Hey guys, sorry for the horrible start! I promiss next chapter will be consist of more action. Trust me, later this will get good! Anyways, this story will be updated in a week in a half or so. Shoutout to my irl friend Rich for being a great editor and all of my friends that helped and pushed me to my limits! Also, thanks to SpeedyMcLight for the amazing cover art, heres the link http://speedymclight.deviantart.com/art/MANETEAM6-JACKHAMMER-286835621 . Please feel free to ask me questions or cricque me on my work.

Hope you enjoyed,

~Storm_Shaker

Ponies are about to lose so hard.

B52 for the win.

Also, is the Earth at war against Equestria or just one country ?

This is just badly written mate.  The text walls and grammar are agonizing to sift through.  

Go back, give it another go.  

-Chessie

All I saw was spas 12

This needs work.........but has potential.......text walls are hard to scale.....sorry bro.

you give way too much military credit to the ponies

Weapons vs. weapons? Equestria is going to get their asses turned inside out.

You've got a good idea, but you're off to a bad start. You have potential here, just keep working on it. If you need help, I've got some experience writing war stories, and I'd be happy to help however I can.

>>13753821375382 Actually, the humans lose as soon as they run out of fuel, because there are no petroleum sources in Equestria. So they can't keep their war machine going. Also, a tornado or hurricane conjured up by a few weather pegasi can drop a B-52 out of the sky pretty quickly.

I didnt think it was THAT bad of a start. I read a story for a story not grammar as long as i can understand the story line.

If we REALLY want to get technical though. Just the fact that humans had the recources to get to equestria. Whether using portals or space travel.(I believe you said something about planets) Means we would probably have something a little different than petroleum to keep our "war machine" going. But even still i'd like see how Pegasi deal with Earths Air Force. Or how Alicorns deal against an Air-To-Ground missile.(Immortal maybe, Invinsible? No always the same story) and Sgt. Johnson said "They're tough! But they AINT Invinsible"

Also where did ponies get guns?

This is kind of the opposite of what I'm writing.

Except mine kind of makes sense.

Why... why would Celestia declare war on humans??? PONIES ARE PEACFUL!!

Well, for a first try it wasnt that bad. Again, I know it was poorly written and will talk with my editor about that... Like I said I have a good idea for the next chapter and I will hopefully get a new editor. Anyway, Some people liked it some people didn't its really a form of what you like and dislike. But I do appericate the comments on my fic whether bad or good. I know this is a sorry excuse but it is my first fic, so cut me a bit of slack. Im currently writing chapter two and have a good idea going, and hopefully a better editor. If anyone wants to help edit please message me! I could all the help that I get.

Thanks again,

~Storm_Shaker

>>13753821375382

Should have explained it more, sorry! The whole Earth is at war, which you'll see in the next chapter :D

>>13755721375572 quit reading my mind

Havent you heard about shit about the atomic bombs ?Earth will need 3 to conquer them

>>13979451397945

Intresting theroy.... :p

>>13979451397945 Pegasi and unicorns can use their powers to send the bomb back.

Pegasi - tornado, launching the bomb back up.

Unicorns - levitation, sending the bomb to the Human ships and bases.

>>14646991464699

Exactly Whose side are you an any way ?

9/10

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r a inbbow

Well, HUGE DELAY but finally chapter 2 is here! Huge thanks to smoers06, without him this chapter would have been way worse. Also, I hate to admit it but I had this ready for about 12 days now, just no time to get to it. But It is here! With my John project going on this will be delayed, but will be done! Enjoy, and go here for awesomeness!

http://www.fimfiction.net/user/smoers06

P.S- Not sure if I should romance this story.... Opinions?

>>14646991464699 Plus we Have Sentry standing our place so we dont die , controllable roctets to steer away from the tornadoes Tanks  Mini Guns .Weapons ,We  probably have diseases that they aren't immune to   we have Spy planes to search them out , they fly up in the air and get shot down Predator Missiles  Land Mines They are strong enough to pick up weapons like Sub Machine,Shot Guns ,Pistols,Sniper But not really Heavy Duty kind of suff AC-130u  Police Dogs and Nukes  

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IMPORTANT PEOPLE DIE!!!!