After a chilly night, Rarity catches a cold, so Applejack goes down to take care of her until she gets better. What better than a yummy, hot tomato soup? Maybe a lullaby and a belly rub.
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Yay! Slice of Life from DeiStar! *Clicks read later as I'm in school right now*
Seems interesting enough.
I'll read it later, though.
If it's by you, it'll probably be featured, so it's not like I'll forget it anyways.
EDIT:
T'was a good story.
As I expected, guy.
An Applejack and Rarity slice of life? I'll read it after I eat some dinner.
Fuck that ill read it now, its by deistar
Hmm, a fic where somepony takes care of a sick pony that DOESN'T end in shipping?
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And I am not being sarcastic at all. Nice job.
FYI: I love this song!
That was great!
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I must agree with something888, this is pretty original for those reasons.
Entertaining as well!
The part with the lullaby was very sweet.
Why did I think "sing soft kitty for me"?
Short and nice. Good work!
There is two things I can think to say on this
1 - listen close. Closer. Closer... you hear that? A thousand rabid bronies and/or Sweetie Belles are roaring 'Oh come on!'
2 - Fluttershy is contaminated! Proof?
aaahh
Aaahh-
...choo!
Adorable.
Hell, this could almost be an episode or some kind of web short. Nice work!
CUTE!
Aww! How Sweet (-^u^-)
I always love these sort of adorable cuddly scenarios (Even if I am a terrible nurse and whiny patient) I've even been writing a few little one shot stories....
Either way, this was a really sweet little story and the ending was definately a surprise, (hopefully Fluttershy doesn't end up being infected too)
This reminds me of the episode of Big Bang Theory where Sheldon gets sick. Especially the part wih the lullaby.
D'aww. This is a pretty sweet story.
Not quite funny enough for me to think it needs the comedy tag but... What do I know!? 
Bellibellibellibellibellibelli ._.
That is all.
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It was based on this scene:
D'awww! Yeah it reads almost like an episode. Very cute, another good job from Deistar!!
Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!
4500 words from DeiStar without a single confirmed sighting of RariJack shipping (or any other)?
1. Heresy!
2. Gold star and thumbs up for you!
I came here from My Fault, and now...
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*Alondro begins adding together the plot elements from the description in his disturbed mind,,,* Applejack... Rarity... bed... soup... bellyrubs...
Sooooo, this is about sex, right?
1441067 Warm kitty, soft kitty, little ball of fur~. Happy kitty, sleepy kitty, purr purr purr~.
“Fluttershy, duck!”
“Huh?” Fluttershy tilted her head. “Applejack… I’m not a duck…”
The first thing that popped into my head was that one episode from the big bang theory when penny is singing soft kitty to sheldon
That was cute
Tomato and noodle. Chicken noodle would fix ya right up..... *gears grinding*.... I'm sorry
The title reminds me of achmed the dead terrorist...
>not sure if big bang theory reference
>“Well. When I was a filly, my mom used to sing me a lullaby while rubbing my belly whenever I was sick. So I was wondering if you could be a dear and—“
>big bang theory refernce.
Jolly good show, old chap. Nicely done, cute, and funny.
Well, that was fun.
That was adorable. Even if it was "just" a friendship/slice of life fic, the RariJack fanboy in me was overjoyed by this.
In a matter of seconds, the mercury rose. Applejack extended a hoof to grab the thermometer and check for herself, but a sudden sneeze from Rarity sent it flying across the room and crashing against a wall. The shattering sound caused Rarity to look at Applejack with a faint blush on her cheeks.
FYI, mercury fumes are very toxic. They should have immediatly left the room for a few hours or risk getting mercury poisoning...
“Oh, but just look at that horrible mess! The soup stained not only the wall, but also my recently washed carpet! If I don’t wash it soon, the whole room will reek of tomato soup! I can’t work like that!”
Clean a tomato soup stain? Yeah, good luck with that... You're going to need a new carpet!
Very cute story, thumbs up!
This was cute and funny... Great job.
A cute a funny story, and finally somepony other then Twilight finally has problems with their magic, considering magic is her talent there are a lot of Twilight messes spell/has trouble with her magic stories.
Also, what did Rarity do to deserve this?:
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I hope Fluttershy is somehow immune, otherwise we may end up with three of the six down in bed sick!
Though hopefully if that happened the next one to tend would be Twilight and she would probably come prepared.
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Many things seem to come in trends, at least we seem to have had a dip in the number of fics where Rainbow is the punching bag.
Heh, good fic.
Also, there seems to be a missing word.
>That’s the one my used to sing for me.
A great little story. It made me smile. I especially liked the lullaby part. It amused me.
Please note I only put this comment here to help you better your story and I am not trying to diminish your self esteem.
I am a brony not a know-it-all troll.
“Rarity? Her hoof knocked on the door again.
You forgot the thingy.
“Rarity?" Her hoof knocked on the door again.
I know I should be the one giving it to you, but what the hay.
This sentence seems a little awkward. Maybe I just read it wrong but take a second look to make sure.
Other then that it perfectly written and I like it.
that was cute
Oh man. Ponies keep getting the cold!
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1440722 Uh oh!
Looks like it's time for Doctor Twilight to make a house call. 
P.S. Don't tell Rainbow Dash or Pinkie Pie but I think they'd only make things worse.
1444253 Really, well hopefully Fluttershy will be able to do something about those problems, that is if that last sneeze didn't send her flying or was from her.
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1445416 I don't know, next thing you know it'll be Twilight or Fluttershy who gets this handed to them.
1440790 Hey it could happen, you never know, although it would have to be a bit more orignial than this.
And of course this was really cute, I'm glad it got featured since I don't know how long it would take for me to find it otherwise.
as others have said, completely surprised that this didn't enter a notorious ship/clop minefield (i know that those 2 are completely different but i mean that phrase in a different sense, as in a good story like this avoiding a ship and clop minefield,not that there is anything wrong with them[although i don't read clop]) the description alone made me 99% sure it would fall into said minefield with solo caretaking (like a boss) and excess bellyrubs, but somehow you managed to pull this off without making them do anything ship-y (aside from a non-chalant flirt or 2)
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ha looks like im not the only person who missed itdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rarity_lolface.png
So. Awesome. Also... All I can think of now is Pinkie Pie... As a unicorn... So terrifying and yet so awesome.
I have never understood the superstition that being cold makes people sick. Colds are caused by rhinovirus. Why wasn't Twilight there to explain that? Gah!
Anyway, cute. I envy Applejack. Rarity belly rubs sound lovely.
Enjoyable reading. But I couldn't see Applejack taking care of Rarity - they are not THAT good friends I think. I suppose that Fluttershy would be the first one to help.
But your choice is justified by the ending.
(And + for not finishing the story with shipping. Or something worse...)
lol, how original but if it was Pinkie that had come she would be
in 10 seconds flat probably