The premise sounds like Sunny Skies All Day Long.  I can't tell by your first chapter whether it will wind of being a copy or not, so I'll watch and see where it goes.

>>14205191420519 I haven't heard of it, so I hope I won't end up duplicating it.

EDIT: Yes, this will be very different.

kool beans

Next chapter please.

At least she didn't call herself "Sunny Skies"...

>>14293841429384 To reiterate, I swear I had the idea for this story before I heard about that fic. Cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye.

Waiting next chapter.

Luna watched as Clestia

You misspelled name of Her Royal Majesty Princess Celestia, the Ruler of Equestria and Its Satellites, Bringer of the Sun, Giver of Law, Vanquisher of Evil, Queen of the Sky, Duchess of the West, Generallissimo etc

>>14321521432152 Duly noted and corrected. Although there shall be many typos in this, I fear . . .

Oh well!

Mood whiplash!

Well, now it gets interesting!  DUN DUN DUN

Whenever Luna appears in my stories, she sometimes is disguised as an earth pony named Cheese.  I orignially did it for comedy, but it seems to have taken on more useful aspects.

>>14325401432540 now I have to read your stories just to see that

Shouldn't Twilight's friends be well aware of the fact that Twilight didn't really HAVE friends while she was in Canterlot save Spike, Celestia, and her family? Personally, that detail alone would arise at least suspicion from Applejack and Rainbow Dash, at least enough for them to inquire into it. Dunno, don't know what it is you have planned.

But other than that, this is getting to be promising. And, unexpected twist with the lurking villain. Sounds like this could get even more interesting fast.

>>14327041432704 The story is "more dreams"

DUN DUN DUN....

Taxi Driver

Hmm, interested to see if Applejack is playing along...

I'm excited to see what comes of this story. Hopefully, it won't remain in hiatus for long.

Still not sure where the romance lies in all this, but once it's revealed, I bet it will be pretty sweet. So far, this  fic is going quite nicely.

I kinda think Pinkie knows who Sunshine really is... so how long before this story comes out of hiatus?