you. :twilightsmile:

    #10 · Chapter 3 · 31w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1442719 No, I mean misanthropy. 'Twilight, no! The human will kill you!

    #11 · Chapter 3 · 31w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1444019

    This story isn't headed that way either, don't worry :yay:

    #12 · Chapter 3 · 31w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1445719 Good. :twilightsmile: I tell you, way too many stories that involve humans are misanthropic. It's a wonder haters haven't made misanthropy a new brony stereotype.

    #13 · Chapter 4 · 31w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Uh oh that letter from the Princess sounds very ominous

    #14 · Chapter 4 · 31w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1455258 Yeah, I'm suspecting the worst...

    #15 · Chapter 5 · 31w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Yet another amazing chapter! The fruit made my mouth water :derpytongue2:

    #16 · Chapter 5 · 31w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I still have a bad feeling about Celestia's letter

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