• Member Since 23rd Feb, 2012
  • offline last seen Dec 15th, 2019

Blinky Writer


A inexperienced writer who excels in Poetry and Short Stories then Fanfiction, but tries her best.

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This is just a Story I thought up slightly based on real events that might happen TO YOU!

Honestly, I hope this will entertain some of you and make some laugh.

Written with the Characters as Humans as I could find no way to do this with ponies without doing something that would not make sense.

Is this just a beginning or a Whole story? Mostly a Whole story since I have inspiration problems with making new chapters.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 17 )

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh:
Well Sweetie Belle now has the embarassing picture....well several of them! :raritydespair:

"Oogle Boogle Giggety Goo." I immediately thought of this. :pinkiehappy:
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Rarity is going to be so mad with Sweetie Belle for this. :rainbowlaugh:

Don't feel too bad about what happened Rarity it wasn't unlady like, it happens to the best of us sometimes. :duck: You should be more concerened about how you're going to keep Sweetie Belle from sending that picture. :rainbowlaugh:

Also I can't help but notice that although you specifically made the characters humans to avoid making them do things that wouldn't make sense you still mention Rarity trying to use magic, might want to correct that.

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I removed him for good measure
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I kinda flopped on what I wanted to do. I wanted there to be magic, But I guess the story could flow better without it. I can easily edit that, I think.

1416504 Yeah now that I think about it Sweetie Belle must have set Rarity up, how would she able snap the picture unless she KNEW what would happen. :pinkiecrazy:/:rainbowlaugh:

As of now this is offically on Feature Box Crusaders in the Comedy Tag, it was just too good to pass up. :rainbowlaugh:

1415578 After seeing "Look Before You Sleep" humanized on YouTube it makes sense, there would normally still be the question of why Rarity didn't just teleport to her master bathroom but since you mention her having a cold that's affecting her magic it makes sense. :eeyup:

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Yes, I can say that I needed a better way to explain that. I didn't want to flat out say it in the middle of the story.

1519031 Now I wonder how much it might take for fans to start animating fanfics, cause if they do this had better be one of them. :trixieshiftright:

I Say no! no, f* NO!, To random Capitalization Of words.
Also typos:
too cool -> to cool
Your Dead ->You are dead

Was this about humanized Rarity or anthro Rarity? :rainbowhuh:

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It is a mess of a story. I am really not going to improve it or fix it unless I feel like it. It isn't a grad epic story, It is 3 am scribblings when I couldn't sleep.

You must be pyshic or something. You predicted "Equestria Girls". :pinkiegasp:

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