I like the idea but the dream sequence I found rather dry in the humor department, but then again everyone laughs at different jokes  and at times it was difficult to tell who was speaking

Looks really promising man! Keep it up! Definitely gonna keep an eye on this.

Octavia Vinyl? YEEESSSSSS!!!!!

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did anyone else notice pinkie pie is in the characters as well?

>>14195781419578 Wow, you are quite the quick thinker (see what I did there?). She's coming soon.

It looks like its going to turn out well!

>>14196031419603

indeed i am

HMMMMMM another vinyl/octy shipping.........Like and fave immediately.

Let's see how it goes.

I won't dislike your story for this, but SERIOUSLY?!?! Why are Octavia and Vinyl subject to ALWAYS be lesbians? I haven't read this, so I may be wrong, but hey. Anyways, after reading this, please check out my page, it would help A LOT.

>>14203491420349

I may not be the author but I might know why. It's kind of like how RD is thought to be lesbian, my point is that they are both female and thought to be bestest of friends (and most fan fic take best female buddy realationship further) that's my take on it at least

>>14203491420349 LOL. It is how it is For me, I guess it's because they genuinely look cute together.

More?

Im thinking Three and a half mares right now

I'm going to be watching. Good job, and just one thing. And here home is a wreck (I believe you mean And her home is a wreck) Other than that, good, and keep it up...I'll be watching...waiting.

>>14203491420349 for one they are cute together and make great clopfic..n. i ecspetially love um because they are my two favorite ponies thank you very much

>>14203491420349 Partly a matter of there being a great many female characters and very few male.

sounds fun I watch and yea the bass cannon awesome shit

BASE CANNON! AWWW YEAAA!!

so basically when octy drinks she becomes like vinyl

^^^^^^^^^ these comment suck ass for someone who is always keeping up to date on thier stories (aka me)  ^^^^^^^

damn internet selling crap through ponies fics

you....... you....... you have a gift good sir and or madem. This is what makes stop my hours of video games and writing my stories just to get some good ol' chuckles KEEP IT UP LIKE FAV AND WATCH

Glad to know that the 'small get-togethers' I attend aren't the only ones with flaming foodstuffs.

>>14228071422807 Ah dude, are you serious

These characters are just a blast to work with huh? Also... Potatoes

Those aside, I do like how you added the,"One beckons three more" drining you gave Octavia. I havent sen that before.

Vinyl x Octavia.

...

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Done to death.  Then had its grave rolled over by a two megaton steamroller.  Then was dug up an incinerated.  Then had its ashes poured into a jar and rolled over again.  Then had its flattened ashes re-buried and sealed away in a fortified bunker.  Then the bunker was nuked from the inside.

Seriously bro, it's overdone.

...funny dream, then dubstep dishwasher?

I might not hate this.

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May as well see where it goes.

So.  Chapter 2.

Octavia's getting drunk?

All I can picture is one of two things happening.

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or

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I'm actually excited to see how the next chapter turns out!

uhhuhuuhuhuhuhuhu u put ur username in the guest list heheehheehhehheheheehheheheh

I like it. And that's just my sanity talking,

Well when pinks arrives you better have more food and wubs

I have read only a little, It sounds beautiful from the part im on. Mah base cannon! octivia is one of my favorites

Read later'd based solely upon the second chapter's title. I hope this will not disappoint me, but by the description, I doubt it will. I shall read! ...eventually!

>>14240191424019 Dude, I feel the exact same way about that "Call Me Maybe" song. I think it's overdone in the radio, but the only thing I can do (other than ripping my ears off) is to change the channel, and hope the song isn't on the next one. So you can leave, or try to enjoy the story

Hold on, in the guest list, I noticed "Jam Rocker."

I think someone is attending parties small get-togethers in your name.

well wouldn't the puppy eyes work since she is wearing glasses?

>>14266721426672 Har har har

>>14216851421685

That is strictly a matter of opinion. Just because you say they're "cute" together makes it no more of a fact than saying 2 and 2 make 5. Pay attention to your grammar.

I for one, scowl at the thought of lesbian ponies.

"Oh look, they're both background musicians! They must be lesbians! What a cute couple!"

Okay, yeah, they're musicians, but in not a SINGLE frame do you see Vinyl and Octavia both. Not even an episode, or half a season. I don't see why we can't all make our own OC stallions and have a nice, straight relationship. That's what I did. Lesbians are actually pretty hard to find in reality, so why is Equestria seemingly overflowing with them?

Also, you don't see any gay relationships in Fim Fiction, and if there was, you'd probably be all like, "This is stupid nopony should be homo", in which case you would be acting severely hypocritical.

Let's all try to make Equestria a better place to be, and stop all this lesbian business. OH WAIT! Every Brony I meet thinks my writing sucks, doesn't leave feedback, NEVER appreciates my artwork, thinks nothing of my opinion or stance in the argument, ALWAYS uses foul language, or gasps at the phrase "oh my God", teams up on me, makes fun of everything I work for, doesn't talk to me AT ALL, and is a total jack-ass in summary. Why do I even try anymore? OH YEAH. 'Cause I'm SICK of every fan of My Little-freakin' Pony discriminates me in every way available. Now I'm going to end this comment, and I swear, if I see you or ANYONE argue with my comment, I will hunt you down, brain your dog/cat, shoot your parents 5 times in the back, and then screw you and your children on National Television. Now I've had a less-than pleasant day. Good. Night.

>>14300551430055 Dude, it's our opinions, and it's your opinions. I'm sorry that it seems you're not having that good of a day today, but we can't do anything with much significance to help with that. I would have a lot of things to argue about the whole lesbian rant, but I don't want my parents shot 5 times xD So I'll leave you with this: Please don't write comments like this and just enjoy the story, or please leave the whole story in general. It seems like you came to this story just to tell us that you hated lesbian shipping.

>>14302721430272

My bad, bro. I shouldn't have done that. It's like one of those times when you say something, and then like 2 seconds later regret it more than anything. You know what I'm saying? Either way, I'll leave now, don't hate me for what I've said here, and fare-thee-well to all.

>>14333171433317 I'm glad this is settled

YAY!!! FLAMING POTATO!!!!!MORE NOW NEED TO SEE OCTY DRUNK

Dude, half my drumline friends are JUST LIKE Vinyl when it comes to parties! "Small get-together! YEEAAH!" One of them actually said this, almost word for word

Now I'm waiting for the  "banging your roommate" part of the decription... (Inwardly hopes the rating will go from Teen ----> Mature

>>14240461424046 Silly. it's both. XD Octy and Vinyl will wake up on the lawn, coitus-interruptus, perhaps with a third mare (or even a stallion!), with the entire apartment building on fire, and a ring of flaming potatoes around them.

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Just going to say that now.

mmmmmm... not sure where its going to go but seems ok

Drunk Tavi is best pony!

Great chapter, can't wait for more!

I saw the title and instantly thought of Amplifyre.

Solid chapter. I like the way you write... its... unique.

Would they happen to be Beatle's referances? She Came In Through The Bathroom Window and just the whole Beetlemania years?

Gotta catch em all....

What're you gonna do, brother, when Vinylmania runs wild on you?

YOU YOU...YOU  BRILLANT MOTHER FUCKER i love you and your story  HAVE A PINKIE, RD, TWILY, AJ, RARITY, AND FLUTTERSHY

   AND WHY NOT HAVE A DERPY

any way one little thing to correct.. A few times instead of pony you say people. It's all fine and good but certan people (like the ones that get all up tight and complain about the word everyone or people or anything not "in character" ). For instance my fan fic had Rainbow Dash curse and someone flipped the shit lid.

Ha

I  am really not sure what to think about it.

At one point you describe vinyl simply awesome. You hit the exact picture that I have of her.

At another point I cant get quite warm with Octavia's "drinking self".. that kinda 's not Octavia, if you get what I mean.

Sure it is fun to read but still kind of strange.

Well also wanted to check up the refferences but there seem to me some winners so im just too late >,<

>>14981331498133 Actually, as far as I checked, nobody got the real references. Chapter 2 and 3 references are still up

Hint hint for everyone: The happy folk approve of the 2nd chapter, and the band name of the 3rd chapter is the name of a mythical creature.... Hopefully that wasn't too much hints.

The second chapter reminds me of the gorillaz song "fire coming out of a monkeys head" xD

Bit I can't finda mythical bandname >.<

Gotta love drunk Octy.

Octy vinyl is my favorite pair in all fanfics and i like the different takes on thier relationships. The omlyd thing that comes close is macdash fics

>>15034141503414 Ding ding ding! If you have an O.C, message me and I'll try to put it on the next chapter somewhere.

"MY NAME'S NOT OCTOPIA YOU IDIOT!"

Lol I cant wait for more!

I love it! Can't wait to read more!

Octopia huh? is that like a Portmanteau that Vinyl created on the spot that basically means that Octavia is her utopia?

Intriguing.

dammit can't find the reference

ohh well you'd probably have trouble working an alicorn into the mix

Hmm would that reference happen to be to the song "Classy Girls" by the Lumineers??

>>16082251608225 Ding ding ding! We got a winner! I thought it was going to be a hard one... I guess wrong Message me about your O.C  if you want him/her on one of the next chapters.

>>16083531608353 Cool, it would have been much harder to get but me and my random youtube searching found it before it started to read the story (read it all in on sitting).

=D

I always knew that I know Octavia.

Thanks for the OC insert!

Was fun to read ^^

Adufsa, that is all.

Love the new chapter! Can't wait for more!

Sweet loved the chapter my friend. Loved the way that presented Highwinds too. Spot on the my little head canon for her, so great job.

Tsk tsk, no other comment yet???

Welcome to Detroit city. Eminem

Do I win?

Edit: Awesome chapter, I love it. Can't wait for more!

>>17913331791333 Oh wait, I'm stupid, this is 99 problem's by Jay-Z, not Welcome to Detroit.

you know those two really need to take the same approach to horror films as i do, route for the bad guy then it becomes an action comedy as you watch everyone try to get away

Here's a little thing you should go fix:

"What's up Frosty?" Vinyl asked the pegasus with a half smile and half confusion. Frosty was the STALLION that worked the front desk. "Pretty good, pretty good. How's are you two this fine afternoon?" SHE pushed the maroon hair to the side of HER face and smiled.

Anyways love the story so far and can't wait for more.

Also, >>17914361791436

>>17919721791972 Oh! What the heck! Sorry, it's fixed... I was planning to make Highwinds just the lobby manager, but then I needed a new character for Octavia to talk to, and Frosty was made as a back up... Forget that ever happened

>>17913331791333 Ding ding ding! You got it on your second try! You still win, any other way Message me the details of any OC you have, and I'll try to get him/her into one of the next chapters. It probably won't be as well-detailed as Highwinds (I just needed a pony for Octavia to talk to, and I remembered I had her), but I will try to not disappoint.

I am definitely fine.Good thing Octy still wonders about me.

LOL

>>17934521793452 Woah! What... What the... Coincidences are so interesting.

xDD

I would've guessed 99 Luftbalons (a german song by Nena) :P

But the one mentioned above seems to make more sense ~

My god, the last part was funny as hell. I couldn't stop laughing as they both screamed from little things in the night

go ahead, go ahead *-* please go ahead :DDD

I have one thing and one thing. Only the trotting dead good story

Dam i done had that octavia I DONE HAD THAT

Another great chapter. Hope you don't drag the relationship buidup out too long. Or rush it. But sorry to hear about the laptop. Never fun. Or cheap. Can't wait for another update.

Through this entirer chapter I was looking for the sock of shame

Oh, that reminds me, I never did send you anything for winning the last one, did I?

Is it still possible, or did I miss my chance?

Also, great chapter; I like the way her eyes glow in the dark :3

Great job yet again

Really really just really all the paranormal activities sucked

Here in your arms by HELLOGOODBYE is it not? Great chapter either way. Loved that it was serious but not super heavy on the feels.

Another cracking chapter. I think you got the pace just right here, and I like how the relationship buildup is gradually coming along... Always that much more rewarding if and when they finally get together. Looking forward to the next chapter already!

God damit were the he'll I s the sock of shame but still very good chapter I like it p.s. I thought that there would be a film falm bros flop but they were girls and like do like and applemac thing but still good but if you make that I would be following you for ever

>>18679651867965 Ding ding ding! We got ourselves a winner. Send me a message about any OC you have and the details on him/her (both physical and personality wise). I'll try my best to put him/her into one of the next chapters.

The forth wall has been broken (Gong Sounds off in the distance as 100 white doves are set free)

Great story so far!

Damnit pinkie stop breaking the wall it costs a lot of bits to fix that and they stopped insuring us after the the whole godzilla gummy thing

>>18929601892960 pinkie has broken that wall so many times that the universe decided to just build her a door to save on repair costs

>>18931691893169

I still never figured what she did with a 100 foot gummy...

I love this story!!! Please update more often, however all of the grammar mistakes(you're means you are, not your) are enough to drive me mad!!!

>>18932051893205 she got mr. zalinski to use his shrink ray on him