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LixiD 8643

Joined September 2012
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    LixiD's Stories (8)

    • Love of a student
      One day. Twilight realizes about one thing that everyone has but she doesn't.

      2,865 words · 317 views · 17 likes · 2 dislikes
    • The Diary
      You have been given a last mission and you're not planning to fail it. You must keep her safe.
      4,161 words · 98 views · 9 likes · 1 dislikes
    • The Dark Side of Life
      There is always someone who cares, but sometimes the someone can be, where you never expected.
      3,575 words · 185 views · 12 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Lovers and liars
      Twlight and RD are in relationship. Nopony knew until a few days ago, when pinkie saw them kiss.
      6,868 words · 981 views · 33 likes · 21 dislikes
    • Blood Tear
      1,301 words · 51 views · 3 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Cutie mark crisis
      10,923 words · 155 views · 4 likes · 3 dislikes
    • Finding love
      2,969 words · 369 views · 7 likes · 10 dislikes
    • Party... Ponyville Style!
      1,197 words · 74 views · 2 likes · 7 dislikes
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    Hearts and hooves day is getting closer and Spitfire has somepony to ask to be her special somepony. Spitfire is about tell her feelings when a terrible accident happens, that changes everything and Spitfire starts thinking: Do I really want him?

    This is not a clop story! I don't know are there any other stories about them, but this is my version. Please don't waste your time commenting about tiny writing mistakes. My first language is finnish, not english, but I try my best. Rated Teen 'cause I think it should be.

    First Published
    7th Oct 2012
    Last Modified
    7th Oct 2012

    Comments ( 6 )

    #1 · 30w, 1d ago · · ·
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    :facehoof:

    #2 · 30w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1491831Why facehoof? :rainbowhuh:

    #3 · 29w, 4d ago · · ·
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    A little cheesy but enjoyable :twilightsmile:

    #4 · 29w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1515016Nice to know! :pinkiesmile:

    #5 · 19w, 4d ago · · ·
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    My report:

    Action - N/A

    Characters - We don't have enough canon information about Soarin' or Spitfire... Thought Applejack, Scootaloo and Apple Bloom were very believable.

    English - Mehh... A few errors here and there, not capitalizing and blah blah blah.

    Final rank - 0/1000 I mean... 1/1000 Damn it... Uhh...   4/10. I'd give it higher... But this isn't my favourite genre of story... The whole romance thing is... Bleuh, to me.

    #6 · 19w, 4d ago · · ·
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    My report:

    Action - N/A

    Characters - Perfect. Nailed it.

    English - Nothing TOO noticeable.

    Final rank - 9/10. I'd give it a 10 out of 10 if you went over and fixed those errors..

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