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Joined August 2012
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    Closer-To-The-Sun's Stories (35)

    • Dear Spike!
      Twilight Sparkle and the girls all write letters to Spike, expressing their thanks to the dragon

      1,215 words · 296 views · 52 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Love Interruption
      Applejack is feeling down around the farm. But with the help of a small purple dragon, can things turn around?
      2,592 words · 1,229 views · 62 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Divine Intervention
      Rainbow Dash makes a visit to the library to find Spike at home. As the two chat and hang out, Dash is beginning to ask herself some personal questions.
      4,665 words · 1,023 views · 70 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Prolonging The Magic
      After being dragged to a party he doesn't wish to attend, Big Macintosh strikes up a conversation with a purple unicorn.
      7,172 words · 1,464 views · 110 likes · 5 dislikes
    • Fairy Tales
      5,927 words · 760 views · 51 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Combat Baby
      6,476 words · 983 views · 64 likes · 3 dislikes
    • Plush
      3,817 words · 1,382 views · 80 likes · 5 dislikes
    • Whirring
      3,704 words · 796 views · 45 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Love And Mathematics
      4,278 words · 672 views · 40 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Wandering Star
      2,956 words · 921 views · 47 likes · 3 dislikes

    “I'm the first to know, my dearest friends/Even if your hope has burned with time/Anything that's dead shall be regrown/And your vicious pain, your warning sign/You will be fine.” –Angels And Airwaves, “The Adventure”

    Spike has always had a happy existence as Twilight's assistant. He never felt out of place or unloved and couldn't ask for more. However, one night while looking at an old photo album with Twilight Sparkle, Spike asked about his parents. Unable to give an answer to satisfy both of them, Twilight and Spike go to Princess Celestia for help. But will she even know how to answer? What will this lead to?

    First Published
    7th Oct 2012
    Last Modified
    23rd Dec 2012

    Comments ( 6 )

    #1 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Ooh, the adventure starts :rainbowdetermined2:

    But there are things that could have been changed. For example: "Spike was in amazement of the large room. He looked in wonderment "

    You should say "Spike was amazed by the the large room. He looked in awe "

    Also, you wrote "if I my" isntead of " if I may"

    Still, looks promising :twilightsmile:

    #2 · Chapter 6 · 21w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I'm going to take a guess and say that pony is either Celestia or part of some secert group invovled with Spikes family.:rainbowhuh:

    #3 · Chapter 6 · 21w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1838855 Never be to sure about anything:unsuresweetie:

    #4 · Chapter 6 · 21w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1840395

    I'm just grasping straws here. Though I will keep reading to see where this goes.:pinkiehappy:

    #5 · Chapter 6 · 21w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1840481 Well, get comfortable, it's a long story. And I'm writing it on and off.

    #6 · Chapter 7 · 7w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I'm looking forward to see where this goes!:eeyup::twilightsmile:

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