This should really go without saying, but. Possible spoilers in the comment section. I'd recommend reading the story first. Though if you don't want to, I guess that's your business.

You've been warned.

That Chapter And Story Title....

dang.

Faved and Liked!

I would like to see more.

Will there be another chapter?

By the way, Smart move , Twilight

P.S Why Fluttershy? Among Everypony, Why Her???

That was unexpected.

I like how you did art for their masks.

Wow. Just wow.

I cant even say anything about that.

-Sent more detailed post in comment to avoid spoilers-

This is probably the best story I have read all night bravo this is awesome! I love a good heist!

This is a good story, in general. In specifics, too no less And, It has an AWESOME plot twist.

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This was intended as a one-shot, so there probably won't be another chapter. Then again, the fact that Rainbow Dash hadn't been caught at the time of writing kinda leaves it open for a sequel. I'm not sure I'll do one, though.

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Forgive me if I'm being a bit thick, but I don't understand which part you mean. Mare guards? Scroll?

I'm sure the story could probably stand some improvement, and I'd like to know exactly what you're talking about.

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I Hope you do so.

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Rainbow_Dash.png

Excellent. That twist is masterful and I was in absolute shock.

Though, I do have this against ya: Formatting. I wish you'd spaced out those paragraphs.

This is a very unique story... to say the least... lol

It's a pitty it didn't include five background characters too... then it could have been called "Twilight's 11" ...

Very much open for a sequel, in many different ways.... (I feel compelled to point out... we don't *know* for a fact that the last two are gone) (trying for spoiler-free hinting...)

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My bad. I still don't really know how to format on this site. If someone was willing to give me a step-by-step tutorial, maybe via PM or something, I'd be happy to edit everything as needed.

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Hmm?.. I guess you're right. If enough people ask for a sequel, I may consider it. But I'm not confident in my abilities to keep the story going in an interesting direction.

I enjoyed this quite a bit.  The main plot twist was unexpected yet believable, and I thought it was very well paced, and I would definitely like to see more.  Perhaps a prequel showing Twilight trying to get into Rarity's good graces would work?

Good story, believable and although it was alternate universe, I thought they stayed reasonably in character. Only thing is I thought it was a bit of an under-reaction from the other 3 after finding out Rarity and Pinkie died, they were best friends!

>>13956651395665 nah, I just meant space between paragraphs. Sorries. It looks great in GDocs and Word, but you get it into the FiMFics and it looks more squished.

IT wasn't that bad or anything.

WHAT A TWIST! Wonderful job, really didn't see that coming.

i did NOT see that coming.

excellent work!

Payday the Heist?

Bitch! Lying, cheating, filthy, little, BITCH!

Also, LOVE the cover art. Reminds me of some of that nice expressionist stuff.

I tip my hat to you, good sir. Well done, I see improvement from your last fanfic.

Awesome, especially liked the masks, very fitting.

Also, they were criminals, didn't feel too bad for em.