Do not judge! I do not choose to be a monster...
My attempt at a gothic fic. An early Halloween treat.
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- Member Since 26th Aug, 2012
- offline last seen May 24th, 2015
The philosopher
I saw a rainboom and smiled! And that's how Equestria was made! Maybe someday I'll tell you about my bio.
The philosopher
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Nooo! Granite, stay in control of your diet!
This was an interesting story, but I think it just needed a bit more fleshing out. More descriptive of Granite (I wasn't sure what kind of animal he was until Fluttershy called him a pony) and a little more exposition of his past actions. But overall, cool concept and nice what you have so far!