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Dear Princess Celestia,

A month ago, I assigned my students a daily journal as a writing assignment. The intent was to have them think about their lives and how to represent themselves on paper. Three of the journals, specifically those of Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo, and Apple Bloom, contained frightening imagery. After some consideration, I decided that it would be best to send the journals to you, and let you decide what should be done.

Your loyal subject, Cheerilee.

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Comments ( 11 )

WOW! This is goin straight to my favorites!

insta fav and like.... inb4 featured

This is getting more and more interesting.
While it may have felt a bit confusing to me at times, the story is very gripping, which is making me want MOAR! lol

great chapter cant wait to see how you resolve this

and here is the opening for a sequal

1876318 My thoughts exactly...

A friend of mine made a little animation to help me promote the story on my youtube channel. Check it out:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-3kvSU-04SQ

Does this remind anybody else of Lovecraftian Horror?
Amazing writing, something extraterrestrial messing with your head, etc. Perfect tones, great story. Keep up the good work!

Good story :pinkiehappy: I really enjoyed reading it :twilightsmile:

When I first glimpsed the Operator symbol (while converting this for my e-reader) I paused, looked again at the title, read it aloud under my breath and then went "O I C what u did thar!" :rainbowlaugh::raritywink::trollestia::applecry:

Dammit.

It had to be Slender, didn't it?

To be fair, this is well written.

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