Quick question, will diamond tiara ever change in this story? Yes! First!

Hmm...

Yeah, not bad.  I kinda like this story.

Eager to see the next chapter!  

I would say first, but its so impressive that people will say ‘really? You were the first to post a comment here? Please tell me more.’

and as I'm not really all that immature, i'll just say that this story is awesome and that you should let the school kids see him going all badass over a puny manticore or something like dat.

So that the little noobs will know enough about his badassery skills in fighting that they will leave him alone.... oh yeah, i forgot that he finds it funny when the pack leader of the beaches tries to mess with 'im puny nooblets

And the second weirdest couple in Ponyville is born.

>>14299371429937

What's the first? If I may ask.

>>14295231429523

First of all, Daniel's fight with a manticore is actually a thought I've been having, this is still a rumor, until he actually fights one of course.

Cooliofir135

>>14300331430033 Vinyl and Octavia or Spike and Rarity. I can't decide which is crazier!

>>14300481430048

Sorry, wrong universe, it's Spike and Applebloom, although Vynal and Tavi is in this one, and I agree, it is a bit, odd.

Cooliofir135

LOL I GUESSED A POSSIBRU FUTURE derp

but I seriously had no idea that he might end up doing that :D

I'm impressed with how much you have improved since book 1, although the length is a little lacking I still like it. Keep up the good work!

>>14406011440601

I'm trying to go for quality, but they should legthen over time, if not I'll probably release more than one chapter a day, not always though. Oh, by the way, thanks for sticking with Daniel and me for all this time.

Oh, and maybe she will, and maybe she won't change, I will not reveal any secrets!

Cooliofir135

>>14408991440899 well I certainly believe you have achieved that, and regardless of how short the chapters are I will still stick with you. So few of my favorite stories are updated often enough, I'm glad yours is one of those few. I'm also happy he decided not to use his new found control over life and death anymore. Lol, still, I'd laugh my ass off if Daniel got Diamond Tiara a pet kitten or something, and then kills it infront of her. XD

>>14409571440957

I find that funny, in a sick sort of way

Cooliofir135

Damn it what colour are those flowers?!?

Dafuq?

suddenly, a wild random chapter appears...

i commented but it doesnt fit the chapter. well... that and the update without unread chapters ( all of them have a checkmark) i think means the chapter was swapped

>>15905591590559

Yes, a chapter was swapped, sorry about that. Oh and, I decided to go back on Daniel's not so normal life in ponyville!

Cooliofir135

>>15905751590575what do you meen 'go back'? rewrite?

>>15906201590620

No, I mean continue his normal life of being in a fictional world full of talking ponies, and not a single human other than Daniel himself, while he dates one of said ponies and learns about the social customs of Ponyville and Equestria.

Cooliofir135

>>15906401590640then its go back TO daniel's life, not ON.

>>15906701590670

>>15906771590677

>>15907521590752

lol, the story I'll let you grammer knotsie me, but my comments are a little bit less significant.

Cooliofir135

>>15907651590765*Nazi

>>15908131590813

>>15908731590873

The foes name is Sombra.

fucking ponies, man! Always with the racism!

...wut? I dont even... Huh?

>>16298361629836

I lied! I was planning this all along!

Okay, I really want somepony to do something with Alexander, and I don't have the patience to do that, so please somepony take the character I gave you!

Cooliofir135

>>16299471629947I meant with the chapter! What the he'll happened!!!!

>>16299961629996

Well, just wait and find out, oh, and Derpy got rejected.

Cooliofir135

Say whaaaat?!?!

Daniel rejected Ditzy?! ...the hell...?

But why? I mean, they had *cough*se*cough*x*cough* in the second book!! Pwease author, do something about this D: or imma have a sadz

A really sad sadz...

>>16337741633774

Read the next chapter

Cooliofir135

I like that ‘so far’ in the end there...

What was the name of that song? or is it something you made?

>>17037551703755

I made it, I don't have an actual tune for it though. It would be awesome if somepony made the song, as a matter of fact, if anypony wants to do it, I'll send you the lyrics!

Cooliofir135

wow, I really like the story so far, some of the words here has errors but at least the story is good

Nice, but what about the teacher? You mention her getting hurt bad, then nothing.

>>17154901715490 lol she got ignored xD

cool...

>>17156861715686>>17154901715490

She got the care she needed from Nurse Redheart's kid. I decided that it wasn't to  important to add that into the story. A derp on my part.

Cooliofir135

TOTAL MIND FUCK!

how does a cloud appear - in the characters shape no less - every time some character bolts off? Seriously, I'm asking this.

>>20600082060008

It's a world of magic and ponies. Just roll with it.

Cooliofir135

>>20653572065357 eh, good as any advise on the matter I guess. :p