This is just a sample of my writing style.

This story was an entry for Fluttershy writer for the visual novel Starswirl Academy.

I won't be doing any edits unless there's a blazing error.

I'd enjoy any critiques or comments to help me improve my writing.

I've got my second entry and a third unfinished story but unless people really love these, I probably won't be writing more of these.

Thank you,

Accie

This chapter is actually the story I submitted for the second round.

Sadly, I wasn't chosen.

Any critiques or comments to help me improve are welcomed.

the story is going perfect in my view keep it up your gonna go far kid gotta love music referances

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Thank you kindly.