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I dedicate this story to Shrubby, Squitz, Brownie, The Horse Lord, Rupert, and my girlfriend. *raises glass*
To the good times.
Final friendship report. Almost overused concept, but this is a nice deviation from the norm in that it's less drastic, and generally fitting life's tendencies. No deaths, no serious conflicts, just plain life. Liked.
Pretty good. Twilight sounds a little whinny though. No offence. I guess I haven't yet experienced such things.
Wow, that was kinda depressing, and brought tears to my eyes.
Thankfully they weren't released.
Good fic, though as Fox mentioned, the concept is slightly overused.
great and sad story, they will always be PFF's (Pony Friends Forever)
dtlux1
Hey there!
If this isn't one of your well-written pieces, I'd like to check out the other things you've done. ![]()
This was well-written, but I think you could have done without the first bit - before the friendship report. This story would have so much more emotional impact if some of the details were left a little bit more ... cryptic.
You know, like Twilight's letters always were. Maybe if that was the only part that she wrote to Celestia, and then she put down her quill to look at her empty room and reminisce on when Spike was there or the last party they had that Rarity hadn't been able to attend.
I don't really know why I said all that, coz you're probably not gonna re-write it, but I guess I just wanted to highlight the emotional impact of leaving some things left unsaid.
Anyway, it was still a pretty good read. Thanks.
This way a very touching story. I must say well done, it brought tears to my eyes. You see everything differently way you put yourself in the characters place and try to feel what they're feeling.
You know, I really hate sad fics because they always get to me and hit me right in the heart parts. But I can't deny that this one is good.
Nice. You kept it life-like and realistic. It kind of made it more sad that way, knowing this could easily actually happen.
This is quite possibly one of my favorite fics. Great job, along with your other stories your becoming my favorite writer![]()
It was one of the best quickshort stories I've read. I didn't even know I was crying until I finished processing that last sentence.
This Is Very Beautiful.I Like The Concept And I Was Stuck Hard By That Last Sentence.Very Beautiful,Very Beautiful Indeed My good Man.
Lindsay Wheeler And David Bobinsky, that is what it was before she moved to Ottawa Illinois. I did, do, and always will cherish and love the memories of the times we had together
Dear Bronywriter,
I hate the fact that this fic brought back the memories of my first friend moving away.
Sincerely,
David







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