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Moonshine9012 5579

Joined July 2012
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    Moonshine9012's Stories (5)

    • The Princess and Her Friend
      “A friend is someone who knows all about you and still loves you.” ― Elbert Hubbard *ONE SHOT*

      2,160 words · 946 views · 52 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Redemption
      “Those who have never known the deep intimacy and the intense companionship of happy mutual love have missed the best thing that life has to give.” ― Bertrand Russell
      4,962 words · 213 views · 18 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Equestria's Assassins: Bringer of the Night
      “From childhood's hour I have not been. As others were, I have not seen. As others saw, I could not awaken. My heart to joy at the same tone. And all I loved, I loved alone.” ― Edgar Allan Poe
      19,200 words · 490 views · 18 likes · 3 dislikes
    • A Killer Dream
      Blue 'Ace' Bass has a dream about fighting Starkiller a month before returning to Equestria
      2,017 words · 192 views · 7 likes · 10 dislikes
    • The Dividing Chronicles: Calm Before the Storm [Book One]
      10,663 words · 179 views · 2 likes · 4 dislikes

    ENTRY FOR THUNDERHAWK7865's VIDEO GAME X-OVER CONTEST

    It has been 15 years since Dan, better known as Blue 'Ace' Bass, has been to Equestria. A month before his return, Dan has a dream and get's a surprise visit from an unwanted visitor bent on killing him. Will Ace be able to fight after all this time and survive? Or will the assailant triumph his trial and slay the most powerful Element bearer in history?

    First Published
    12th Oct 2012
    Last Modified
    12th Oct 2012

    Comments ( 9 )

    #1 · 35w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Just a short one-shot for an cross-over contest. Hope yall enjoy it! :scootangel:

    #2 · 35w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I say, good sir, this was astonishing. Good job, mate!  Have a mustache. :moustache:

    #3 · 35w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Oh, and you now have permission to add this to the Universe Usage folder in the fan group. :pinkiehappy:

    #4 · 35w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1421700

    Why thank you my friend and I most certainly will. Oh and by the way, nice mustache :moustache:

    #5 · 35w, 5d ago · · ·
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    What is this! The front page updating! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

    #6 · 35w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1425642

    Why yes, yes it is :scootangel:

    #7 · 35w, 5d ago · · ·
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    So this is how Ace sent his spirt to equistria right

    #8 · 32w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Eh. Not a bad implementation, but gratuitous ending. I'd like to point out that, in the abscence of Applied Phlebotinium, scimitars will be... utterly destroyed by a significant application of focalized energy. So, you get a dislike for that. Pity, it was good except for that. And the fact that scimitars don't really impale. They shear.

    #9 · 32w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1557951

    I appreciate your feedback Infinity. What do you think I could do improve the ending?

    Also, in answer for the reason for your dislike: Yes, actual scimitars would be destroyed in real life by that much energy being applied to them directly... BUT Thunderhawk wrote them in as magical scimitars, so no, in this story or his, they wouldn't be utterly destroyed. As for the impaling, they can impale, just not as well as some other swords.

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