Pinkamena Diane Pie never saw the sonic rainboom. It was a simple reason really, but one that changed her life forever. What would have unfolded that very day, had she not had a clear view of the sky when Rainbow Dash exploded the sky?
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Dude, the art's creepier than the real thing. I mean, look at this:
yours makes that one look tame. Nice job.
Now to actually read...
Oh wow, a Cupcakes spinoff. Never seen one of these before! So amazing and original!
1400954 Now all we need is somebody legitimately complaining about humanity's evils.
Yeah, the art's not very good. I don't think you have to worry about it getting stolen.
That art is terrifying.
1400990
You know, the author has made such a deep analogy, showing us the difference between innocent ponies and the warlike nature of humanity through Pinkie's transformation. We all need to be more like ponies, so that we can end the wars and poverty and suffering!
Well, that was.. terrifying.
That is all.
1401372 You know, posting that on every story doesn't help the authors at all.
1402364 I don't post it very often. It's only something I pull out when I really don't want to read a fic. And I'm so sick of Pinkamena stories, I felt like using it.
1402407 So if you don't want to read it, just leave it. You don't have to act like a douche by posting that.
1400954
It's.... it's not a Cupcakes spinoff. Why would you think it's a Cupcakes spinoff? It's just another AU fic. But before you start going on about originality, I do have a twist coming up, one that I've never heard of before.
1401018
*Not sure if you're being serious*
1402445
THANK you.
1401017
Actually, the art is the toned-down draft version. Mwahahahahahaha.
.1400164
I'll take that as a compliment
1400999
I know, it was just a joke.
Apparently, the early earth pony spirits are quite violent.
...how does she do that with hooves?
It's not the worst I've read, and you actually hit enter between paragraphs. Good enough for a "Read later", at least.
1404434
...Um,
...Hmm...
...You make a good point.
Lemme get back to you on that one.
1404681
For extra violence and gore, have her use her teeth.
Wow, 19 dislikes...
....
NEW RECORD!!
Not awful, but there are some serious contradictions in the story. Try to add a little more emotion in the story too, you get somewhat of a feeling of what she feels physically, but you don't get much of a sense of anything else.
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What in the living shits just happened. I mean, I see you want her to go through pain.. But is stabbing her father, tearing out all his veins and arteries, and ripping out his heart good enough for you?!
Well.. I guess it is, in this case.
LOL I give up.
Time to go read Sun and Stars.
Laterz!
Please change the cover image of your story before resubmitting it; I would consider it NSFW, and therefore inappropriate.
1417233
Ouch, okay.
Eh heh...
Well, I want to give it a chance to see where this goes. I mean, I haven't read all those horrible "other" stories everyone must think this is. I mean, nothing's really happened yet.(aside from something that was supposed to happen happening and then something that wasn't supposed to happpen happening
) You can't just assume it'll be the same. Man, put a little faith in the author, why don't you...
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See, this is why you're my friend and they aren't
Oh, so this isn't the original cover art. I was wondering about that, because it's not really that scary...
(How does this have so many dislikes? 
)
Good story, by the way.