Hello, don't mind me. Just a simple spirit of anarchy trapped in stone... oh you're still listening? well listen longer, it may make you think.
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wow that was actually a very interesting fic and it definently did get me thinking loved it nice job keep up the good work dude
Wonderful idea for a story! I'm really excited to see where you take this
Nice one... Bakunin would be proud. *Sheds a tear*
By the way, that's only my point of view but I suppose you should use more Discrod (like in this chapter) and less that 'Unicorn medium' of yours. 'Cause right now the fic seems like a brilliant philosophical tirade from one of the most free-thinking beings in Equestria, and if it changes into something like an interview... Well, it's for you to decide, but I'd suggest you avoid it.
5/5 and Tracking.
Peace.
Glad you liked it.
oh don't worry the only person you're going to hear speak at all is discord. I was just giving some context for what's going on for those that need it. i don't think i could turn this into an interview, conversations like that are not my strong point.
I missed a few spelling errors didn't I... welp, on to the editor.
yes i do suppose she could have done worse...
Cool story! i noticed some typos yet it's 1 in the morning and i'm to tired to point them out. Plus i just worked on postig my first story, so yeah
one thing sould be think though, the one before celestia.
......why this so good? Me like....wait a minute....the concept of philosophical discord seem so familiar to me ![]()
nah i'm just joking, this gives me a megusta face so I track
Oops, it is quite hard to see when only using the magical energies around you you know...![]()
My good mare, have you ever tried telling a ponie's gender from just their magic? it is rather difficult.![]()
>>389680 YES! YES I HAVE!
I need to all the time!
AND I ALWAYS GET THEM RIGHT!!
I mean really being an Alicorn of my rank I need to know EVERYPONY!(Or every-thing ugh Slitheens) What about you Mr.Discord what are your accomplishments in life? Pouring hot tea on ponies?
Or being socially rejected?
Also I can't break the forth wall w/o breaking my computer how do you post pictures?
YOUR BLOOD WILL RUN RED ehh hehheh did I post that?....oh dear
Um...
Interested in a job involving world domination? If so you're hired!
use your magic
as you can see ive already started *looks at profile picture*
>>392589 you're such a softie, you need more chaos in your life. I would star talking philosopcaly to myself but im not letting that take over right now nor will I let about 15 others I mean the first ten would just be stupid! But the other 5 would make me go back to the mential hospitial.... And I can't go back there.
DISCORD get a hold of yourself ! You're supposed be the spirit of chaos! You're essentially harmless!
We need more if we're going to take down Celestia's empire as you said LAYERS but those layers are hard and almost impossible to break! THINK DISCORD!
Oh I have many many ideas on how to do so, however, the more you plan the more you fail. Chaos is so much better of a way to do things. *hovers over Nova's shoulder.* For example, watch and learn. *the stone that makes up the streets of Canterlot turns to quicksand
>>394283 Burning flesh smells delicious!
I'm going to bake it in my cupcakes later!
And I know what you mean, about taking my time. When I got out, when I escaped
I had to stick to the shadows for 100 years, 100 years. You have a chance for people to trust you, but not me they will never trust me. you're made for chaos, you are thre spirit of chaos! But I was born a normal pony but I trot a path that few have trot and I'll keep walking that path forever!![]()
>>394368 hahahaha who said you need to be normal? But did you think of ever using your chaos for good? But I lied I wasn't born a pony I wasnt born on Equestria, I wasn't even born on EARTH! And I've seen things you wouldn't even be able to conjor up in your small little mind.
MY LIFE IS FULL OF DEATH AND DEMISE!
so long as there's no knives involved *hugs back*
you know it's a good thing I'm relatively immune to cute, but that still nearly gave me diabetus.
Damn, discords got some crazy points ![]()
Ps, first? but isn't this chapter like an hour old or so?
i don't think that many people have noticed this one, it's one of my slower ones, and i only write chapters when i feel like ranting and no one else is around who would care enough to listen. most of this story is my philosophy on the world put into the FiM universe.
Nice to see someone making these points, if you need inspiration from an antisocial outcast in life message me or whatever, keep up the good work.
>>steampunkbrony
Didnt expect a reply that quick how nice of you and again good luck my lord
Due to mental issues I have over the years been kicked out of highschool 3 times arrested once and spent time in a mental health institute for the mentally ill, they found nothing wrong with me somehow and am now waiting to join the marines till a friend of mine can take all my shit from my home.
Best part is i want to go to college to be a psychologist so i can figure out for myself whats wrong with my head, been thinking about writing something on here but lack the motivation to put my ideas into text.
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Managed all that without any drugs and only a little rum. (haha a little...)
Well i got to say I enjoy the ramble ![]()
And i think its quite interesting to see (or read) other peoples thoughts about sosiety (or school and music as in this text)
And I do hope there will be more ![]()
The grammar errors are actually beneficial to this particular story. This is Discord, after all. Having proper spelling and grammar would make sense, so of course his writing is bad!
Your spelling is actually pretty good, though. I haven't noticed any errors there.







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