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The idea had potential, but it pretty much fell apart as the story progressed. I was sort of hoping for something that was so intentionally stupid that it was funny. But instead, it ended up being so stupid and nonsensical, that it was just stupid and nonsensical.
P.S. This story needs a human tag. As per the rules, all stories that involve humans have to have the human tag.
Yeah, I know. It's like I said though, "Just something to get my head reeling with some ideas." and also to get a feel for what people like or don't like.
'Cause I'm completely stuck on ideas for the moment, and using things like this for inspiration.
Oh, and I changed the tag, thanks for the heads-up.
My Gosh this Makes Alot Of Sense Making a lonely island Music video And mashing it in with MLP:FIM IS WIN! ![]()







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