>>13987321398732 Not believing it until I see it.

inb4pastsins

Sort of turned off by the very short chapters, but I'll read through it and comment again.

>>13989131398913

Hey, I'm just offering constructive criticism. There's never anything wrong with a little C&C. If you write for your own, okay. Great, actually. But improvement is good. If you're going to write, you may as well write well.

BTW, I have written a few Halo FFs, I just don't do too many ponyfics.

Hope this story turns out well. It seems interesting at least :P

>>13989131398913

I'm working on the writing part.

Anyhow, good luck on this story.

>>13987391398739

New story that came out yesterday that has potential.

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>>13993501399350

I'm not rejecting the advice purely on that at all. It's more a timeline for the advice thing for me. I was also never meaning to state quantity was better than quality either. I suppose my message was really meant to say that due to my other fics success and failure, I already had a pretty decent idea of how this one would turn out on FIMFiction by comparing this work to my others. Im the first person to admit this fic is probably my worst one thus far. I know it sucks in comparison to my other stories, which are the ones I care to go over, edit, and review often as I really care about them. I wrote this as is for what I guess you could call as both a show of good will to my old Brony group and a way to complete an already existing idea that I couldn't fully finish on my own yet. I've put a lot of time just into getting this one done to the best extent I could, and not into making it a masterpiece like FoE or others. I'd prefer to just let it sit around for quite a long time, and then perhaps worry about editing and upgrading it then.

I apologize to everyone over how I reacted yesterday. I was not in the best of moods or opinions then. I appreciate the advice and will take the advice to heart at some point, but only once I can successfully move on to other fics from this one for a while.

Goodbye.

>>14014921401492 Cool beans.