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Kawa


Lonely asshat, programmer of Noxico, retired ROM hacker, and all-round CHIKKN NI A BAAZZKIT!!!

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Pyrrhic Victory is a time traveller. But how does he do it? Where did he learn to move freely from a future Canterlot to the present Ponyville? It looks like Star Swirl's time travel spell, but really? It's not the same.



Rated T for naughty implications and words.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 14 )

Wow good descriptions. :derpytongue2: I love it. Maybe you can read my story called my day in ponyville

Fifth chapter ready for proofing, and I just split off all the author's notes. If there's one feature of the new FIMFic that I can dig, it's a separate notes field.

ha...! this thing is hilarious! :rainbowlaugh:

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In the interest of writing a better chapter 6 or higher, could you elaborate?

(Joke) Alt. Title: Let's Do The Time Warp Again!

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I like the way you think.

That was a wonderful condition -- I mean discord could really mess things up.

Just out of curiosity, in your cover picture you show a paper with a rather technical formula. Is it a real formula? Did you come up with it yourself? Or is it just scribbles made to fill up the page. It looks real to my untrained eye, and either way it's very impressive! :twilightsheepish:

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E=MC Hammer averted!
It's from the equation of time article on Wikipedia. Not quite as appropriate as I intended, but it's time and it's real long so it'd do. :eeyup:

Hmmm

...It's... good but, it seems a bit flat.

All the Info is there, it just seems to be missing something.

Still going to read the rest of it.

hahaha, I'm enjoying this for sure! I can't wait to see more!

Trollestia Strikes Again!

that part about the glasses reminded me strongly of that scene in Star Trek 4 where Kirk pawns his glasses...

“Stay with Jennie and you will wake up tomorrow morning to face the same hardships as always.”
He took off his glasses and exchanged them for a pair of shades. “Or you come with me, and I will show you exactly how deep this rabbit hole goes.”
For his effort at cheesiness, Vic had a rubber chicken thrown at his face.
“Ow.”

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cute little Matrix reference there!

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