In the Near Future, Princess Celestia and Princess Luna are at war. The Celestrians fight for peace and justice, where the Lunarians fight for power and Strength. The Celestians have been force out of Canterlot to the outer reaches of Equestria. Rapid technology development has led to the creation of magic powered blasters and advanced air transports. which are crucial to victory. But the turning point has come. Celestia prepares her forces to retake Canterlot and defeat Luna's shadowbolts forever. But Luna is knows of the attack and plans to destroy Celestial city in the far north. But there is also a third party who has yet to play there hand. Discord has broken free of his stone prison but this time he is hell bent on wiping out everything to re-shape it all to his will. There will be ultimate sacrifices and there will be heartbreak. And hero's who will be made. There is the mysterious seventh element of Harmony which is key to everything.
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I love that movie.
1392125 same here. It's my all time favorite
I almost am required by law to post this
1483641
Thank you.
I have to admit when i was writing this, i was playing most of this in the background
This is a pretty good story.
I do have one problem. In the part where Luna and Celestia are fighting you have this line down.
"Why throw away you life so recklessly, my dear sister." Celestia's voice was even sterner this time.
"That's a question you should ask yourself Luna!" Luna snapped.
Shouldn't it be.
"Why throw away you life so recklessly, my dear sister." Luna's voice was even sterner this time.
"That's a question you should ask yourself Luna!" Celestia snapped.
It is just a small problem that can be fixed
1523190
Thanks. I'll ammend it right away.
play the original movie with this story and god does it fit great
man this was friggin amazing whil listening to the real movie it just fits reall good
1898056 thank you very much.
Thank you for killing shining armour
1923979 He seemed the best choice for the Ironhide Of the story
And almost a year after, I come to post this:
1. Finally a Transformers the movie crossover. 2 I hope to see pinkie pie as wreck-gar in this 3 (reads page on mlp fan wiki) buck Derpy! She doesn't deserve to be hot rod. Either dash or twilight do but this is your thing so I respect you love of derpy. 4 do you have links in this for the songs? Cause I would love hearing Dare to be stupid while pinkie fights dash
My two most favorite ponies the most famous rivals of all time... still pissed off but I like it
That explains why it's Necromoon
1923979 you just continue to make me mad inside don't you Predaking Prime?
Here's something you should at least add for this chapter at "first Celestia"
finished saw there was no sequel planned so i will just lay out what dissapointed me and angered me very much in this...
Cinema Sins style!
1. Luna is Megatron than taken out of the story forever *ding*
2. Shining armor is killed *ding*
3. Discord would never play Unicron thanks to Orson Welles' portrayal. *ding*
Also Orson Welles is dead and that sucks. *2 dings*
4. Celestia dies except i'm not an idiot about the original movie and season 3 of the cartoon of the transformers. *Ding*
5. first Spitfire is grimlock and the wonderbolts are the Dinobots,than Fluttershy and Pinkie pie share the role of Blurr at times, than it's Sweetie Belle and scootaloo who than have the role of Wheelie, while with Daniel it's shared with Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle. Just make up your B**king mind! *ding*
6. The Zebras are killed off and from their portrayal in FIM, their black so that's Racist. *ding*
also no Zecora as Wheelie *3 dings because it fits so well and you didn't do it.*
7. Derpy the accident prone minor character all of a sudden is chosen to be Hot Rod so she can be the new princess is suddenly chosen for it because... Fandom! *10 dings because that logic make no sense*
8. Luna isn't restored by the Element of Unity by Derpy when she uses it even though that didn't happen in the movie that would be really good. *Ding*
9. No video links to any music from the movie even at the best parts from the original. *20 dings because... logical*
10. Everything is sent back to normal like no one just witnessed the death of their leader and twilight and Cadence aren't mourning for Shining Armor's death. *50 DIngs because they should*
all right now i'm good with story with all that off my chest, let us see what you got
Total sins: 92
Sentence.....
Singing
just like the ending of transformers the movie.