Mistakes and Accidents

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Shining Armor's life is pretty good. He's an excellent guardspony, he has a loving family, and he's even pretty sure a certain pink mare likes him. But when he finds out his favorite little sister is still upset over her loss of control at the CSGU entrance exam, there's only one thing to do: share a story about a colt who made a big mistake.

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Alphacat

Alphacat #1 · Oct 15th, 2012 · · ·

Many, many, thanks to my amazing editor Silicas, for all of his hard work helping me get this ready for prime time.

Also thanks to dm29 for the use of their art for the cover.

VashTheStampede

VashTheStampede #2 · Oct 15th, 2012 · · ·

A nice heart-warming, feel-good story. I could almost see it as an episode, if it were toned down just a smidge. Very good. Nice to read just before I go to bed :)

GAPDashie

GAPDashie #3 · Oct 15th, 2012 · · ·

Many d'awwzz were had.
Needs its own episode in season 3.

chinodoll

chinodoll #4 · Oct 15th, 2012 · · ·

that was really really sweet

Alphacat

Alphacat #5 · Oct 15th, 2012 · · ·

Thanks for the positive feedback, guys. =) Glad to know you all enjoyed it.

Silicas

Silicas #6 · Nov 11th, 2012 · · ·

I am very proud to have worked as an editor on this story. It tells a narrative which is well framed and weaves canon together with new content expertly. In the end, it's a quick read that really helps to flesh out Shining Armor and his rather lacking canon relationship with Twilight.

Thanks to everyone who has taken the time to read and comment on it! Editors love feedback too, you know.

Midnight Rambler