Not bad enough for me to hate you but not good enough to overcome the fact that weve seen hundreds of these. Nice attempt but cant overcome the ironic stigma of being a parody mary sue.

This was the greatest story in the history of forever awesomeness extreme! This fiction is basically art painted with words, the sheer magnificence caused my chest hair to grow 12 feet long and eyes to shoot lasers that caused sexy naked ladies to suddenly materialize. And the mane 6 suddenly came to Earth and turned everyone into ponies and the world hunger and war and stuff was ended. And the moon turned into pure diamond... or something.

Alright, there are way too many of these parodies floating around here. Maybe even more than the actual fics.

But they're all still funny as hell

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This... Oh my Lord, my sides are still hurting from all of the laughter. You, my sir, did an awesome job with this. Feel proud!

HHHHHRRRRRGGHHHHHH TH OC HURTS

Welp, that was one of the best stories ever. Characterisation was just spot-on. You can really see into his inner soul of awesomeness.

Not sure whether to thank him for getting rid of those 'artists' or hate that he took them to Equestria.

This is quite possibly the best parody of black and red Gary Stu alicorn OC characters I have read. Wait, it's actually the only parody of these stories that I have ever read. Either way, I laughed my ass off.

Wait, what. how no? WHyNfjnds WHAT?

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I'm known as the manly reviewer of manly fics, and so is my beard. I've read this story, and let me tell you: this is the stuff of legends. Worthy of being compared to "Stallion Comics". This fic promised manliness and awesomeness, and it delivers them aplenty. My beard is a nitpicky reader, and you pleased it. Feel proud of it. I hereby declare, by the powers that my beard grant me, that this story is MANLY AND AWESOME! Congratulations.

Simon o'Sullivan and beard, TWE's manly reviewers of manly fics

That's just fucken great .it's a perfect parrody of all those stories involving mary sues XD

Fuck it. It's time to get my microphone out and do, dun dun duuuun; A DRAMATIC READING.

inb4 feature

Saw the pic, went 'HOLY SHIT XD'. Now I gotta read it.

Well that was Certainly entertaining XD

This might actually be the (second) best R&BA parody fic I've ever read.

It's a classic. I love it.

The troll fics, they're growing in number

I don't care how evil someone is, but shooting someone in the dick is just not cool

I may have various forms of cancer, known and unknown, now because of this fic....bravo my good sir, bravo.

How original.

The thing that made me laugh the most was the most was the way the OC alicorn was in the cover.

Hes just walking like if he was saying "Out of the way bitches, I got this." XD

More.

Anyways, funny.

It was a towering fortress of power, guarded by only the best and most powerful stallions in the world.

ShadowStriker walked in through the front door.

A plot-hole that actually amuses me!  

Nice work.

Dear lord I loved the tenacious D reference

Ain't laugh, but it was amusing nevertheless

And legends say that if you listen closely, you can hear the author of this fic facehoofing and shaking his head in regret.

That feeling.

I'm starting to get just as sick of stories obviously making fun of Mary Sue alicorn fics than I am of actual Mary Sue alicorn fics. Yes, those kind of OCs are terrible and there are far too many of them, but they've already been made fun of hundreds of times in stories. It's time to give it a rest. We get the idea.

The amount of thumbs ups deserves a face hoof

I fail to see why people still eat up something that is becoming just a cliche as the thing it's making fun of. Sorry to the author if I sound a bit harsh. Perhaps the story really is funny, but I am getting tired of seeing these same kind of parodies so much.

These stories stopped being funny after the 50th one burst onto the front page in a flaming storm of unoriginality. While I too am victim to have written a story like this, I hate to say these stories are no longer as funny as they should be. Other than that, it was pretty good.

I have no words

Still . . . could be worse. You could have been serious about the fic. Now I for one don't hate OC's. If you do it right, you can have an interesting character. As for these people, well... the power of Awesome cannot be used. It's too powerful and could potentially destroy a story.

Remember when parodies about Gary Stu OCs were funny, grammatically sound, and well-paced stories?

Yeah, me neither.

"ShadowStriker LightningFlameShadow was born with a full growth of healthy chest hair."

As I read those words, I knew this was a fanfic made by the gods themselves

I am honestly confused now. Am I supposed to Like this one? Or am I supposed to hate it? I dunno, someone please tell me what's up with this story.

>>14002921400292 Gotta show the newcomers something

Oh wow Mike, you actually wrote this abomination?!

Gotta read it...

What the heck! Don't tag ME as responsible for this travesty of an excuse for a piece of english literature!

Anyway, this...was...hilarious And also shamefully accurate as to what half of the fanfics out there are like...

SHADOWSTRIKER LIGHTNINGFLAMESHADOW LOOKS LIKE DARK DEMON KING RAVENBLOOD NIGHTBLADE

WHAT PART OF DONUT STEEL DO YOU NOT UNDERSTAND OH MY GOD

Seriously, though, this was pretty amazing. I found myself laughing like an idiot through the whole thing. This kind of fic will never get old. Oh, wait, I almost forgot:

THERE IS ALREADY AN ELEMENT OF AWESOME OMG U R WORST THEIF EVARRRRRR

"What a twist!" said M. Night Shyamalan.

This is so much win

This fic needs to come with a suicide knife.

Awesome Gary Stu parody fic. You made me giggle because it used a lot of the Mary Sue tropes in a rather obvious manner.

Kudos to you sir, Have a moustache.

Epic parody is epic.

The only thing that could make this better would be atrocious spelling and grammar errors

So would a dislike be like a like or....  I'm confused at how you would determine the ratings for this story

I love me some good satire every now and then.

Foul! I call foul on this fic!

I had already created a super awesome Marty Stu character called Marty Stu who was the Element of Awesome. I call plagarism on this fanfic even if it was funnier and better than mine which is why you deserve thumbs up but I'm still going to walk away all depressed.

(*walks away kicking pebbles*) It's not fair I tell you.

...I think some people may have thought that this was serious. Which would explain the number of thumbs-down. Maybe Poe's Law was in effect...

But seriously, that was quite amusing. And slightly painful in regards to how accurate it is to bad alicorn OC fics. That's why, whenever I create an OC pony, it's usually... not an alicorn. To be fair, I've only created three so far, all of whom are unicorns and will appear at some point in a fanfic I'm writing...

Sorry, I just had to give it a thumbs down. Not because I didn't like it (I did), but because I needed to maintain the balance.

(The number of thumbs down is half the number of thumbs up. I think it's a nice trend to keep.)

I haven't laughed that hard since the Elements of Awesomery.

(Which is an actual story, which you should go and read.)