sorry, but i don't do backstory. I'm just experienced, and this is my first time submitting it to the public.
DATELINE: 20 Years after the great Seceding, Equestria is at 15% of the population they used to have, and the cities that haven't been burned by Celestial Loyalists or raiders, have been deduced to pitiful slums. The once beautiful jewel of Equestria, Ponyville, has fallen victim to the latter, and everypony has their eyes on a revolution. But they are too shy to do anything about it, until a single stallion, Hurricane, shall show the ponies of Equestria that Celestia must die.
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Why the fuck would Celestia burn her own towns?
Also, you seem to have a problem with Celestia.
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Wow at first I though this was just another stupid Evil!Celestia story
but after reading it I see that its a stupid Sexist Evil!Celestia story.
what's with you hating women in power?
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When did I ever imply that?
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Because you just stated the female co-rulers of a matriarchy are mere figureheads while the real ruler is a dude.
And once Celestia takes real power she goes all evil and needs to be kill by the male protagonist.
And yes in real life horses are a matriarchy.
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ummm... yes.
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oh yeah and it takes a man to get a town made up of most women including the mane six who fought a chaos god and an army to stand up for themselves.
And Twilight just watches the whole think? Really?
Also the whole plan the counsel has to "Rebuild Equestria" makes no sense, that's probably why it failed in fact. I mean its destroy a strong economy and get Aid for other nations then bring it back up AND THEN break it up into four nation. They're wasting time and money they could be using to make new jobs or open up trade you know things that make a strong economy.
Also three years is WAY more than enough time to fix total pending economic collapse.
Look at China, the US, Japan, Germany, England, France, Russia, ect.,.
Also why is Celestia being blame wend the counsel outed themselves as the real rulers and thus the real tyrants?
Look its clear you're not a sexist just didn't see the context.
And you're not a bad writer its just the context of the story is. Right now it reads more like a parody of bog standard grimdark evil celestia stories.
This isn't super hard to retool.
Like I don't know Equestria is having economy troubles and Celestia is trying to fix it however the stress of trying combined with her failure to stop the changeling attack causes her to go Solar Flare in a "you ungrateful pricks! after everything I've done and gave up for you, throw me aside for just a veiw mistakes!" and its up to Twilight and your OC to save her form herself.
or something