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This story is a sequel to Trust
In this sequel to the smash-hit story "Trust," Rainbow Dash gets more than she bargained for when she receives a letter containing life-changing news. Within an atmosphere of hostility, resentment and wholesome family food-fights, will the lives of our favorite couple ever be the same again?
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oh
a sequel
i liked the original a lot
it was one of the first mlp fics i ever read
update soon plz
also her dad probably married a stallion
or something
and everything will work out
in the end
^_________________^
i will give you a million dollars
if you don't make it that simple
I haven't even read the first one, and I'm already really liking this.
D'awwwww. I loved the first story, and this one is most definitely living up to its name! Can't wait for the next update!
He remarried her mom so thats why she wasn't invited to the wedding
A sequel to one of my favorite stories?
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My vote is for Twilight's mom.....cause she's single....as of now-ish.
if is Twi's mom, rainbow gonna have a bad time
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Talk about making an elephant out of an ant hill...
I liked Trust a lot, but reading this has left me... skeptical.
What ?
A sequel to one of the best TwiDash fics ?
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Of course kind sir, I want another piece.
I personnaly can't wait for the next chapter, I'm just hoping that Rainbow's father doesn't married a stallion, to avoid the "obvious" scenario..
Good luck.
Cédric
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I'm sorry you feel that way, Karrakaz. I aim to please all of my readers—especially those who have been with me since the beginning.
However, I must point out that this was the storyline that I chose out of a page-full of sequel ideas. I know how much Trust was loved, and I wanted to do it justice. I feel that maybe you are letting your protective instincts cloud your judgement—this is only the first chapter after all, and its job was to set the scene.
Don't think that I can't take critisizm—in fact, I invite it, but I feel its just a little early to decide if this fic matches up with Trust.
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Can I get a check?
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Okay, without taking Trust into account:
Dash's reaction to the fact that her father has gotten remarried is one of the world ending.
Either he was a reasonable dad at best, and she should be a little upset.
OR he really was the greatest dad ever and she should want to hear him out before jumping to anger.
Besides that, we're introduced to the character through a letter, which indicates that her father has been living in Ponyville all along (or at least visits regularly) yet Twilight has never seen him.
In short: Dash's anger is WAY over the top and feels more than a little forced.
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Dash has been known to blow things out of proportion. Wouldn't you be upset if your father, the only parent you had that still loved you and who you thought you were closer to than any other person on the planet, suddenly got married to someone you had no idea who they were, and you weren't even invited to the wedding? And then you were told through a letter, and not in Person?
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Me personally ? no, I'd simply be happy for him.
My point is that it -feels- forced.
But in the end, you're the writer, so I won't say another thing
Despite whatever criticism I've read I'm excited. I can see RD's anger to be kind of her thing really. To be honest I'd be pretty pissed to if my mom or dad just got remarried that quickly without telling me anything. It's a pretty serious thing.
You got me hooked, now I'm just excited for the rest of the wonderful ride that I'm sure you will create. Thank you for this ^_^
I'm loving this so far
I can't wait for the new chapter. You earn a thumbs up and favorite 
Hm...This looks interesting, but I don't want to read it without first reading the prequel...
I'll be back!
Why do I feel like it's somehow her mother he RE-married?
"It's better you find out this way." <--- Seems the only answer I can come up with where this sentence is involved.
Of course. I could be completely wrong.
Though I do like to think outside the box... Or would it be inside the chimney?
1884259 Can't forget the old standby of "knocked her up, did the 'right' thing," or various shades of nonsense like that.
Alright then, it's time for a wild stab in the dark:
Rainbow's dad is gay.
In any case, the lack of a sad or tragedy tag means things will probably work out in the end.
2178977 If it wasn't for the fact that "Trust" clearly established that Dash's dad knows she's gay, I'd say the Comedy tag meant that there'd be hijinks related to it.
Dad: "I'm sorry, honey, I didn't know how you'd react to my being gay."
Dash: "Dude... Dad... I'm totally nailing another chick... And you've known I was gay since I was a filly..."
Dad: "... Touche..."
Is this going to ever be Off Hiatus?
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Yes, it will be.
3161414 got any idea when? i just read this, and the first one, and i really want to see how this all plays out!
So when can a rough estimate of an update be placed?
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I'm not entirely sure, actually. Whenever the proper mood strikes me to retake the reins of this fic. Not that I don't want to write it, but I don't want this to fall victim to horridsequelosis, if you know what I mean.
I'll try to write a bit for it tonight, if that helps; guess I'll just have to take it chapter-by-chapter, for now.
This is really good. I do hope you continue.
A sequel to trust yeeeessss! thank you Blunderbolt.
1835057 i have that same felling that her dad married a stallion.
Hope you can update this soon because I love it!
This story has made me realize just how much I hate the word 'hiatus'. At least I know you're not working on it and haven't forgotten to mark as 'on hiatus'. I hate it when that happens! Kinda makes me wish authors would let us know exactly what they're working on at any given moment. But that's just me being, well, me I guess. Don't know how else to describe it. Keep up the great work.
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this needs to be finished!
I love how one month is apparently a long period of time.
Guess the sequel will never be completed.
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Read the later bit of this and you'll see that this sequel is going to be replaced with another.
And also that I no longer have a way to write...
5084421
Sad about your laptop I've gone through three for different reasons.
Happy that you'll be doing a career you seem to want to do, not many people get to do so.
Content in having to wait for more stores, hopefully my read later list will shrink some, bah who am I kidding it might go up by quite a bit.
5084421 so uh, have you made the new sequel?
Wait...
Faith
Trust
.... Pony Dust..?