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Finally pardoned after ages spent languishing in the Canterlot dungeons (though in fine company, to be fair), Futa Chrysalis enjoys a pleasant day out with Twilight Sparkle.

But the little unicorn has something planned, and she won't say what it is...

First Published
2nd Oct 2012
Last Modified
2nd Oct 2012
#1 · 194w, 5d ago · 1 · ·

I could really get into this wacky Futa Chrysalis and Twilight Sparkle universe...

#2 · 194w, 5d ago · · ·

Hah. this is easily the comedy equivalent of the original's clop. No frills, no real logic, just good unclean fun. Now if only the 2 could be combined somehow...

“It’s not the size of the weapon that matters, Your Majesty,” Chrysalis said

Cadance said that, not Chrysalis.

Also am I the only one who finds the fact that Chrysalis is a futanari in these stories completely redundant? I mean... she's a goddess level mage and a changeling. Having a dick seems kind of an anti-climax, considering.

Also, this is actually the 2nd weirdest Chryslight I've read. The weirdest is this one. But what do you expect from an author who turns Shinji Ikari into NMM?

#3 · 194w, 5d ago · · ·

“Not until you swear that you’ll never be mine,” Cadance said.

??? I thought Cadence wanted Twilight to be hers.:rainbowhuh:

#4 · 194w, 5d ago · 2 · ·

I have absolutely no idea what this is about, but I liked your in-text implementation of trademarking, and I also hate the phrase "Celestia's sun," almost as much as I dislike it when authors refer to Rarity as "the fashionista." So yeah. Gooey fluids, nipping and lapping, and Twilight's milkshake bringing all the girls to the yard. You go Drakmire. Also, the rapier was clearly an épée.

#5 · 194w, 5d ago · · ·

:coolphoto: Vhat... has just happened?

#6 · 194w, 5d ago · · ·

What... What did I just read?

#7 · 194w, 5d ago · · ·

*performes the Yes Dance*

YesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYesYe--...*ahem*

This was great. It REALLY way. Good!Chrysalis needs moar attention. *nods* So, keep up the good work! ^^

#8 · 194w, 4d ago · · ·

....I expected clop and there is none....:pinkiecrazy:i'mma gonna find you

#9 · 194w, 2d ago · · ·

That was a great story :twilightsmile:

#10 · 192w, 1d ago · 2 · ·

This was making sense, and then it wasn't.

Eh, whatever.

#12 · 170w, 2d ago · · ·

Sorry, all  I can  think is "Your Schwartz is almost as big as mine! But let's see how you 'handle' it!"

#13 · 153w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1377286 Twilight just discovered a need to chat with SA about a few things.

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