Just your average writer. 14, freshman, and about two months being a brony. I absolutely HATE shipping, excluding the occasional Fluttermac or OC.
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Featherweight has always had a little bit of a crush on a strawberry-maned filly. But don't tell any pony! He might die of embarrassment. One day, he decides to draw Twist (yes, Twist) a picture showing his feelings. Will she like it? Please tell me she'll like it!
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Pretty good, pretty good.
Great story, looking forward to the next chapter.
I found a small spelling mistake towards the end of the story and I thought I would at least point that out to you.
Where it says: "The kis felt like an eternity of happiness." Should be: "The kiss felt like an eternity of happiness."
The cover art really suits the story and just love how neat and well written the story is. It really is a cute little story and I think you have pulled off quite the plot leaving a huge cliffhanger to start the next chapter on.
Thanks a lot for writing this and I look forward to the next chapter.
-Sparkle Writer
Awww!
When you have power, why not use it to help others.
Love it.
I don't mean to sound nit-picky, but shouldn't Twist have a lisp? That spelling was pretty darn perfect for a lisp and there wasn't even a mention of it.
I love that lisp...
Funny story everyone, I wasn't really planning on another chapter.
But since you all loved it I'll make another! 
1443119 I'll try to give her one in the next chapter.
1443017 Dude, a little off-topic, but I love your name.
Nice
I like it
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Author, Make it happen
Read chapter title. Damn dinner with the filly's family already. Read chapter. Whoops silly me
-Typo. I think you can spot it.
1458064 OH MY GOD, THE ADORABLENESS!!!
You heard the man, Author. Make it happen.
1458064>>1460968 I dunno how, but I'll try!
Going well so far, can`t wait to read the next chapter!
Meanwhile...
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Just for the humor of it.
The D'aawws... too... much...
HHHNNNNNGGGGGG!
D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
Awww.
diamond tiara ur existence Is not needed
I just noticed a mistake in the first chapter. Miss Cheerilee called out Scootaloo's name, and I said that a marshmallow filly (Sweetie Belle) said here.
How me and featherweight feel about this
D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
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Nice Lion King reference
Smooth move's featherweight
Damn straight Feathers you the man!
Get you some <3
Okay, here's the deal: I'm gonna write a sequel to this taking place years later, like in high school (without ANY clopping, not even soft-core). I'll take any suggestions if you want me to do something with this (don't worry 1458064 that I'll do during Christmas time on this story, just remind me
). For now, though, I have other stuff to work on. Again, don't worry, the sequel will come out before thanksgiving, I promise.
EDIT: anyone know someone who could do the cover for the sequel? If so that'd be fantastic.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/59455/A-Twisted-Romance
There's the sequel!
It's soo cute :D
That was adorable
Now, to the sequel.
Oh, and I'm free to do some cover art.
1475712
very true xD
1520721
i agree <3
I absolutely loved this story, very cute.
I really enjoyed how you wrote it true to the fact that the characters are, indeed, young fillies and colts.
thus, i grant upon you...
a moustache
1529791 Thanks, but I just found someone.
Maybe another time?
Loved it! This was soo cute! My only issue is that Simba actually means lion... which is weird.
1533841 Sounds ok with me.
That was too cute for its own good
Great job
Twist and Featherweight=
1479926 The first thing that comes to mind when I see Twist in a bunny suit is: "Your going to shoot your eye out with that thing kid"
Dude you have to put a disclaimer on this
I got diabeetus from it, it was so dawwww inducing.
DEAR LORD YOU ARE KILLING ME WITH THE CUTE!
I created my own group and added this story to it if anyone enjoys foal fics.
http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=group&group=1741
Special attention was payed to her mane and eyes,
was payed her mane
payed
Anyways, loving the story!
1563984
Sorry, I'll fix that, thanks!
1498858 Sequel? YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ITS THE CIRCLE OF LIIIIIIIFFFEEEE! AND IT MOVES US ALLL! THROUGH FAAIITH AND LOOOOVE!
From A pro TLK lover.
(Joke) Alt. Title: Twist And Crush
Yay!
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That was your chapter inspiration, wasn't it?
Merry Christmas!!
YOu sone of a bitch, you made it happen. ;-;
I love you!
God damn you sir get a sticker!
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!
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THE WAFF. IT'S TOO MUCH. IT'S OVER 9,000!!!!
Not sure I liked this chapter as much as the others, but that's because Featherweight is a bit... ah... petulant, which makes sense considering his age, but still, grating, I've had to deal with that enough IRL thank you very much.
Dawwww! Dawww, I say! Dawwww!
i forgot to say daww in a part!
DAWWWW JUST DAWWW 
1798649 or a mustache!
make it four 
Twist is a pony that seems to get very little attention as a background character, at least she can shine in a story.