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The Princess of the Night has called Twilight Sparkle to Canterlot, but what for?

Coverart by : fatalerror328

A/N: Just a short one-shot I wrote while trying to brute-force my way through writer's block while working on CfE chapter 4. The TwiLuna romance in CfE is going off a low slower than I originally intended, so I decided to publish this to reward your patience.

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a lovely short story, i love reading about luna doing awkward things cause she doesn't know all the changes that has happened since her banishment. especially when it's in relation to a twiluna.

Twilight uses her princess melting powers on Luna ...
It's Super Effective! :twilightsmile:

Great Story. :pinkiesmile:

All the D'awwws

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The problem was that there were no proof-reads!:pinkiegasp:

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I have several. This was just a bit of fluff I slapped together so I never bothered sending it to them. Thanks for the offer though.

Fluff! Wonderful, Glorious Fluff! Very nice story.

Escalated quickly indeed! I love a good TwiLuna, so I'm in for the duration.

Minor correction:

She Princess was wearing a thin, flowing nightgown that extended halfway down her thighs. = probably supposed to be The

Very nice work! Really interesting twist with what Celestia reveals puts this above the average Twiluna writings. Thumbs-up for sure.

I can only say: a really beautiful romantic story.
Nicely shown the Theme "difference between common things in - past and now - "

smooth like honey... smooth like honey. :twilightsmile:

Nothing to criticize here form my side. ^^

a lil' bit of thanks: Luna
hope you like it)

the running of the leaves

the *Running of the *Leaves

Twilight is now shippable with:
Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Applejack, Trixie, Big Mac, Flash Sentry, Celestia, and Luna.


WHY U SO SHIPPABLE TWILIGHT.

Wow! So short, but so full of meaning! Very well done. :twilightsmile:

Woah. Twilight. Calm down. Of course you like mares. That's why we're all here; the TwiLuna cuteness. Silly filly, thinking you like stallions.

Comment posted by ElkinFencer10 deleted Oct 5th, 2014

I thought I'd already faved this, but I was wrong. Fixed it now, though!

3804111 yeah glad you left pinkie out cause shippign twilight with pinkie might be a disaster waiting to happen on an apocalyptical scale

5631724 Touché! How right you are friend!

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I'm at a loss for words - that statement is more accurate than it has any right to be. I'm not sure you fully comprehend the truth you've spoken there. Just, wow. ;]

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I have a feeling that a TwiPie ship would rather go exploring the untold depths (that we only caught one or two glimpses of... ;P) of Pinkie Pie. You know... how Twilight could stand to 'loosen up' a little, and how Pinkie could actually stand to calm down a bit and...

... and learn to control her powers properly...

Nvm! How right you are, sir! :D

The only true Twilight ships.......Luna and Fluttershy. Just letting everyone know ! LOL
Nice story BTW, wish it was more long term, but that's okay.

Twilight leaned in and firmly pressed her lips against Luna's, cutting off her Princess' sharp gasp. She could feel herself smiling as Luna went limp in her hooves, the Princess' contented sigh tickling her cheek.

So a couple months after I Finnished this story and I'm now commenting, I have wondered about this ending, I thought Twilight didn't like mares? And then she had the full confidence to kiss Luna on the lips?

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