THIS. IS. SPARTA!

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Very good! Having long since lost all human emotion, I wasn't hit very hard by this fic, but it was very good! Loved the premiss, great writing, and I felt a little bit. Just a tad.

while dark isn't quite my style, i love it!

I liked the ending portion, but did spot a slight mistake:

Dash blinked. She's going to go through psychosis for... at most sixteen months. It's a magical psychosis, where one's mind is overloaded with magical power... she'll be able to see what other pegusi can't, and she'll be sepesrted from this world often

I believe it is pegasi and separated, Really looking forward to more! I am a sucker for good FlutterDash.

You know looking at this it doesn't actually have a dark tag

This is going into my favourite yet rarely-touched genre - dark. *grins evilly*

We require a dark tag!

>>15267551526755>>15277311527731

Nopony dies. It's just a bit sad.

Speaking of, did I get hit by shipping haters? Or is this story really that weak? I worked on this shit.

Why is this in the Rarishy group?

I don;t know why this has so many dislikes.  I quite like it so far, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

>>15279031527903

In the Fluttershy folder, because she's essentially the star of this fic. Every fic in that group doesn't need to be Flarity shipping, as I've noticed.

As a reader, not a writer, this isn't half bad. Good job, Dan.

>>15285971528597

I didn't write this. Who are you?

I don't see why you have so many dislikes on this, I like this story.

>>15288691528869

That was me, Mark. If you didn't wrote it and I didn't write it, it was either Jacob or what's-his-name.

Okay, I swear this time the delay wasn't out of me being a lazy dick. My power was knocked out by the storm until Wednesday, at which point I'd already left for Baltimore for a relief project, and accidentally wound up going through Virginia, where I got to go to the Yankee Candle Factory... it doesn't really make much sense, now that I understand it.

I don't get why so many people have down voted this story, I for one really like it.

I'm a bit hesitant to see how Twilight ends up dealing with all of that guilt though...

Very sad for fluttershy does she sleep walk

Great chapter nice work.

>>15713071571307

Psychosis is the mental problem of total removal from physical understanding. You sorta stop understanding everything. I described it in detail in the story.

>>15398641539864

I'll post some shit on their facebooks. I did the newest chapter, though.

>>15714391571439 okay

Another chapter ^_^

WHY WOULD ANYONE DOWNVOTE THIS STORY

Let alone ten! *sniffle sniffle*

My reaction to ten people voting down this story....bullshit.

Ten people probably downvoted this story because of the ornary compact summary:

"I DON'T GIVE A FUCK ABOUT YOUR COMPACT VIEW ON ANY BROWSE PAGE. CLICK THE GODDAMN STORY."

>>16871681687168

I was pissed. But I'm not gonna change it.

I don't have to look at the description, it's emerald flight so I know it's going to be great.

>>16891231689123

Awh. Gimme a hug, small dancing man.

Good job.

>>16907211690721

Awh. Gimme a hug... strange... black mass... red-eyed, evil Mary Sue.

great chapter i cried throughout the whole thing cuz of how sad yet happy and so passionate it is....

This is going into my favorite yet rarely-touched genre - dark. *grins evilly*

and yet there is no dark tag. WILL PEOPLE GET THEIR PRIORITIES STRAIGHT ALREADY!!!

Good job can't wait to see how it all turns out.

>>21389432138943

10Q

~ Mark

>>21391532139153 I'm sorry I don't follow.

>>21419922141992

Thank you

Get it?

~ Dan

>>21421782142178 Oh ok i just didn't understand the 10Q thing.

>>21429402142940

10 = than

q = k you

than... k you

thank you

WTF did Twilight do?

This, this is cute, I want to see more of this.

Great story

Always love reading Flutterdash stories that try something different rather than just being the usual lovey dovey romance kind of story.