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    Set five years after the events of My Little Pony Twilight Sparkle sits down and writes one last friendship letter.

    First Published
    12th Oct 2012
    Last Modified
    12th Oct 2012

    Comments ( 22 )

    #1 · 31w, 6d ago · 1 · ·
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    I dedicate this story to Shrubby, Squitz, Brownie, The Horse Lord, Rupert, and my girlfriend. *raises glass*

    To the good times.

    #2 · 31w, 6d ago · · ·
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    thanks for the free drink

    Fox
    #3 · 31w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Final friendship report. Almost overused concept, but this is a nice deviation from the norm in that it's less drastic, and generally fitting life's tendencies. No deaths, no serious conflicts, just plain life. Liked.

    #4 · 31w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Pretty good. Twilight sounds a little whinny though. No offence. I guess I haven't yet experienced such things.

    #5 · 31w, 6d ago · · ·
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    *Raises glass*

    #6 · 31w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Wow, that was kinda depressing, and brought tears to my eyes. :fluttercry: Thankfully they weren't released. :yay: Good fic, though as Fox mentioned, the concept is slightly overused.

    #8 · 31w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1429250 I know, but I was drawing from personal experience here otherwise yeah, I wouldn't have done it as you are quite right; it is overused.

    #9 · 31w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Good fic.

    oh an can i have a drink? :3

    #10 · 31w, 6d ago · · ·
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    This proves the mane six can never truly be seperated, not ever. :yay:

    #12 · 31w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Hey there!

    If this isn't one of your well-written pieces, I'd like to check out the other things you've done. :twilightsmile:

    This was well-written, but I think you could have done without the first bit - before the friendship report. This story would have so much more emotional impact if some of the details were left a little bit more ... cryptic.

    You know, like Twilight's letters always were. Maybe if that was the only part that she wrote to Celestia, and then she put down her quill to look at her empty room and reminisce on when Spike was there or the last party they had that Rarity hadn't been able to attend.

    I don't really know why I said all that, coz you're probably not gonna re-write it, but I guess I just wanted to highlight the emotional impact of leaving some things left unsaid.

    Anyway, it was still a pretty good read. Thanks.

    #13 · 31w, 4d ago · · ·
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    NO!!! NO!!! PFF's forever!!! :ajsleepy::fluttershbad::pinkiesad2::twilightoops::rainbowderp::raritycry:

    #14 · 31w, 3d ago · · ·
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    This way a very touching story. I must say well done, it brought tears to my eyes. You see everything differently way you put yourself in the characters place and try to feel what they're feeling.

    #15 · 31w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Sir, i dont know who you are, or what you do for a living but you are a great writer sir. I dont even know you but i consider you a friend. *thinks about his own friends and good times* *raises drink right back* To the good times indeed; may they continue.

    >>1429434

    #16 · 31w, 1d ago · · ·
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    You know, I really hate sad fics because they always get to me and hit me right in the heart parts. But I can't deny that this one is good.

    #17 · 31w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Nice. You kept it life-like and realistic. It kind of made it more sad that way, knowing this could easily actually happen.

    #18 · 14w, 6d ago · · ·
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    This is quite possibly one of my favorite fics. Great job, along with your other stories your becoming my favorite writer:pinkiehappy:

    #19 · 14w, 6d ago · · ·
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    It was one of the best quickshort stories I've read. I didn't even know I was crying until I finished processing that last sentence.

    #20 · 14w, 15h ago · · 1 ·
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    This Is Very Beautiful.I Like The Concept And I Was Stuck Hard By That Last Sentence.Very Beautiful,Very Beautiful Indeed My good Man.

    #21 · 12w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1427122

    You are a great writer. This is exactly how I feel about my friend Austin. I can tell we're drifting apart, but we'll always be friends. Nothing can take that away. Not a 200 mile barrier or all the time in the world.

    To the good times and the memories.

    #22 · 2w, 12h ago · · ·
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    Lindsay Wheeler And David Bobinsky, that is what it was before she moved to Ottawa Illinois. I did, do, and always will cherish and love the memories of the times we had together

    Dear Bronywriter,

    I hate the fact that this fic brought back the memories of my first friend moving away.

    Sincerely,

    David

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